Re: PICKENS PLAN CITIZENS VIDEO CONTEST: Submit your 60 second video response by 10/25!

[eholstei]

You put a TON of effort into this so hats off to you! Great job!

As far as the contest goes, however, its too long. Cut it down to 60 seconds and focus on wind and natural gas to improve it.

[patmjack]

Nice graphics paired with lyrics, good keyword use, (economy-banks), Nice graphical hooks that return to be paired with lyrical hooks. Excellent production, fine singing, good intonation, accessible. Good ride, nicely mixed. Less compression, allow more life. More focus on wind and natural gas vehicles, Boone has a plan. Nice instrumental fills all the way through. Celebration is a good word, :-)

Good form and structure. Professional.

Pat Jack

Pat Jack

[songwritingsimracer]

Thanks Pat. Your comments are appreciated. You sound like you know music, do you play or write?

[songwritingsimracer]

Ineffective??? I appreciate your comments and I welcome criticism but you have missed the point. This song will not cure our energy ailments and most likely, neither will the next President because they are all the same ole song (and dance). This song was written to remind Americans that we have endured hards times in the past and we CAN overcome them. The questions is: who is willing to fight for our country and say enough is enough. Enjoy and Thanks for listening.

[8eight8ball]

Ineffective. no emphasis on American E independence and challenging next President, which is the point. Way too long, repetitive, but decent tune.

[daleshawnee]

The song is 3minutes and 5 seconds long. That is how long songs are dipwad. And its a song about well get beyond this mess we are in.

[clee852]

Great video; a liitle long

[BABlade]

Right on. Great hook. Good song.

[Luv2run]

Nice job!

[enman70]

Very catchy. Good video, too.

[katnimmon]

Great writing! Sure addresses the times of 2008! "The Recession of 2008" Great singer!