entertaining video! my names Jenna, kinda feelin bored if any1 wants to join me on cam or wana chat i will be signed on at __ FriendlyFlirts(.COM) __ my user ID there is Jenna_dzzgcdfownbh chat soon xx its FR33 to j0in! mwah
Nice video! my names Mackenzie, kinda feelin bored if any1 wants to join me on cam or wana chat i will be signed on at __ FriendlyFlirts(.COM) __ my user ID there is Mackenzie_dcqha chat soon xx its FR33 to j0in! mwah
Hmmm....I didn't understand the plot too well. But it was pretty good otherwise. Decent acting and great atmosphere, but the sound seemed to be uneven at times. Overall, it was good.
I think the jacket was supposed to be her body which she just let fall and left behind. Stanley was her dead husband who took her off into the afterlife.
I saw your movie had the same title as mine so thought i would check it out. Good lighting, i like the black and white. Sound was uneven and i didn't understand the story or the event. The lead actors had a good look to them like Bogart and Grace Kelly. Keep producing you seem to have a nack for it!
Great video, although sound was a bit rough, (that's usually my biggest problem too). Otherwise great job; but since sound counts I can only give you 4 stars. Damn, I'm such an ass.
nice video, only weakpoints are the audio...when you cut between shots, don't mute the audio...or if you are going to do that, you need some kind of noise/background sound track that can stay constant in the background that's as loud or louder than the background noise the camera's mic picks up, so you don't hear the audio drop in and out...also the music should be a little bit quieter because at some points it drowns out the dialog
I liked it, it's very twilight-zone-esc. The script was good. But..Watch the focus, again. It kept cutting in and out on the REALLY long shot. I liked the main guy, but all the rest of the actors were not very good (particularly the nurse woman). It was also kind of strange because it was really ultra over the top. Then it got to be kind of not, but the dialogue still was... It was a bit uncomfortable, but I'm sure you'll get better with practice, and it wasn't bad anyway.
BEAUTIFUL. beautiful dialogue. My favourite video of all times. I wonder what had inspired you... That was really really good. I love how they walked away and left the jacket on the beach. The ending dialogue I had kinda expected because I was assuming right from the start who he really is... and in the middle when they talk about death it was a little bit confirmed;) SUPERB!
the dialogue I am assuming is a code and convetion of Film Noir....I may be wrong...heaven knows I may end up making films worse then this one. I kinda like it. Not bad not bad at all
You just came on too strong with everything; the music, the acting, the dialogue. It was all so poetic and dramatic that it was cheesy and misconstrued. People at any age don't talk that intellectually, I don't care if it is with their dead lover.
That old lady was sure hot when she was young :P
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va1d3z 3 years ago
Oh...it was good ! I read the story in the "about this video" section and I found it really interesting ! Nice try ! Keep doing such good videos !
fredoula 4 years ago
Hmmm....I didn't understand the plot too well. But it was pretty good otherwise. Decent acting and great atmosphere, but the sound seemed to be uneven at times. Overall, it was good.
TheGovernmentMan 4 years ago
very nice!!!
titablisco 4 years ago
It would have been cool to show the jacket lying on the beach for the closing.
amjPeace 4 years ago
I think the jacket was supposed to be her body which she just let fall and left behind. Stanley was her dead husband who took her off into the afterlife.
simonxag 2 years ago
whoa...bad acting
amy1827 4 years ago
I saw your movie had the same title as mine so thought i would check it out. Good lighting, i like the black and white. Sound was uneven and i didn't understand the story or the event. The lead actors had a good look to them like Bogart and Grace Kelly. Keep producing you seem to have a nack for it!
Jacket81 4 years ago
Great video, although sound was a bit rough, (that's usually my biggest problem too). Otherwise great job; but since sound counts I can only give you 4 stars. Damn, I'm such an ass.
THE RED
BestReadBlind 4 years ago
BORING AND VERY STUPID!!
betita11 4 years ago
Your videos are interesting. I need some time to understand them. I think they are in David Lynch style. I like it.
abcsaba 4 years ago
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@iMaiden, why don't try your fuck in 'ON THE LOT'. You will make it.
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@iMaiden, why don't try your fuck in 'ON THE LOT'. You will make it.
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@iMaiden, why don't try your fuck in 'ON THE LOT'. You will make it.
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@iMaiden, why don't try your luck in 'ON THE LOT'. You will make it.
tristmagistus 4 years ago
ur videos r good
thetubulartrio 4 years ago
i think its wierd. and i mean it
Smileylover94 4 years ago
your videos are very impressive!
