PAPER PLANES FREESTYLE (OFFICIAL)

[Ghostisbulletproof]

you snapped on diz!

[nebadartse12]

pretty badass rap

[sp33ns33r]

You sound like every other guy who wants to be the next big thing

[jessick101]

its cool, man

[donovansbeats]

this was mad clever bro! check out my BEATS on my page, we could take over the world!! I won the Nashville soundtrack beat battle and am producin for wiz right now =]

[30thousandd]

this is raw

[terceldude]

I think at one still, you look a lot like Chamillionaire! :) If you ever make an album, I wanna have a feature in it, and/or vice versa! :))) I think you're pretty cool! :) Nice do-rag by the way! :) I have some of that rapper clothes and shit! :) I got some Jordan Icons, earrings, chains, dog tags, cool Walmart rapper shirts and COOGI shorts and hopefully soon some nice hoodies! :) yes I also have 2 NEW ERA 5950's and a TARGET-bought imitation brand! :)

[terceldude]

@terceldude I also have a do-rag myself lol, but I'd only wear it if my hair was really long and I wanted to keep it intact for any of my NEW ERA's! :) I'm also trying to get my ex-boo back! :)

[YuNgGoOn007KillA]

hahah have u sleeping with gangstas like donald didnt duck

[MiiiStaKMajor]

DOOPE!!! niice freestyle maan

[nathanho02]

This is talent anybody can do this

[MrJohncorradi]

runnin while tredding mills clever

[SkateboardinGoon]

damn dat shyt wuz hot bruh

check my cover out tell me wut thnk of it

[dcskate0904]

haha i dont lactose so dont ask if the cheese is real. seriously dude you got talent

[dcskate0904]

you got talent

[jjdude630]

this beats soldier boy by 300000000000000000000000000000­000000000000000000000000000000­000000000000000000000000000000­000000000000000000000000000000­000000000000000000000000000000­000000000000000000000000000000­000000000000000000000000000000­000000000000000000000000000000­000000000000000000000000000000­000000000000000000000000000000­000000000000000000000000000000­000000000000000000000000000000­000 times

[The1Benji]

Damn that was ill

Check out my Paper Planes freestyle, its hot, unique, and VERY different

[darcnes2828]

beast

[kidsk8t3LK]

this shit is ill

[paperclip200]

dis shit go hard but u swagga jackin hardbody

look for a new style, with metaphors like that u could make some real music and u would definately get noticed

don't mistake me for hatin, cuz at the end of the day wat comment do u want to read... the one that says 'this shit is dope!' or some straight honest criticism

its ur call

[porky289]

Yo you sound fierce. Your metaphor game is pretty good, the flow good, and overall it was good. I've been rapping for about 4 years now. I don't have good equipment gear but you seem good. You record?

[Gorillagal247]

U r a sick lyricist! I hope u go far man! u JUS MURDERED those rhymes they were so tyt and ill! I do a bit of rhyming and such and such but i don't think they compare to urs! OOft killing itU already better than half of the rappers out there!!!Just keep ya game up! N keep improving! Hw long u bin rhyming for?

[Dogo763]

you cold man u going somewhere wit this

[xnyxguerilla]

that shit was pretty tight yo

[gupenkonba]

This shit kicks ass!

[blacknightx816]

nice as helll

[kolbkidd]

this is preaty badass

[gupenkonba]

you need a better mic bro

[mterez12]

DOPE MANG U DOING A GOOD JOB

[philletmignon]

This is fucken dope

[Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed]

damn thats real good, I agree with anibusrising or whatever his name was, you could diversify your rhymes a little more but you're already better than a lot of rappers..

Did you write this or freestyle?

[calebatefood]

dude you kinda sound like MOS

[dougsfresh]

damn i'd have to twist up a fatty ass blunt for dat one

shit

[HITDEMWURKKZ]

eeeeeerrrrrr u used mi nameeeee lol

[nina]

[blahblahblahe1]

dang!

this is da shit!

that's dope dawg...

keep it real

holla!

