I think the reason this one isn't connecting with me is, in several parts the melody is sort of acidic in intention, but your voice is soft and sort of gentle. Could just be me, I'm by no means a word of authority. Your voice is great on the backing vocals and suited to the softer parts. It's kind of funny, my voice is the opposite, I can get all the growls and the rasp, but I can't really sing straightforward and sound good.
This isn't a criticism of the song, hopefully a helpful oberservation.
@YearAtTheMovies It is helpful, I think you may have put words to what I was feeling when I was making this. I'm still wrestling with my vocal chords, trying to make them match what I hear in my head. It's a working progress. We should collaborate for the yin and yang vocal combo
@lockcol Yes definitely, I'm moving to downtown Toronto Ontario either today or tomorrow and I have to get a bunch of stuff sorted out, but when I'm settled we can collab on something. I look forward to it greatly.
I think the reason this one isn't connecting with me is, in several parts the melody is sort of acidic in intention, but your voice is soft and sort of gentle. Could just be me, I'm by no means a word of authority. Your voice is great on the backing vocals and suited to the softer parts. It's kind of funny, my voice is the opposite, I can get all the growls and the rasp, but I can't really sing straightforward and sound good.
This isn't a criticism of the song, hopefully a helpful oberservation.
YearAtTheMovies 4 months ago
@YearAtTheMovies It is helpful, I think you may have put words to what I was feeling when I was making this. I'm still wrestling with my vocal chords, trying to make them match what I hear in my head. It's a working progress. We should collaborate for the yin and yang vocal combo
lockcol 4 months ago
@lockcol Yes definitely, I'm moving to downtown Toronto Ontario either today or tomorrow and I have to get a bunch of stuff sorted out, but when I'm settled we can collab on something. I look forward to it greatly.
YearAtTheMovies 4 months ago