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  • needws more detail,better spelling/grammar, and a better discription of the plot, but over all very good concept and lesson(: keep writing!

  • thats sad but becuz he said "ummm yeah sure" i would be like nvrmind!

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  • hahaha......... why would you ask for a ride from someone you THINK goes to ur skool...? :P like.... i went to go rescue my boyfriend and he lives three miles away from me. i walked it. id rather walk THREE MILES then get a ride from some dumbass you dont even noe... ****but this is a god lesson XD****

  • I Like The Font

    

  • Wow this was sad :/

  • Hey guys! Its Blondii103. Check out my new page thats up to date! :D Thanks!

  • If I ever do something as stupid as that or die with a friend I want to be buried by her or him!!!!

  • wow im not stupid enuff 2 go in a strangers car no matter wat circumstances

  • See, this is why I look at all the wanted people on the websites for rapping, kidnapping... You name it. Hey, you can call me paranoid, but I'm just being safe.

  • I liked it alot

  • im not quite sure i like this video... i mean they could try and spell things correctly....

  • I have 3 points. 1 is the fact I don't partically find this a sad story but sort of a warning vid. 2 it is very true you shouldn't get into some guy's car even though he/she may look like someone from school and 3, you did a good job on this vid keep it up x

  • I'm sorry but writing is not you're talent.. And you misspelled alot..

  • dumbb

    

  • I'm sorry but this was horrible

    To make it worse you can't even spell

  • im confused and this isnt true! wat this is shett

  • this is sooo sad and such a good story u might be a great writer one day! keep it up

  • omfg yuh guys are fucking retared bcus if dey do die fo reals yuh guys are going to be crying!

  • this is y i carry a gun. i seen this on the news.

  • that is really sad:(

  • @TiaNicoleCassidy its not sad, they made it up

  • @BVBGurlzx1 lol good job

  • OK THIS BROOKE N ABBY R TOTAL DUMB BITCHES OK EVEN IF A GUY GOES 2 UR SKOOL N U DON'T ASK 4 A RIDE IF U DON'T NO HIM EVEN A 9 YEAR OLD LNOWS THAT!!

  • @98rani that what i was thinking x x

  • ur video was gd i loved it i get the point of bot goin into a strangers car nd it really sends a message 2 every 1 that watches this and i wouldnt go into a strangers car

  • @mmmyw4 what did you do before? you made it sound like you did it but since you saw this video you decide to not to

  • Not the best story, but it is a really good message they are trying to send out to people.

    so good job brooke and abby.(:

  • very very true. good lesson. i cried when i read this. so sad. :(

    there are very sick people out there like that. ood that people who watch this know the lesson. never forget it. GOOD JOB!!!!

    :(

    i feel like crying again.......

  • All I have to say is, as good as the story is, text talk is kind of bothersome. If you did a little revising, there are webistes detected to stories people make themselves like fiction press.com

  • It shouldve said they were in coffins...like the best friends forever...and that never ends....esspecially when your...ALIVE..... They lived the rest of their lives together in a big house

  • That's sad, I'm 11 I know how to kick a man in the balls or if i'm drunk and in the car I'll look for the gun then a long quiet silence I grab after the gun and shoot him just enough to hurt him for a while then call 911 and take him to jail :)

  • you should publish that

  • and this is sad?...... really bad story too....

  • i thought that it was reall i was about to cry but then i saw that it wasent reall i was ok good but im not gonna go with somone idk u cabn trust me on that

  • oh my gosh i thought it was real

  • wow dhem gurls is dumb..

    how dhey going ask a stranger fo' a ride...

    dhah man could hav rapped em'....

    anyways dhat wus a lil bit sad =l

  • i liked it and it said they were in bags with blood READ RIGHT!!

  • Even though it wasn't a real story..yu sent a strong message & I know a couple of girls that would hop into a car without knowing that person..So Good Story

  • this is stupied!

  • this is sorta how my friend died.

  • @imisshabbooldtimes awww I am so sorry i feel bad now. I hope you are okay.

  • 0:02 , my name is brooke! :)

  • girls dont ever do shit like that cuz i had a girlfriend that did that and those guys dont play around. the shit is sad but i found my girlfriend 8 days after she got kidnapped and she was alive but she did manage to keep her fone and she took a pic of him to. ud be suprised how much pain he was in. if u get kidnapped and survive mange to keep a pic of him and show ur boyfriend i bet he will go kick his ass just like i did to the gy that kid napped my girl

  • I loved the story thō

  • tht was really sad and wen I saw the piics I thought it was a real story!!! tht is really sad thō!!! :( peeeaaaccceee!!

  • This was close to making me cry. The thing that dident was how u put a damn ! after every sentence. THERE IN COFFINS!!! BLOOD EVERYWHERE!!! what about

    There now in coffins... (Dots mak everything beter.)