[narayanr]

For Realz???

Level up, Dun!

One.

[maztakeef420]

damn kid i was jus bout to say i was gettin sicka rewindin that shit to catch ur punchlines... its good that u took the time to write out the lyrics for people to follow along wit...

wow.... lmao

one on each hip, so they call me the man of steel

i got twins that rug rats, i call em my phil and lil

crazyyy

[lakersstud354]

this is pretty good haha trey songz should check himself

[damiancopado]

pretty cool bro

[MROVC]

you straight ......

..flow off that neptunes "grindin" beat for ya boy!!!

por favor

[SalvationHasCome]

Haha, I thought it was a man making making paper planes and freestyling it. LOL! xD

[AnubisRising667]

Ya I hear you. I was tryna come across with that diff way but with letter limit. I sorta had to summarize it aint do that good of job. I looked at some of ya other stuff after I made comment. That was on point tho.

[theoAKAsixty]

haha i understand my dude, i can accept criticism. if i couldn't then i wouldn't have made these things commentable (if thats a word). you jus made me seem like some sort of amatuer, naw ive been doin this for bout 7 years now, i jus dont have great recording equipment.

[AnubisRising667]

This few tips I got for you. Try and do like more complex rhymes. You great with comparisons but you kinda when overkill wit it. Try and do that on every few bars not every bar. Ya topic get kinda fucked when you compare to much.

That and u use same rhyme a lot. Like -ill in top try and get some 2 or more syllable rhyme going. So bars sound diff say on topic. But keeps flow and the punch lines(with your knock out comparisons) going.

This freestyle tho so no big deal. 5/5.

[jonrd21]

flame on lmfao...

[dudewat212]

Yo, you straight "nasty" !-and if anybody ask me the stains is pizza

a creature, im eatin these beats up"

[pcangeldust]

DID u write this or just katted it from some guy, y with the friends tin man its utube

[theoAKAsixty]

haha i guess i'll take that as a compliment, since its too good for to believe i wrote it. Actually if anyone wants to buy it send me a message.

Of course i worte it.

[LVL UP]

[emagicz]

@theoAKAsixty Aww what you wrote it?? Gotta get them skills my nigga, haha

[theoAKAsixty]

@emagicz lol i love how people always say "you didnt freestyle that" and when i tell them i didnt it they want to talk shit.

lol respect the real

i freestyle too, but so does everybody else that gets drunk and smokes weed

lyricism is the real skill

check my other videos i freestyle in them

[WSUK247]

FIre hoMie..

Good Shit G..

[gupenkonba]

this is one of the best paper planes (freestyle) ive almost ever heard. you have talent that could rival some of the best in the business!

[babuji198]

u suk. shut up dirty shit

[PhOeniXibeX]

fuck are u doped? this is awesome shit!! rock on!!

[Snookiefish]

Nice rhymes mate....Keep it up

[Slapnutzmalone]

You rode the beat like Jeep!

from

i speed up while tossin the nina

on I was with you!

I like this beat too!

[degausser8]

I don't understand anything you're saying.

[theoAKAsixty]

thats why there are lyrics on the side =)

[degausser8]

Haha. It was actually kind of a rude comment on my part.

But when I actually started listening to the song, I found the lyrics to be quite clever.

Nicely done.

[theoAKAsixty]

thanks for actually listening ...

thats all i can ask

[milamila31]

This is good.

[nycjrome]

i like this shit, by the way.....thanks for the comment

[Boochix]

This is pretty good :)

You're pretty cute too :)

[leesmithx3]

To Quiet Man But Its Good

[Trancoshero]

It sounds pretty good :D

But well I am spanish so I don't understand a lot of words xD

Anyway, beatbox rules!

[gupenkonba]

nigga you rhyme tight nigga i add this to my fav!

