I think your poetry is excellent. It reminds me of Jim Morrison's "An American Prayer", wonderful. Type some on my Comments Section on my page: Joshua4469, that would be awesome. You should be professional. God bless-Amaniah Zimmerman
It would be funny if you wrote that sneeze into the story, lol. But yeah, I really like that one too. Worms last week, mosquito's this week, PATTERN? I also really like the "Dusty Blinds" story.
As for the super long one, what you read of it seems really good, I wouldn't change a word of it. It all fits great, especially the "shiny pink puzzle pieces" bit. 5.
I'll be sure to read that book too. I can see why you like it, it fits your writing style. :)
Nah, I write grosser than that. Most of my stuff has some hideous character or brutality scene that I try to push beyond the limits of my own discomfort. Which is pretty high since I'm a desensitized one, haha.
And no problem, and thank you too. I really like your stories and your whole personality, it's interesting.
I used to write a ton darker too, but i've been making an effort to be more subtle about it. Maybe i'll post a video with some of my older stuff for ya :)
Your really good!!!!!!!-3
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TeeMarie94 9 months ago
I think your poetry is excellent. It reminds me of Jim Morrison's "An American Prayer", wonderful. Type some on my Comments Section on my page: Joshua4469, that would be awesome. You should be professional. God bless-Amaniah Zimmerman
joshua4469 2 years ago
Aw thank you!
gracelizabeth09 2 years ago
It would be funny if you wrote that sneeze into the story, lol. But yeah, I really like that one too. Worms last week, mosquito's this week, PATTERN? I also really like the "Dusty Blinds" story.
As for the super long one, what you read of it seems really good, I wouldn't change a word of it. It all fits great, especially the "shiny pink puzzle pieces" bit. 5.
I'll be sure to read that book too. I can see why you like it, it fits your writing style. :)
TheOnlyHellGod 2 years ago
Hahaha, "I asked what his storm was and he-MASSIVE SNEEZE-told me my mouth tasted like rain." It's a plan ;)
Hm, I like to relate things to nature I guess. Thanks soo much :)
I'm glad 'shiny pink puzzle pieces' wasn't too gross for ya heh.
Oh geeze, to even have my style compared to Ray Bradbury's is a huge compliment. You leave the best comments heh, thanks a million, million.
gracelizabeth09 2 years ago
Nah, I write grosser than that. Most of my stuff has some hideous character or brutality scene that I try to push beyond the limits of my own discomfort. Which is pretty high since I'm a desensitized one, haha.
And no problem, and thank you too. I really like your stories and your whole personality, it's interesting.
TheOnlyHellGod 2 years ago
I used to write a ton darker too, but i've been making an effort to be more subtle about it. Maybe i'll post a video with some of my older stuff for ya :)
Thank you, I aim for interesting :)
gracelizabeth09 2 years ago
i like the one at 1:00 to 1:05 i like all of them!! ahah your pretty =]
SarahKinzzBby 2 years ago
aw :D
thanks so much!
gracelizabeth09 2 years ago
do you like reading?? i think its very boring!
nakatttac456 2 years ago
Haha.
I would be dumb, lonely, and bored without reading. You should really give it a chance.
gracelizabeth09 2 years ago