  • it's alright except for the ending were it says it not a true story like duh ofcorse it's not true

  • dis story LMOST MADE ME CRY. I LEARNed my lesson but kind of scary

  • I would have liked more detalis while they were kidnapped by the man..

    They died so soon that it was predictable..

    But the story is very good.

  • very very nice its realy good!

  • Thank you...I''m a kid. you gave me a good lesson ;D

  • it seems realy but not with the real ppls names!!!!

  • the vidoe is ok but why did you add a pic in there that was scared me not the story and i didnt really think is was that sad i thought i was like some think they will do in a cartoon not in real life xxx and how old are you x

  • not a bad story but next time hold up the exclamation points lol

  • 1. theyre stupid for getting in the car

    2. Nice video

    3. that was so predicable

    4. why so much elcamation pointz

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  • coolio

  • So predictable

  • its a little kiddish to me doesn't seem real or that it could happen that way at all

  • Its not sad but its really good!!

  • ok..

  • I'll look after you by the fray :)

  • why so sad

    *cries*

    good story actaully

    wat is that song called in the backround

  • nigaaaaaaaaaaa stfu this stori can suk my 10000000000000000000000 dollllla foot long and if ur a gurl ill be like rapes u in da mouthe then slaps wid my dingaling biach but if ur a dude then forget wat i said

  • excuse me?

    who are talking 2

  • who ever you are your a dick and a pedo so fuck off youtube thanks love ya xx

    (not) xx

  • Loved it!

  • whats the name of that song?

  • wasnt that sad

  • hey are you girls sisters

  • wow..

  • if brooke and abbey are dead how did they do this viedeo then ???

  • they arent dead the made it up read the ending

  • brooke and abbey rn't dead. The story is fiction but they used their own names in the vid.

  • well..abby and brooke were two messed up localz going into a car they dont know of

  • sincee yu madee diss up ; ima qive yu yahh propss ; ! & duntt listenn ta whatt othaa ppl qotta sayy . keep it up ; yu miqhtt be a qood writerr onee dayy .

  • @mweezy123 Let me fix your sentence

    Since you made this up I will give you props! & don't listen to what other people have to say. Keep it up you might be a good writer one day

    Learn how to spell

  • vry obvious

  • [[this is muh opinion so dun flip]]

    why would youh even get into a persons car youh didnt no. wtf? if youh do then youh must be really retarded.o_O

  • this video was reallyyyy stupid and obvious.

  • that was supposed to be sad??!! It was a good protective behaviors video but not really sad!

  • i was about to cry and it was a verry good story

  • this is a stupid video everybody already knows not to do tht

  • this is really gay!!! i already knew thatt!!! hahaha nothing that STUPID wud actually happen!!!!!!!

  • Howw Sickk !

  • soooo sad:P(

    de bitch killed herself:(

  • please do read this!in 1971 a guy named kyle an his girlfriend emily were in side a house that was said to claim peoples lives if they entered the house.the next morning a guy named alex saw fingernail marks on the door.dont post this to 5 videos,and youll be getting a visit from kyle and emily tonight!warning:this has been proved to be real,i value my life!whoever reads this may god be with you! i truly do apologize!!

  • 1.take ur middle finger and put on ur nose.

    2.say a name of someone u like.

    3.that person will ask u out or say they love u tomarrow.

    4. heres the thing copy and paste to 2 other vids

  • Lol shit bag! best line of the video XD

  • i got into a car with someone i did not know an me an my friend were totally fine but i think i puked in his car an he let us out but i waz really drunk an dont really remember what happened

  • Well everyone else may think it is bad but i think is good :)

  • omg this is so sad jkjk it was stupied

  • what is this song called

  • Look After You by the Fray.

  • Ooohhh that vid was good.. And stupidd.. Well I have one reasonn nd tht is: U shudnt get in a mans car anywayy.. Onlii if u dont know themm,, U only get in if there ure familyyy LOL x

  • WTF how daft wood u bee to go up to a randum and ask for a lift ?:S lol

  • this video as ok but couldve been WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY better! sorry brooke & abby!

  • Hey. Word of advice. The things that you are saying are not what you would say or do in this situation, and also the way you are saying things, they are slightly childish. Its an ok video for warning people, but you need to mature up a tad before making any more

  • this is a good sad story

  • :) good vid.

    by the way.; whats the song called

    i like it :):)

  • i dont think you should of put ur pictures up there and im not big with the cussin

  • omg this is soo sad

  • o. i c how its sad but i didnt like cry?

  • so sad

  • sure you made a point but to lie about you two diening was not a good idea you should have found or used a real story!

  • Wow good video guys, thats all i can say x

  • WOOOW YOU are a good person keep doing this videos u may save somebodys lifes ---- all good luck to u (: (:

  • That was well good ive sertinly learnt my lesson.

    x

  • I think it was good lesson for all kids out there

  • How can you be found underwater with Blood on you?

    hmmmm

    this story was SO WELL put together!