[usamoztwanted]

when i first saw you, i thought "damn another wanabe rapper" but then you started spittin and bruh that was ill. keep it up it was fire. you can go places. God bless

[Snickerz4lyfe]

Wow...that was hot i bet ud kill a lil wayne beat big ups keep doin it

[notrealyreel]

haha im on ur friend list..

ur ill nigga u spit fire better than half of these wack bubblegum rappers in the game today

id buy ur album before lil waynes

[caseywhisman]

i fucking hate little wayne 2pac, dre dre, ice cube, xzibit, and dub c is all thats in my cd case but i agree this guy is good if he had a mic in a box know what i meen so i could hear better and no sound interfearence..cant spell

[dotk1to]

This is good, keep workin on it and invite me to one of your parties when you make it! :D

[erifick]

this aint good :/

[N1CKROCKZ]

my nigga! u gonna make it dawg!

[ramiza69]

ooooouuuuu!!! dobrééééj! sexyyy!

[lucarex50]

cool rap and nice du rag!! yea

[tocboy6]

that shits 2 clean

get on a lil wayne

beat an rip it

[gupenkonba]

haha, yeah my nigga

[theoAKAsixty]

Id like to point out (ONCE AGAIN) nobody EVER talks shit about the lyrics haha.

so my job here is done

[WhooRah]

u talkin to the mic was gay, but u killed it dude

[theoAKAsixty]

there is no mic, Fuck you. but thanks

[theoAKAsixty]

hahaha

[hawk12399]

dude r u a proper rapper coz if not you should be

[floresm951]

nicely done....

[cellphone1214]

yo that shit was niccceeeee

[blairone100]

sorry dude, MIA is way better, hey, but I'll give an "A" for effort

[theoAKAsixty]

haha its koo you sound like your a white girl from the oc

[zon411]

nice

[yoshiaintplayn]

this shit fye fuck them haters..

[lcev1n]

that's some good shit theo. straight up. luna thinks so too. hahaha. keep handling business and fuck all these haters.

[jdarebaseball27]

shit.. that's nice

[00Young00Kay00]

dayum y yall hatin? Who gives a fuhk if its a freestlye or not da lyrics is ill n dat wat countz, jeez. Stop hatin on da nigguh n appreciate diz.

Gud work man. Keep it up

[1337m4v3rick]

this shit goes hard.... mad props...def better than most of the rappers on the radio in my opinion..

[docjaykill]

written freestyle? laughin ass off...check mine

[theoAKAsixty]

haha notice how no one says shit insulting about the lyrics. AND YES PLEASE LOOK AT HIS FREESTYLES, GARBAGE.

Ive already admitted to it being written and the reason for it, if it really bothers you i suggest you dont listen to that 50 cent paper planes "freestyle".

[Vprk134576]

bang bang bang bang? are you serious?

[theoAKAsixty]

what is the question exactly?

Do those words offend you?

Am i serious? Nigga do u see J/k after all that shit?

[Ashleylaine123]

That the nigger right ther

[coldkillaking]

say da shit rite its nigga

[kobebryantrulez]

how is it a free style and he wrote it in the description

[theoAKAsixty]

haha you sound like a hater

i never said it wasnt written

its a freestyle ... MEANING

there is no set style

no rhyme scheme, no real chorus

jus a couple free verses

come on man if you gon talk shit know what you talkin bout.

If anyone else doesnt respect the fact that there is an artist that actually takes the time to write instead of jus spittin out his ass then please go listen to soulja boy or somethen

[thebigo123]

did he say more fart?????

[jonmatadondotta]

ayo that was tiight homie..real talk.

[imjustmedeja]

dat waz supper tight i rap3 but dat shit waz sicker den sick but ch3a add mii cuz im new on here n mii pic iz n mii bacground if chu intrested in how i lukk

[2hotallday]

damn that 1st verse wuz fire

[tejaskotecha]

.. thats that PHIRE..

[zlokobna]

yea you got it