Really good story. I think I would change the intro slides so their not in the first person--it makes it seem like he's making this, not you. The photos were good, and otherwise my only criticism is the length. It might be a good idea to cut out some of the more repetitive images that look the same. Good job!
he came to my school today
kiwidukey 3 weeks ago
Love this kid! Met him here in OKC and we found out we are cousins! Love the word he is spreading; and an amazing talent.
Kathwan1 5 months ago
Really good story. I think I would change the intro slides so their not in the first person--it makes it seem like he's making this, not you. The photos were good, and otherwise my only criticism is the length. It might be a good idea to cut out some of the more repetitive images that look the same. Good job!
14smeisner 2 years ago