  • well c i dont see u have any videos! And u didnt read it right! It didnt say blood being underwater or anything

  • i says they were found in bags under water with blood on them

  • @Blondii103 sorry didnt mean to click that button and i agree with u about the blood and stuff - nice vid

  • @Blondii103 ummm... actually it did

  • because they where in bags so the blood sunk to the bottom of the bag

  • @LaRoland123091 well maybe it's because the bags were tied up and the blood was trapped in the bag. But you still get the point so the stry is a good story

  • Wow i think a lot of people will learn now, and i thought you guys really did get kiddnapped, that scared me, and i ahte sick dirty people that like to rap kids our ages and kill them like who in the hell would want to do that sericously, think about it its gross and mean,

    BUT i really liked this video well done.!

  • cool story! which one is brook and which one is abby? whoever is the blond one i like better because im a dumb blondy

  • im the blonde one lol im brooke abby is my friend

  • so u make a vid about u 2 dying? =[]

  • i think this story was sad but next time dont use ur selfs as an example... cause it was even more sadder....

  • its awesome :) its not really sad but theres a lesson .. ! keep doing ur thing :) u rock!

  • esta chingona

  • i thout it was a good lesson and wonderfoul i started to cry me and my mom and this man tried to kiddnaped me and my friend but she wanted to get in the car and i said no now shes hunting me lol just kiddind but a good vidoe

  • GOOD STORY YOU GUYS ARE PRETTY!!!

  • aww thank u lol thats an old pic tho

  • i know it not true but has it happened to those people

  • I agree its great video and it has a point...:) well done.

  • good story

    and it has a point x

  • hey that was really good

  • not reeli sad, but good mssg/moral.

  • that was saddd i mean sad ='(

  • eww sad and scary

  • great story...gives a pretty good msg and it's sad...

  • that was good nd sad hope ya'll do more

  • oh... did you make the story?

    it was a good one =)

    and sad

  • oh lol that is s sad:( poor kids they really wanted to go to the party

  • it says at then end of the video not a tru story and ur still alive

  • it didnt happen to me... i couldnt put the peoples real names so me an my best friend put our names in it caz we made it...!!!! =]=]

  • Shes a force ghost

    The force is strong young skywalker.

  • i agree tho they should have known better but its sad i can guess what happened and its bad i bet u all can GUESS WHERE HE IS GOING (hell)

  • I Thought This Story Teaches All Of Us A Lesson, No Matter Who You Go With

  • Yi agre with u making tis vid. bit its a bit sick that it aint real. and u used ur pictures in their? weirdo

  • how am i a weirdo?? wtf dont say shit u dunno for a fact!! THS IS A TRUE STORY IVE SAID IT TOO LIKE OTHER PEOPLE... learn to read...... an i only put 1 pic! big deal...

  • OMG IS THIS TRUE???????

  • Cool video!

  • wat is the song called

  • wow that was sad but very dramatic!

  • That was a good story..

    And very true.

  • Clean my basement

  • What!????

  • I thought that this story was really good. Good Job!!

  • heyy!!!

    this video was awsumm :]]

    wait, is this a real story??

    nd is it based on you?

  • damn, i loved it =]...yu shud do more like this aswell

  • i wud of jumped out the car fucc that lol!

  • read the description!! great video guys xx

  • If you 2 died in this story then how did you make this video?

  • wow alot of u ppl dont listen... this is a real story BUT NOT THE REAL PPL!!!

  • that was gey...

    - christina

  • aup son ow are we oi can u do me a massive can u tell me who plays this song ?????? thx m8

  • ohhhh wow i thought i was very very sad

    but good job thought

  • it was good...but why would you write it about yourselves??

  • Um maby cause its my story an i can!?......

  • luuv this song

  • with cuts and blood lol that part was stupid

  • i cant really c how that is supid but okay!?

  • lol its a gd its very cachy and ope u do sum mor gd 1.s C.R.A ALL DA WAY

  • Good Point and Im glad this isnt true

  • well no it IS true but its not true with me and abby in it i ment its not true with the people in it but ths story is true!...

  • Oh then that is sad

  • i dont make them up stupid these storys i make are experiences i have or had in the past years! Some of them are made up but only for a purpose! If u dnt like it dnt comment em!

  • OMG. I liked it a lot. It was coo.

  • is it a true story?

  • OMG THAHS ALL I CAN SAY OMG

  • this video is fuckin stupid and you guys

    r ass ugly

    so get a fuckin life lololololol

    and if you have bfs there probally ugly like you

    and if your worried then wow you must worry way to much!!!!

  • then u need to get off my profile and dnt watch my videos dnt use tht language~!thxxx

  • wow i will never do that in my life some prantes dont even care

  • i need alot of people to look at my am i pretty story also! It is a strong story people need to watch includint girls who dont believe in themselfs! thanks!

  • Woww !! Thankss For putting this on here ! ii Hope People Do Realize !

  • dude that rocked it wazz so good im glad u care so much bout that kind of stufff...