I know this is a little on the late side, but I'd like to put my two cents in. The tone is overall consistent, but some of the shots don't flow very well. For example, the phone conversation at the beginning wasn't quick enough. I'm in no way an expert, but something I noticed. Other than that, I kind of enjoyed your flavor of humor in this vid.
Well good job on your first project:) I just noticed that you asked for some input from that other guy so I thought i'd go for it. I'll take a look at your other stuff, I'm sure it's great:) I got here by searching for 'GS150' lol
That chick who had the lead role had really nice earrings. I also liked that she was willing to do full frontal nudity.
AmoreenaWade 8 months ago
I know this is a little on the late side, but I'd like to put my two cents in. The tone is overall consistent, but some of the shots don't flow very well. For example, the phone conversation at the beginning wasn't quick enough. I'm in no way an expert, but something I noticed. Other than that, I kind of enjoyed your flavor of humor in this vid.
ShawnaLoveums 3 years ago
This was the first project I ever filmed and edited. It taught me tons. Check out some of my other videos and check out the "Fiasco"
bkennedy 3 years ago
Well good job on your first project:) I just noticed that you asked for some input from that other guy so I thought i'd go for it. I'll take a look at your other stuff, I'm sure it's great:) I got here by searching for 'GS150' lol
ShawnaLoveums 3 years ago
No criticism of camera work, writing, or overall tone?
bkennedy 4 years ago