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From: Brittwrites
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  • this is gonna be one good story cuz i read itt last year great story

  • love it

  • hahaha. . . .mum(:

  • wow, i remember reading this lyk a year ago, just as good as i remembered!! :D im gonna read it all over again!!! :D

  • @star7it donde estalla estonde on de train (in spanish where is the train station and im in the 6th grade on my sistas account and if u wanna check out moi stories tht would b gr8 *im not spanish or french* adios) (bye)

  • omg i never would have thought u were from holland till i read the first thing ur amazing

  • OMG OMG OMG MY NAME IS LAUREN! ........... is this story about lauren & justin loving each other?!?! I HOPE SO!!! AHHH!! :) i didnt read the whole thing i just saw lauren and i screamed hehehehehe :)

  • im in love with a person named taylor right now, so this is kinda awkward lol

  • @Brittwrites I agree, I really think ur English is awesome or fantastic and it's amazing that u know so much English in 2 years :) and I really LOVE ur stories :)

  • ur english is sooooo good ur really good for just 2 years!

  • Your english is GREAT!! Apart from just some little spelling mistakes, you're really good! I can't believe that you've been learning for only 2 years! I tried learning Dutch for a year and I failed. lol

  • I didnt see one thing wrong with your english! good job! :D

  • plz dont let his son be justin or they cant be together it would also be wierd and creepy to have a crush on your brother eeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwiiiiiiiieeee­eeeee dont get me started

  • umm instead of "mum" can u plz say mom.. haha sry tht bothers me

  • Your English is great! :D I love it!

  • Do you mind if I add this to Mp4 to read ??

  • Your English is FANTASTIC

  • nederlanders kunnen wel schrijven. ;p

  • this is awsome!

  • this was great! and if tht guys son is justin......then tht wuld b really awkward/weird. lol =)

  • LOVE IT ALREADY!!!!!!!=)

  • ur english isn't bad at all :)

  • its really good there is really only little errors but i have read way worse your english i really good like the only errors are probly just pressing the wrong button so yea please dont stop writing please

  • u r agreat story teller iv read all theepisodes and just cant get enough of them u r amazingxx

  • aha i love it its cute <33 kepp writing and never get discouraged

  • mum is mom

    

  • Wow your english is VERY good!!! hahaha

  • love the story! your english is really good(:

  • Don't Worry. Your english is really good! (: This story is getting exciting already. Haha.

  • Woah!! Ur english is really great. Try to keep up the good work.

  • ur english isnt bad actually its better than mine nd i was born nd raised in america so yea its rlly good

  • wow your english is really good!!

  • wow my first time reading this story but i have a good feeling its gonna be big and i will definitely love it :)) AKA ive read i lot of jb stories haha :))

  • i no yor from holland no offense but in america its mom not mum

  • In the UK it's mum, so meh to you! ;)

  • your engelishh is really good lol gonna read ALL your storys tonite even though i have got loads of Home-work this is WAY more fun

  • your english is better then people who only speak enhlish lol (: loved it

  • im fromm holland to !@!!1

  • @AishwariaG

    me too

  • i didnt see any mistakes (wasnt paying attetion) couldnt tell you had to translate :) 5*****

  • oh yeah and ur english is actually good

  • its sounds good even though i just started reading them and you already have like sixty something up(: lol i am gunna read each and every one!

  • seems like its gonna be good :)

  • Hey I am liking ur storie so far!! it sounds like it will be prettycool

  • i thank it was cool just a littol

  • ur english is excellent! love the story

  • yer amazing i luv it!:D

  • That was really good for someone who is just learning English :O Iam not that good at writing and iam from England! :O xD

  • im not trying to be rude but if u make another story in america we say mom not mum but its fine its just a tip u dont have to do it cuz i like to say mum other then that your english is awsome u r the best

  • for someone that had to tralate everything your really good, and i love to story

  • @Brittwrites hey thats awesome, you're doing really well :) keep up the good work haha.

  • Your english is FANTASTIC! How long have u been learning it? loving the story too

  • @yeahimsam yea I really think ur English is the best and I understood all of it and I really love ur stories :)

  • Veel nuttig werk, wow that was hard..lol bu seriously loved it

  • ur english is fine dont worry about it :D nice intro !

  • really good intro (:

  • Hey this is really good, ;p

    Echt waar hoor,

  • great series!

  • wats POV? i dont understand.

  • POV is point of view

  • These r pretty cool

  • That was good. Nice job

  • it is honey,can i talk to you

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