I hate being spper dooper late on storeis! Anywayz... Especially when Jasmine poured that milk cartoon on Patrick. wow buddy wow! lolz I kno I asked u dis b4 but.... can I b in it? I wanna b recognized on youtube... u know.... it's hard. lolz I'm in 2 stories so that's y I said I wanna get recognized on youtube. And if u say yes... can my friend b in it 2? Her name is lola. lolz I kno I'm crazy! Keep up the good work!!
Ahhh hell no nobody pours chocolate milk on my Patrick naw am just jockin i aint b*tchin like dat nwayyz i luved it keep going and where kelly and Bryan?
Dude this is really great,but if i can just give some contructive critisim, the names are kinda....ew...lol no offense.
littlelisamenda 2 years ago
yo this ma second time reading this story and i just realized you put this story up on my birthday OCTOBER 4TH oh yea lol i love this story
bebogirl43 2 years ago
what do dey look like
THEQUEENB1997 2 years ago
loved it
flygirls64 2 years ago
awesome story
b5rocks86 2 years ago
that was good
tjnhdfnhfn 2 years ago
Patrick knows he likes her lol
Ulukau808 2 years ago
guh thiz good patty watty u so smexii lolz i luv yah sexii boo
my5cutiesb5 3 years ago
Oh ok. My bad!
jenice13 3 years ago
nah it's cool ... lol
BeeFiveProduction 3 years ago
Loved It
pinkandpurplek1 3 years ago
I hate being spper dooper late on storeis! Anywayz... Especially when Jasmine poured that milk cartoon on Patrick. wow buddy wow! lolz I kno I asked u dis b4 but.... can I b in it? I wanna b recognized on youtube... u know.... it's hard. lolz I'm in 2 stories so that's y I said I wanna get recognized on youtube. And if u say yes... can my friend b in it 2? Her name is lola. lolz I kno I'm crazy! Keep up the good work!!
jenice13 3 years ago
Uhm ... ill see what i can do cuz i don't really need a cast .
BeeFiveProduction 3 years ago
i love it!!
your stories are really good!
keep it up! :]
looluv12 3 years ago
love the story
jasboo96 3 years ago
I lovee thisss !
The ending was so cuteee
lmaoo she poured chocolate milk on him hahaha .
I can't wait to see what happenss .
OneToughCookiee 3 years ago
lol i loved..she did pat like dat? she poured the choclate milk and evry thing!! lol poor Pat
BrYaNzBaByGurl4EvR 3 years ago
lmao...0:57 is hella funny that ish had me rollin!!!!
Chyna623 3 years ago
i thinkk your the only one who understodd what i was tryna say ... lol
BeeFiveProduction 3 years ago
I'm lovin the stories
Iammyowngirl1 3 years ago
love it so far
xoxlilmissunshinexox 3 years ago
That was great
i ludded it....
roselina2012 3 years ago
Ahhh hell no nobody pours chocolate milk on my Patrick naw am just jockin i aint b*tchin like dat nwayyz i luved it keep going and where kelly and Bryan?
mizzghettoangel 3 years ago
they'll be cominggg in !
BeeFiveProduction 3 years ago
luvin it;)
LilMissTink09 3 years ago
gurly great oh now pat iz sweet to her LOL
allwaysDizzyBear 3 years ago
dayum dat waz good
gabmon10 3 years ago
luved it!
i can't wait to part 3.
this is good sooo far!
cuteonduty 3 years ago
SLUT>>???
i didnt think Patrick would call a gurl a slut when he dont know her like that.
But i knew 4rm the start Pat has some feelin'z 4 her... it's ovious.
G00000D so far keep makin more
khortniluvzB5 3 years ago
luved it
lexisb5 3 years ago
I Just knew Patrick was gon Come in
and Save the Day..Lmao!
But he Still aint have no right
to say that...But i want to know wat she was wearin?Cant wait till the Next one!
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
its good keep goin
zakiyabratz 3 years ago
that was great!!! hurry and put up the next one!
marjksf 3 years ago
wow patrick
smartprincess101 3 years ago
wow that was so wrong of patrick to say like seriously im glad he apologized thouggh
loved it keep goin
Nellz1luva 3 years ago 2
I LUVED IT
angelasweet3 3 years ago
I LoVeD It I HoPe PpL KeEp CoMmEnTiNg BeCaUsE I WaNt 2 ReAd ThE NeXt Pt
blackcherrypie3 3 years ago
yayyyyyyy
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
1st to comment yay but w/e this story iz da bomb ima subscribe keep writin
shawdiefly 3 years ago
luved it
monica4690 3 years ago