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  • Dude this is really great,but if i can just give some contructive critisim, the names are kinda....ew...lol no offense.

  • yo this ma second time reading this story and i just realized you put this story up on my birthday OCTOBER 4TH oh yea lol i love this story

  • what do dey look like

  • loved it

  • awesome story

  • that was good

  • Patrick knows he likes her lol

  • guh thiz good patty watty u so smexii lolz i luv yah sexii boo

  • Oh ok. My bad!

  • nah it's cool ... lol

  • Loved It

  • I hate being spper dooper late on storeis! Anywayz... Especially when Jasmine poured that milk cartoon on Patrick. wow buddy wow! lolz I kno I asked u dis b4 but.... can I b in it? I wanna b recognized on youtube... u know.... it's hard. lolz I'm in 2 stories so that's y I said I wanna get recognized on youtube. And if u say yes... can my friend b in it 2? Her name is lola. lolz I kno I'm crazy! Keep up the good work!!

  • Uhm ... ill see what i can do cuz i don't really need a cast .

  • i love it!!

    your stories are really good!

    keep it up! :]

  • love the story

  • I lovee thisss !

    The ending was so cuteee

    lmaoo she poured chocolate milk on him hahaha .

    I can't wait to see what happenss .

  • lol i loved..she did pat like dat? she poured the choclate milk and evry thing!! lol poor Pat

  • lmao...0:57 is hella funny that ish had me rollin!!!!

  • i thinkk your the only one who understodd what i was tryna say ... lol

  • I'm lovin the stories

  • love it so far

  • That was great

    i ludded it....

  • Ahhh hell no nobody pours chocolate milk on my Patrick naw am just jockin i aint b*tchin like dat nwayyz i luved it keep going and where kelly and Bryan?

  • they'll be cominggg in !

  • luvin it;)

  • gurly great oh now pat iz sweet to her LOL

  • dayum dat waz good

  • luved it!

    i can't wait to part 3.

    this is good sooo far!

  • SLUT>>???

    i didnt think Patrick would call a gurl a slut when he dont know her like that.

    But i knew 4rm the start Pat has some feelin'z 4 her... it's ovious.

    G00000D so far keep makin more

  • luved it

  • I Just knew Patrick was gon Come in

    and Save the Day..Lmao!

    But he Still aint have no right

    to say that...But i want to know wat she was wearin?Cant wait till the Next one!

  • its good keep goin

  • that was great!!! hurry and put up the next one!

  • wow patrick

  • wow that was so wrong of patrick to say like seriously im glad he apologized thouggh

    loved it keep goin

  • I LUVED IT

  • I LoVeD It I HoPe PpL KeEp CoMmEnTiNg BeCaUsE I WaNt 2 ReAd ThE NeXt Pt

  • yayyyyyyy

  • 1st to comment yay but w/e this story iz da bomb ima subscribe keep writin

  • luved it

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