Doll - Self injury poem

[AgentAWolf]

This is the poem you wrote for the nurse? (From your book)

It's beautiful and my new favorite :)

Do you have any signed copies of your book one might buy? Or maybe a collection of your poems?

Keep being such an excellent inspiration and voice for SI.

-Alexx

TFH

[idranktheseawater]

@AgentAWolf

Yes, this is the one

I'm not able to send signed copies of my book, but I'm looking into making book marks and signing those

[AgentAWolf]

@idranktheseawater Well, you have a buyer here ;)

any advice for another writer?

I have a lot of short stories I wrote while dealing with SI,

and a lot of letters I wrote to ficticious persons.

[idranktheseawater]

@AgentAWolf

You can look into the same place where I got published. Look up Publish America.

[iKillTheLights3]

Beautiful. I cried.

You are amazing.

[nici0808]

the poem is beautiful, but you look awefully tired in this video.

[coolcatkt]

 That was absolutely amazing!

[DGF666KTG]

"I can't cut him out of me." That is such a powerful statement. I hope you know that line right there will stick with me forever... thank you for sharing, and the rest of the poem is just as powerful of course. ;)

[annawee3]

this is an absolutely beautifully tragic piece of art. I hate that i relate to every word. and i hate that you wrote this. nobody should have to draw inspiration from such a harrowing experience. Yet its all ive got to draw anything from, intrinsic now. Part of me. part of me. we just make it beautiful, thats how we survive. xx

[sezzie12345]

you are an amazing writer, that was an amazing poem

[chrissicat12]

I love your poems!!!!!! You are a good writer :)

[trishatricozzi]

I love this one. Simply, beautiful.

[PutMe6FeetDeep]

beautiful poem. your talent knows no bounds.

[composer63]

This affects people. Its like a train came and smacked the listener up the side of the face. 

[tboy221]

i wrote poetry and im going to publish a book. my so called friends say i should make a book. nothing is copyrite to me yet so i cant post it.

[idranktheseawater]

@tboy221

It's copyrighted to you the moment that you write it.

The very fact that you wrote it makes it yours.

[BrittanyWantinmore]

this is my absolute favorite!

[RedRavenBlackFox]

Hey, what kind of pics where you looking for? i have millions of okish art photos that id let you use if you wanted,

and i could ask a few people also, so you can do the slide show poems also, if you like? anyway, the poem was incredibly well written, but just really really harrowing :(

[idranktheseawater]

@RedRavenBlackFox

Thank you for the offer

I dont think I'll be making any slide shows for my poetry, but it would be nice if I could use some of your pics for the Grown ups cut too vid.

[allensandy2002]

amazing poem.  thank you for sharing

[TheEmmyR]

this is absolutely amazing! it gave me chills listening to it and reading it...

Your writing is wonderful! I hope that you will continue to post more videos like this, as well as others! I love to see your videos come up in my subscriptions!

[MsScarredSoul]

Really liked the way you read it aloud as well as had it written. x

[XXRavethedrummerXX]

This is...somewhat dark.

[BelialHexed]

pretty dark

[Helx94]

I think you shuld make more videos <3

[keetahbabee]

Excellent poem :) sad though. How are you going at the moment anyway? :)

[RedRavenBlackFox]

What kind of pics where you after for the poems? i might have some, or people that have some that would be willing to let you use maybe?

[RedRavenBlackFox]

What kind of pics where you interested in for the poems?

i might be able to find some art that you could use, or ask people if they'd let you use it, (if there credited and such).

[dreamforperferction]

amazing!

you have such a talent !

[dizzyizzy919]

Wow, one of the most amazing poems I've ever seen. Love this.

[DeepWater92]

i wish youtube had a like button like facebook, but atlast they dont so I'll just thumbs up this video instead, I hope your safe, please keep the videos coming.

[ClythiaMystica]

why did you drink the sea water?

[xmoroseguyx]

More poetry please, Mellissa!

[SerenityMellissa]

*thumbs up!*

[loversloveliarslie23]

Your writing is beautiful. I mean, you're writing about an ugly, terrible thing, but being vulnerable and putting yourself out her by letting people hear this is just absolutely amazing. You are an amazing inspiration.

[SoyLatte923]

absolutely love this... SO amazing

[emilyexerci]

this is soo amazin u r inspiring

[MrLOLsteveLOL]

Great.

[scarshealedbymusic]

Literally just made me cry...what talent. You are so amazing.

[idranktheseawater]

@stillhippie

they are in the description

[BaileyBaby13]

this is too amazing for words.

[MagicFerret69]

I wish I had the strength you show xx

[cheerios0are0forever]

oooooooo.... very perty

[XxprincessLuisaxX]

I love this.

[SquidGutz]

That was amazing, you have some seriously good writing talent.

[LemonOdette]

ow, hearing that made my heart hurt. but it's a very good poem.

[blackbeauty613]

i think ur insanely underrated because all of ur vids are simply amazing. i can't wait for ur SI book/memoir to come out in the US. r u gonna publish a book of all ur poetry too, because that would be perfect =]

♥♥♥

[idranktheseawater]

@blackbeauty613

Thank you

and at this point I dont have enough poems to fill a book. Maybe some day.

[deusdeacon]

thank you

[fruitikay]

WOW.....I love poetry too I've made a video with a poem before on my channel. Honey, this is SUCH a great poem. Awesome. I love the imagery. Did your Dad hurt you? It's very sad, but people can relate. Awesome poem. It's hard to share our writing sometimes for fear of critique, but this is great. You're talented and loved by your subscribers! Awesome!

[loudandproudx2]

you are so talented at writing this poem actually made my cry

thanks for all the videos you have made

beth xx

[MrVoodooThursday]

I love this poem. In it's simplest form, it touches all hearts.

If I'm not mistaken, "fair use" copyright laws allow use of say a song as long as it isn't in its entirety or as long as its been edited. Same with picturse. I wish you would keep the videos you had previously made. Don't get me wrong, we love to see you too.

[TheAliceinponderland]

this is amazing :) 

[ipaintedtherosesred]

That made me cry :'(

[gringoboy9]

A deeply emotively sad original muse copyrighted in remembrance of history.To forget is to forgive,to forgive is to forget,either one is difficult in the journey of life,as soldiers we carry our burdens,soldiers of fortune,soldiers of fame,or in abuse,cowards of their own shame!You are not a ragdoll but the tale of the ragdoll continues.Masterful recitation of bad moments that echo in the mists of time.Time is all we have,how much time, never to be forgotten.

By the way that was very short.:)

[Tink0714]

you've got a talent for writing..this is amazing..horribly sad, but amazing. <3

[nochzufernvonDIR]

Wow! Touched the innermost fabric of my soul! Deep.....reminds me of my own story and feelings...Thanx!

[PinchofPsychedelic]

I love it, it's beautiful.

[Amzgotlost]

Wow, amazing, powerful poem. Tore me up. You're very talented

[skaterjai]

awww *Hugs* I feel really bad for you, it was really moving :( good poem though, well done :) you should be proud <3

[bookcreator]

Your dad sounds like a really horrible person... But the poem's great, and you're such an amazing person. I hope you're staying strong :)

[Olydabomb]

Amazing poem. <3

[stitchedonsmiles]

Wow your amazing... Loved it. :)

[Ilovebobbetty]

Wow, it is definitely more powerful when you read it your poems, xxx

[laurenG1814]

this is so sad :( but really amazing :) well done melisa :) hope your doing well, take care :)

[firefwi]

That was amazing and the end gave me chills