Heaven's Suicide .:. A One-Shot [[Round One; NileysDestiny's Reckless Writers Contest]]

[smil3ychey]

omg. :o

that was amazing.

i was almost in tears.

[Jackie10154]

omigoshh!1 this made me cry!

[thiritun28]

i was crying, AMAZING I LOVE IT SO MUCH! make more with death, sex and love

[limzcutie]

this story was really sad, defiantly not something you always right.

but it was good, you can find a way to make anything you write worth watching and reading. You are one of the people i look up to most on YT. keep up the AMAZING writing.(:

[XXmacey96XX]

OMG I like, almost cried!! Um yea.. Nick is a bit bipolar... lmao, oh well, bipolar buddiez!! lol

[xopeace8ox]

This story was filled with so much pain, emotion and tears. Its amazing how little you write, and the amount of joy it fills people. Not nessecerially this story because, well, they both died. So pretty much sadness,.... AAANYWAYS... I loved it. And I know I'm probably the millionth person to write that but it was amazing. It took my breath away.

[NileyVariety94]

@xopeace8ox Awwww thanks!!!! :')

[KaroGina9093]

omg.I felt like cyring.

this is amazing.

[PurplePandaBear100]

amazing

[nileylover4eva1]

OMG I'm crying!!!!! You'll soooo make it to the next round!!!!!! If you don't the judges or whatever have a HUGE problem!!!!!!!! Great job! :)

-Kat

[abush1989]

wow that was breathtaking and brillantly written

that was not horrible at all that was amazing

loved it

[Niley4Everxox05]

This is sad..but I really like the story..I hope you go to next round:)

[loveedoveejonas]

THAT WAS AMAZING!! WOW haha..this story will take you to the next round for sure..WOW I JUST LOVED IT!! Good Luck though :)

[XLoveXXDreamX]

omg...i literally was crying at the end!! =(

this was so amazing and you are such a talented writer!! =)

[xxiluvnileynjoejxx]

Okay I dont know what you're talking about this is beyond amazing and you have to make it to the next round like @lenebraes said

This is amazing, I felt like crying and that's a good thing

Loved it

and good luck

BTW your stories are not plain I love them all :)

[NileyVariety94]

@xxiluvnileynjoejxx Aw thanks!!! :D

[IHeartNiley4]

o my god this made me close to tears it was so good i like the new format its cool! poor nick and miley clumsy nick with the gun ahhh this was so good fingers crossed you get to the next rounf

[xdreamoutx891]

OMG i crying is SO sad but so good

[DreaMaNdlOvejbmc26]

:`( so beautiful...

[TheNileyGirl]

that..was..really..good!

[lenebraes]

For the love of god you have to get to the next round! This was perfect! Aaaah you made me sit at my computer like =O for 4:39! My mom was looking at me like O_o and when I looked up I was like what?! I'm in shock here xD

[NileyVariety94]

@lenebraes Thanks!!!! :O

[xxilostyoutoHER]

I was like this :O basically throughout the whole thing.. It was so saddd and amazing.:D

[freakshowx28]

omg. its so sad. i'm crying right now. its so beautfiul <3

[NileyLoverForever078]

Wow you should write more stuff like this! it was reallly good! i totally teared up!!

Great job! I hope you win! (:

[Madihah667966backup1]

that was so sad!

I wanna cry now! damn you!

you are so gonna get through!

[TheLoly323]

This is plain amazing! Your gonna win don't worry!!!! :) And we all love your fluffy storys so don't worry;) be happy :P

[EmZFalloutboy1234567]

i have a friend thats bi polar. its really sad. :(( but this was amazingg :))

but being bi polar doesnt mean ur insane. this was amazingg though, i hope you win, :))

[NileyVariety94]

@EmZFalloutboy1234567 Yeah I know, one of my mom's friends is bi-polar

Nick was just kind of crazy overall... :/

[EmZFalloutboy1234567]

@NileyVariety94 yeah.. but this was still super duperr amazinglyy awesomee :))

[vietgurl789]

THIS WAS BAD? wow, then i would love to be a TERRIBLE WRITER!!

[JellyBeaneez]

OH MY GOD that was amazing Chels!!!! :'(

ahhh and I love the title cuz it's like...an oxymoron (?)

sooooo amazingg!!!

[RailiJaklitch6]

that was so sad!

[xxwendyb3dhab3stxx]

woww this was really good and sad!!

[NileyVariety94]

@selenagirl14 Interesting comment......... lol

[vietgurl789]

@NileyVariety94 YOU MADE ME CRY! WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!!?

[NileyVariety94]

@vietgurl789 I'm sorry!!! D:

but also, thanks!!! (for the comment before)

[vietgurl789]

@vietgurl789 WELCOMEE

[smileynileyfan01]

I hate to say this but they WONT

be together if she is in heaven he will go to hell because he killed himself witch means no matter what he goes to hell.

And if he is in hell and she is in hell they will hate eachother because everyone hates eachother no matter what in hell.

Sorry.

[xxRawrForeverxx]

Oh my god..

I.. don't even know what to say.

That was really good. I wanted to cry though. Gosh. I felt so bad for Nick and then.. Ah. I don't know. It was really good though (:

[NileySeries989]

Dude, I like almost cried. That was amazing.

[HRJismyname]

wow this was really sad and awesome

[XoXoLaLaLandXoXo]

AMAZING. :D

Oh and nice tags xD

[NileyVariety94]

@XoXoLaLaLandXoXo LMAO thanks xD

[XoXoLaLaLandXoXo]

@NileyVariety94 haha np. "omg some of the tags are very emo soooooo" lmfao xD

[NileyVariety94]

@XoXoLaLaLandXoXo lol I started typing what went with the story then I was like "hrrmmmm..." so I put that in xD

[mandyxteylor]

GASP! OMG! This was amazing! (: