Unexpected - Oneshot

[berrysis3]

this was rlly good:) keep up the good wrk i love ur stories:):)

[lrx001]

really good!

[purplecutie131]

This is amazing(:

I adore it.

I really would like if you continued it, maybe it'll make you writers block go away? maybe? possibly?hopefully? I certainly hope so(:

Anyways, enough of this rambling, post more of this PLEASE! :P

Oh, and if you do post more (i wish you would) Umm, I think it would be better off as a normal story, not a fanfic. just my opinion though(:

Once again, amazing(:

[eskimogirl147]

ong sounds soo cool

post soon

[jonaslovex2]

ohhhhhh counds good =] i like it =]

[tomcatz892]

that was amazing you are such a talented writer... you should keep going with it, may be writing this will help you get over your writers block... you should keep it going

[Shay081793]

really? 9 times? What the hell is wrong with you?!

[Shay081793]

no.

[erickaandemily]

awsome

[briblanche]

ohh okey thanks

[kookoobb]

This was good :)

[cutierose1234]

Hmm, I could actually see this as some sort of Thriller, suspense type of story. Or maybe Horror, it depends what you would include in with the main characters. :)

Still, this was amazingly written.

I agree with you, if you ever wrote this (and I think you should ;D), it wouldn't be right to have JB in it.

This doesn't seem the fanfiction type.

Again, amazing. You're an incredible writer, don't ever give up on yourself. :)

Love you Bob xxxx

[hoopz10195]

It doesn't have to be a Jb one to be good, my dear... (I'm using big words to get over my stupid depression) Your got a talent that all of your readers want, to be so diligient (I think that's the right meaning) with words, and creative with your words.

You should definatiely continue though, because maybe it'll hep get over your writers block??? Hopefully anyway...

peace, love,.... Jessica (: haha, made it my own (:

[yaytotallyfunkykiwiG]

its really good!!!

[coeyjbfan93]

awesome!

[briblanche]

i like it what type of camp did you go to?i wanna knwo the story of the mystery key i think it would be cool if you kept on writing this story then maybe youll get an idea for untitled longing eigther way your doing great write soon(:

[Shay081793]

Frenchwoods Festival :)

[MissNickJonas19921]

Wow your an amazing writer (:

One question;Is it a JoBro fanfic too or just a story? I'll read either way :D

[Shay081793]

i'm not sure if it's going to be anything more than a One Shot... Hence the title ;)

But if it IS going to be longer, I doubt it'll be a JB one..

[cecesingergrrl]

wow :) that was so so good. I have to know what happens. please post more when you can :D

[o0LIVI4]

wow, this is amazing :D

[sarahsmoothie123]

i like this!!!

[misslyss96]

woah. PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!! :D

[StarzzColiideeexD]

D:

you should totally make this into like a mini series or something!!

[Isabelleziden]

I agree

[berrysis3]

same!!!!

[EliANDLilmel]

Thats crazy! I mean, you are gifted... I mean if i had to write this, it wpuld have been: cute house, let's go inside. Nobody's home? Cute box, hey, it's a key... She ran home.

Well... I guess i'll just stop to do that... Not exactlyy my cup of tea

[iloveconnor14]

wow this is amazing

[PurpleDragon1312]

ok you seriously have to finish this! I lurvves it!

[NickJonasFansite101]

Amazing :) it's kinda confusing at this point but i like it

[xxlilxxkweenxx]

You're an amazing writer!

[xxDasweetiexx]

Omg loved it i'm wondering what's the key for haha

[JkaGirl]

MORE !

[jessicannamaria]

There's no question about it; you're an amazing writer! :)

<3

[madison50364]

It was great. It had that quality of wanting to be a horror story and a mystery. I believed that so much that I thought she was going to stumble upon a dead body or something. Haha.

I wonder what that key is for. There are so many lingering questions. It makes the one-shot so obscure and dark.

I loved it. I'm glad you posted, even if it wasn't the story.

[xxlillianxx19]

wow

[StillLovingMe1]

omg i told you this was going to be amazing

[MakeItLovely]

aweesoommmee [:

it's soo coooll

wonder what it's all aboutt [: