@star7it donde estalla estonde on de train (in spanish where is the train station and im in the 6th grade on my sistas account and if u wanna check out moi stories tht would b gr8 *im not spanish or french* adios) (bye)
OMG OMG OMG MY NAME IS LAUREN! ........... is this story about lauren & justin loving each other?!?! I HOPE SO!!! AHHH!! :) i didnt read the whole thing i just saw lauren and i screamed hehehehehe :)
@Brittwrites I agree, I really think ur English is awesome or fantastic and it's amazing that u know so much English in 2 years :) and I really LOVE ur stories :)
Your english is GREAT!! Apart from just some little spelling mistakes, you're really good! I can't believe that you've been learning for only 2 years! I tried learning Dutch for a year and I failed. lol
plz dont let his son be justin or they cant be together it would also be wierd and creepy to have a crush on your brother eeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwiiiiiiiieeeeeeeee dont get me started
its really good there is really only little errors but i have read way worse your english i really good like the only errors are probly just pressing the wrong button so yea please dont stop writing please
wow my first time reading this story but i have a good feeling its gonna be big and i will definitely love it :)) AKA ive read i lot of jb stories haha :))
im not trying to be rude but if u make another story in america we say mom not mum but its fine its just a tip u dont have to do it cuz i like to say mum other then that your english is awsome u r the best
this is gonna be one good story cuz i read itt last year great story
gwynett1 8 months ago
love it
lizzie1232547 8 months ago
hahaha. . . .mum(:
BestBieberStories 8 months ago
wow, i remember reading this lyk a year ago, just as good as i remembered!! :D im gonna read it all over again!!! :D
PhineasFerbFAN1 11 months ago
@star7it donde estalla estonde on de train (in spanish where is the train station and im in the 6th grade on my sistas account and if u wanna check out moi stories tht would b gr8 *im not spanish or french* adios) (bye)
CTFxCBieberluvr404 1 year ago
omg i never would have thought u were from holland till i read the first thing ur amazing
CTFxCBieberluvr404 1 year ago
OMG OMG OMG MY NAME IS LAUREN! ........... is this story about lauren & justin loving each other?!?! I HOPE SO!!! AHHH!! :) i didnt read the whole thing i just saw lauren and i screamed hehehehehe :)
pieromonky 1 year ago
im in love with a person named taylor right now, so this is kinda awkward lol
xDRIVERxGAMERx 1 year ago
@Brittwrites I agree, I really think ur English is awesome or fantastic and it's amazing that u know so much English in 2 years :) and I really LOVE ur stories :)
suitelifefan3 1 year ago
ur english is sooooo good ur really good for just 2 years!
aasiyaha 1 year ago
Your english is GREAT!! Apart from just some little spelling mistakes, you're really good! I can't believe that you've been learning for only 2 years! I tried learning Dutch for a year and I failed. lol
lola15936 1 year ago
I didnt see one thing wrong with your english! good job! :D
23tinybubbles 1 year ago
plz dont let his son be justin or they cant be together it would also be wierd and creepy to have a crush on your brother eeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwiiiiiiiieeeeeeeee dont get me started
mileyandjustin1fan 1 year ago
umm instead of "mum" can u plz say mom.. haha sry tht bothers me
jbieberxoxo01 1 year ago
Your English is great! :D I love it!
abbymcneill 1 year ago
Do you mind if I add this to Mp4 to read ??
Laurkotsu17 1 year ago
Your English is FANTASTIC
Beangirrl 1 year ago
nederlanders kunnen wel schrijven. ;p
youaremyfavoriteboy 1 year ago
this is awsome!
iliveforjustin 1 year ago
this was great! and if tht guys son is justin......then tht wuld b really awkward/weird. lol =)
BeBenLeLe 1 year ago
LOVE IT ALREADY!!!!!!!=)
MsBubbles241 1 year ago
ur english isn't bad at all :)
holamileyfanvanyfan 1 year ago
its really good there is really only little errors but i have read way worse your english i really good like the only errors are probly just pressing the wrong button so yea please dont stop writing please
MegaHaileybailey1 1 year ago
u r agreat story teller iv read all theepisodes and just cant get enough of them u r amazingxx
Hyperhez1 1 year ago
aha i love it its cute <33 kepp writing and never get discouraged
gummybearfan2559 1 year ago
mum is mom
yarelis17 1 year ago
Wow your english is VERY good!!! hahaha
jessiewoody45 1 year ago
love the story! your english is really good(:
TheBieberfeveralways 1 year ago
Don't Worry. Your english is really good! (: This story is getting exciting already. Haha.
AGlamourous 1 year ago
Woah!! Ur english is really great. Try to keep up the good work.
superbutter6 1 year ago
ur english isnt bad actually its better than mine nd i was born nd raised in america so yea its rlly good
4evaBieberJustin 1 year ago
wow your english is really good!!
cutepenguin15 1 year ago
wow my first time reading this story but i have a good feeling its gonna be big and i will definitely love it :)) AKA ive read i lot of jb stories haha :))
xoxoerika17xoxo 1 year ago
i no yor from holland no offense but in america its mom not mum
bielieber101 1 year ago
In the UK it's mum, so meh to you! ;)
deadfairy345 1 year ago
your engelishh is really good lol gonna read ALL your storys tonite even though i have got loads of Home-work this is WAY more fun
mizzbieberx 2 years ago
your english is better then people who only speak enhlish lol (: loved it
HEYitsTASHINAx 2 years ago
im fromm holland to !@!!1
AishwariaG 2 years ago
@AishwariaG
me too
JustVinakim 2 years ago
i didnt see any mistakes (wasnt paying attetion) couldnt tell you had to translate :) 5*****
268roxmysox268 2 years ago
oh yeah and ur english is actually good
krazyfrog12hearts 2 years ago
its sounds good even though i just started reading them and you already have like sixty something up(: lol i am gunna read each and every one!
krazyfrog12hearts 2 years ago
seems like its gonna be good :)
xSEKxEJFx 2 years ago
Hey I am liking ur storie so far!! it sounds like it will be prettycool
Miss12Claire9 2 years ago
i thank it was cool just a littol
justinbieberfan1233 2 years ago
ur english is excellent! love the story
Jessika159123 2 years ago
yer amazing i luv it!:D
MrJustinbiebermyhero 2 years ago
That was really good for someone who is just learning English :O Iam not that good at writing and iam from England! :O xD
xJBieberBabehx 2 years ago
im not trying to be rude but if u make another story in america we say mom not mum but its fine its just a tip u dont have to do it cuz i like to say mum other then that your english is awsome u r the best
MultiTige 2 years ago
for someone that had to tralate everything your really good, and i love to story
renaemosley20 2 years ago
@Brittwrites hey thats awesome, you're doing really well :) keep up the good work haha.
yeahimsam 2 years ago
Your english is FANTASTIC! How long have u been learning it? loving the story too
yeahimsam 2 years ago 2
@yeahimsam yea I really think ur English is the best and I understood all of it and I really love ur stories :)
suitelifefan3 1 year ago
Veel nuttig werk, wow that was hard..lol bu seriously loved it
hizgurl11 2 years ago 2
ur english is fine dont worry about it :D nice intro !
DemiandJoBros4ever 2 years ago 2
really good intro (:
fiore1200 2 years ago
Hey this is really good, ;p
Echt waar hoor,
Krullebollx 2 years ago
great series!
BieberBeadlesFan 2 years ago
wats POV? i dont understand.
hockeysweetheart9 2 years ago
POV is point of view
YoyoatbunnY 2 years ago
These r pretty cool
browniegirl158 2 years ago
That was good. Nice job
SocialScorpio 2 years ago
it is honey,can i talk to you
alishababy14kiss 2 years ago