it's good but the body is out of proportion. the torso is too long for the legs and where you put the pockets vs the waist . Fix that and it's a great drawing!
Lol i dont do art at all... hehe never done it except i mean like stuff in primary ... lol :3 this is my 2 year drawing manga... i dont draw much... i wish i did x3 hehe
Okay, I think you did a really good job for your first guy (hell, I couldn't do them that well when I first started out XD) There's only a couple of problems. His legs are too close together. Men do have hips, though not as wide a womens, they are there. His upper arm might also be a bit too long. The elbow is level with the middle of the waist. (which is also a bit long).
Sorry if I sound mean, but I know I love criticism, it really helps you move forward. It's only minor mistakes anyway ^^
it's good but the body is out of proportion. the torso is too long for the legs and where you put the pockets vs the waist . Fix that and it's a great drawing!
ShojoLover27 8 months ago
Very nive should only think about the eyes can be a little less big for a male
YouMangArt 2 years ago
@YouMangArt aye thank you :)
MoonSighted 1 year ago
nice!
DjSkybeats 2 years ago
@DjSkybeats Thank you ^_^
MoonSighted 1 year ago
That"s very good!
mikee1129 2 years ago
thankies *O*
MoonSighted 2 years ago
good for first time
actually its awesome usually people just practice on heads but thats really good
BobTookABigDump 2 years ago
aww thank you :3
MoonSighted 2 years ago
Love the shading. Im trying to incorporate that into my drawings as well.
MsTrini2dabone 2 years ago
lol im quite bad with shading... im surprised it turned out ok in this one lol
MoonSighted 2 years ago
I never really tried either until art class...your welcome.
MsTrini2dabone 2 years ago 2
Lol i dont do art at all... hehe never done it except i mean like stuff in primary ... lol :3 this is my 2 year drawing manga... i dont draw much... i wish i did x3 hehe
MoonSighted 2 years ago
Okay, I think you did a really good job for your first guy (hell, I couldn't do them that well when I first started out XD) There's only a couple of problems. His legs are too close together. Men do have hips, though not as wide a womens, they are there. His upper arm might also be a bit too long. The elbow is level with the middle of the waist. (which is also a bit long).
Sorry if I sound mean, but I know I love criticism, it really helps you move forward. It's only minor mistakes anyway ^^
Almalnum1 2 years ago 2
hehe x3 thank you very much :3
MoonSighted 2 years ago
this is very good for a first try. i draw anime/manga(animanga) also. the one thing i hate to draw is female characters tho...
megamaster0732 2 years ago
h3h3
MoonSighted 2 years ago
its okay Not awesome but good
Nekoo1989 2 years ago
thank you :3
MoonSighted 2 years ago
Hey - nice one.
ZoSo3K 2 years ago
thankies ^.<
MoonSighted 2 years ago
its a pretty good drawing but i think the head is a problem but anyways you did a pretty well job ^^b still practicing ^^
anotherbye 2 years ago
thanx ^^ hehe
MoonSighted 2 years ago
T.T Im jealous.. I could never draw like this.. XD It's very good and looks very profesional :3
dmnbacktalkninja94 2 years ago
aww thankies x3
MoonSighted 2 years ago
if there's one thing i hate its drawing "girl" characters
WoWDemondays 2 years ago
interesting... ^^
MoonSighted 2 years ago
good, but a bit narrow.
thejonjon 2 years ago
lol ya ^^ i was drawing on my bed staring into my laptop ^^
MoonSighted 2 years ago
wow, this is pretty good for a first timer
XD
go you!
jinefer63530 2 years ago
thankies ^^ lol i always just draw females and animals... hehe ^^
MoonSighted 2 years ago
yes!!! its like the same as mark crilly but just he is just a bit more skilled because he is older and more like advanced :)
lemonandlime49 3 years ago
Thankies x3 X3X3X3X3 yea i made it my own style x3
MoonSighted 3 years ago
this is amazing!!
lemonandlime49 3 years ago
o_O? huh? really?
MoonSighted 3 years ago