★Call of Duty Black Ops - Firing Range Domination - (AbandonedEdits) (1) +TGNTV

[tgnFPS]

Don't Sound like your reading a Paper, but good video.

[AbandonedEdits]

@tgnFPS thank you very much! It means alot!

[ThatOlNegro]

Good commentary

[KingGuddles]

Bro its about the gameplay.

1- use your own gameplay

2- talk about the gameplay

3- you need to be committed, not a one video director.

4- turn down game sound a tad

[AbandonedEdits]

@KingGuddles alright thanks

[TheeTryHard]

@KingGuddles It's not all about the gameplay. You can either have a rocking gameplay or a rocking commentary. Look at the community today, no one talks about the gameplay anymore or gives tips. It's about the commentary now bro.

[AbandonedEdits]

@marcujerk901 ?

[IamMrGiveaway]

good video man goodluck:)

[AbandonedEdits]

@IamMrGiveaway thanks

[gamingsensation1]

Nice man! idk why 4 dislikes

[SyrupHut]

I love this guy, make him a Jr. Director ;)

-Syrup (TGN Director)

(One thing though, perhaps get another mic ^_^ )

[AbandonedEdits]

@SyrupHut yeah I am getting another one!

[FuMeHyPe]

Very good commentary

[AbandonedEdits]

@FuMeHyPe thanks man!

[MrDd28]

Get rid of the white noise

[thatliljester]

mah gameplay :) and @NBPPadwani1h calm down breh i was having fun and just because i jumped off of something once and did a spin doesnt mean i was trickshotting

[AbandonedElite]

lovin it bro!

[PorthorianTv]

Great video but you need to get rid of the white noise it is your enemy :P But great video. O and you made the gameplay volume overpowering compared to your commentary lower the audio of the gameplay a ton. Add some music to :P so you could have breaks for you to swallow or what ever.

[AbandonedEdits]

@PorthorianTv Thanks for the tips! I am getting a new mic that is better for my 2nd video. Otherwise I will listen to your other tips!

[cam51037]

Here's the last tip from me, try not to sound so monotone in your next video, but that's about it! Good luck, and I hope you become a part of TGN!

[mizik2011]

Along with what the others said, have fun when you do commentaries. If you do something that you don't find fun, it'll show. Not saying your not but its just a tip. Also, in your next video try to talk about something that'll engage your audience.

[AbandonedEdits]

@mizik2011 by engaging my audience do you mean like asking questions? also thanks!

[cam51037]

@AbandonedEdits Have an engaging topic, like about a new game coming out, or a new add-on, or patch, etc, etc. Questions would be good too though!

[AbandonedEdits]

@cam51037 alright thanks! I will tell people to comment questions below for a q&a in my next vid. Is that good?

[cam51037]

@AbandonedEdits Or you ask them a question and tell them to respond in the comments with their answers.

[cam51037]

I'm not sure also if you took the white noise out of the background of your mic, but if you didn't, you should take it out next video.

[AbandonedEdits]

@cam51037 I didnt and I will in my next video

[cam51037]

Here are some tips: It sounds a lot like you're reading exactly from a script, try and read off your mind, but have jot note reminders for your talk topics

-Turn down the game volume! It is extremely loud for the commentary!

-Next time try and use your own gameplay, it'll be much better because it's your gameplay. If you didn't have a good gameplay that day, wait until you do get one until you post a commentary

Hope you'll improve, and I might be posting more criticism later!

[AbandonedEdits]

@cam51037 Thanks so much man, it wasnt scripted I was just pausing and thinking. Also I will turn down the game volume :)

[NBPPadwani1h]

Gameplay Wise, you didn't play Objective at all, second you're trying to trickshot.

Commentary Wise, have an idea of what your trying to say before you make the vid, you kept correcting yourself, and it got kinda annoying.

[AbandonedEdits]

@NBPPadwani1h kk thanks. also it was my friends gameplay.