SamProbst 4 years ago
So sweet. The girl reminds me of Summer Glau.
bekados 4 years ago
spirituel why not:) I liked it so much.
speedypuffy 4 years ago
I loved this movie until the end. Very Pensive...
sugarpacketchad 4 years ago
oo very mysterious.. only love can cure. such a pain!!
beautiful i love it
Danipie37 4 years ago
This is a very nice piece. I like it.
@iMaiden, why don't try your luck in 'ON THE LOT'. You will make it.
simpleyesa 4 years ago
thats good the middle drags on so much though
LightningPeeps 4 years ago
thx for sub. good films i wish u well
shortphonefilms 4 years ago
i like good plaing of actors? Thay are professionals?Can we work together?
MagestyMaster 4 years ago
Very cool but the women's voices are too faint or they're not speaking clearly. But good overall scary feel of the picture!
Peppermint1982 4 years ago
Oh, ghost!
feideepking 4 years ago
That was weird.. lol
Xxkim15xX 4 years ago
i stopped watching at like 1:55 when the kissing didnt happen
MrPockets197 4 years ago
boo...yeah it does kind of drag...they kiss at the end.
imaiden 4 years ago
i dont wanna see it..
MrPockets197 4 years ago
Excellent stuff
Redman596 4 years ago
foo! yes! o-o!
MagestyMaster 4 years ago
Lube it!!!! Awesome shit mother fucker!!!!!
wickey6 4 years ago
koolio
wickey6 4 years ago
great post
killdeer2 4 years ago
oh cute!
fergieferg11 4 years ago
wow!
thescyphe 4 years ago
DAMN
liekomg12345 4 years ago
nice video, only weakpoints are the audio...when you cut between shots, don't mute the audio...or if you are going to do that, you need some kind of noise/background sound track that can stay constant in the background that's as loud or louder than the background noise the camera's mic picks up, so you don't hear the audio drop in and out...also the music should be a little bit quieter because at some points it drowns out the dialog
jps1107 4 years ago
Excellent job ! kind of reminds me of twilight zone.
I have subscribed
ThirdProverb 5 years ago
Thats sweet though the dialogue was a tad draggy on the beach
Glitterisgold 5 years ago
Oh wow,..that actual gave me a chill!
chrsitinamargaret89 5 years ago
i liked this a lot . good story / acting .one John Carpenter would be proud of.
banjobones 5 years ago
I liked it, it's very twilight-zone-esc. The script was good. But..Watch the focus, again. It kept cutting in and out on the REALLY long shot. I liked the main guy, but all the rest of the actors were not very good (particularly the nurse woman). It was also kind of strange because it was really ultra over the top. Then it got to be kind of not, but the dialogue still was... It was a bit uncomfortable, but I'm sure you'll get better with practice, and it wasn't bad anyway.
Clickhereandsave 5 years ago
I did add it to my playlist of favorites
rainydog 5 years ago
BEAUTIFUL. beautiful dialogue. My favourite video of all times. I wonder what had inspired you... That was really really good. I love how they walked away and left the jacket on the beach. The ending dialogue I had kinda expected because I was assuming right from the start who he really is... and in the middle when they talk about death it was a little bit confirmed;) SUPERB!
crazifunnibunni 5 years ago
my favorite.
lunarshoes 5 years ago
cool! nice edditing! nice acting!
rampareg 5 years ago
nice...nice
americannapalm 5 years ago
Awesome . I love the idea. Im quite into the paranormal
When on the beach at some points the 2 lovers light spots against the dark seem to form a heart in my eyes.
Beautiful job.
idocare 5 years ago
that was proper dark awesome vid man....i hate dropping my jackets and loosing them whilst drunk proper sux its like coat tax or summin ;/
jodabloka 5 years ago
That was GOOD! -Dennis
wdciii 5 years ago
the dialogue I am assuming is a code and convetion of Film Noir....I may be wrong...heaven knows I may end up making films worse then this one. I kinda like it. Not bad not bad at all
AffleckFan 5 years ago
You just came on too strong with everything; the music, the acting, the dialogue. It was all so poetic and dramatic that it was cheesy and misconstrued. People at any age don't talk that intellectually, I don't care if it is with their dead lover.
theSonicYouth 5 years ago
But they're DEAD people! How do you know they don't talk like that?
CosmicUndeadElf 2 years ago
next time try to add the sea wave affects later
and better lighting.
but not too bad
Donnerstag 5 years ago