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  • Get into it more!

  • not bad

  • pretty good:)

  • the start and the middle were rushed.. but the ending was getting better.

  • very well done but you went waaay too fast and it would be better if you added gestures/movement

  • Just wondering is this made up or is this an actual monologue? because I have an audition for a musical on tuesday and i really need to find a decent funny monologue and im thinking of something like this?

  • what is this from???

  • nice

  • You're really good - believe me!

  • She can't control her neck. stop arching your back.

  • u did a great job :)

  • Oh cool! I just uploaded this same one! Loved your version!! :)

  • Please tell me what this is from!

  • i liked your "taken aback" facial expression! :) this was good. :)

  • Nice work. You should post this on HollywoodNextStar

  • Absolutely adore this monologue! I used it in an audition and got a call back! (:

  • @heytherenicolee

    congradulations! where is this monologue from exactly?

  • @punkerbelle420 Thank you! :) Im not sure on where this monologue is from, I just wrote it all down, memorized it and the magic happened from there. haha

  • Good but you have camera stare. which is where you only look at one point the entire time when in real life people look away and around and look up even to "find" their next thought sometimes. i liked it though and your really pretty!

  • just go all out ur just saying the words well you need to like move a little your just standing there and saying ur lines

  • good work. you should post this on acting town.

  • Not believable at all. I'm sorry but A.) You are too close to us B.) You stare directly at the person you're supposed to be talking to, your therapist, the entire time. I don't believe you're really in a therapist's office because you just stand there. Even when you say "I'm sitting down" you don't sit! That should be an obvious place to sit but you made it super unbelievable by not doing what you character even says they're doing. The way you are speaking is okay, but rushed.

  • is this for film or stage?

  • did u write this?

  • Your very pretty, and that will probably take you a little further! but off talent souly I think you need to work on it more. Because it seems like you haven't really sat down to develop your character, it just looks blah, not intersting

  • Your very pretty, and that will probably take you a little further! but off talent souly I think you need to work on it more. Because it seems like you haven't really sat down to develop your character, it just looks blah, not intersting

  • you look like dakotta fanning

  • @HXCDARLENE not even a little.

  • you look like a famous actress... kinda like drew barrymoore

  • heyy..i hve an aunt named christine and my last name's crawley..:P..and i act

  • I liked it

  • You definitely need more experience....not great.

  • you're so AMAZING

  • aaaw you're adorable. I'm using this.

  • lol

  • Post your video on TheScenePlayer channel as a video response. Trying to build a community of actors. Let's get it going.

  • you rush...

  • You don't know how to do a monologue. At all. Just take some classes before you go out and audition and you could probably be really good.

  • what is the name of this monologue?

  • I love your monologue...you kind of remind me of that played Jewel on Superbad...

    I have a couple monologues up on my channel...check them out and let me know what you think!!!

  • VISIT

    SHINGAMINGA

  • please please tell me whats this is from thanks

  • you seem profesional great acting,please ckeck out me doing my monologue and let me know what you think:) thanks

  • good job, you are a good complaining actress

  • i liked it!!! good job :)

  • i love the dry humor in this. dry humor is the best. its like ur really the character. its a very good peice. i am looking for a 2 minutes monologue thats funny for a guy 10-18 if u could help.

  • That was awesome!! so believable...

  • This reminds me of a scene from Seinfeld. Haha.

  • please, someone just explain to me what makes this a good performance?

  • @goanyways I would say it is good, because it is easy to follow, you imediately know the idea of the character, (she maybe pushy, with a side of germ-phobia) and you also have time to figure out what you might say (if you were the one speaking to her) to get her to sit down. Her facial expressions aren't over done and uh yeah, that's just my guess.

  • @goanyways facial expressions.

  • great job! what is this from?

  • that was really good!

    do you think you can send it to me?

  • Great Job. I really Believed you!

  • wow

    thats good xxxxxx

  • HEYYYY!!!!

  • Lol hii xx

  • YOUR SOOO GOOD!!!

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