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  • Love this vid! I am a few years late to the party with this story but loving it :D :D

  • Omg this is such an awesome video but I can't find the story! Please help like is the story gone or something? I ask again please help me find it. :(

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  • would someone PLEASE send me a copy of this story!? i would love to read it! :)

  • His wife has just been in a massive car accident, his child has just been born. He sees them for about 3 minutes and then walks away with Olivia...

  • do you have the file for Proximity. ? If so, do you think you can email me it. ? Anyone. ? I reallyy wanna finish reading it. It got deleted off my laptop. ):

  • @xxstephi16xx

    I've been looking for this story also. Can`t find it.

  • @romierenae i have it. if you want it i could email it to you if you want.

  • @xxstephi16xx

    Yes please do. That would be great.  I'll inbox my email

  • this video should be made into a movie. its just THAT incredible. i cry everytime i read it, and i was one of the fortunate ones to read it before it was taken down from svufic.com. and this video is amazing too! its beautiful :)

  • Does anyone know where I can get a copy of proximity? I've been obsessing over it for the past few days...PLEASE HEEEEELP! TT~TT

  • i havnt read Proximity!!!! :O.. and I want to read it so badly!!!!!!!!!! Does anyone have it?... .. Wonderful Video!.. I cant stop watching it!..

  • I just saw this video and tried going to SVUfiction to read the story but I can't find it. I would love to read it. Help!!

  • Hey...it´s a wonderful vid, I Love Lifehouse and the show is amazing. I really want to read the FF but I can´t find it...could you help me?

  • i read this story and cried my eyes out

  • @Butterflygirl1967 do u know where i can find a copy ?TT~TT

  • wow that was a very captivating video. gave me chills

  • Wait. What did you just say? I know you made this a couple of years ago, but this video shows no sign of it being any number of firsts for you. It's very nice! Very nice. :)

  • OMG so beautiful..this episode is one of the best, if it isn´t the best!! Amazing video!!!

  • Omg, that was amazing especially for only using ONE episode. That's tough.

    5 stars :D

  • That was amazing!

  • SVUFiction is down, WHERE can I read the rest of Proximity? Please help!

  • this is the best svu video i have seen EVER!! everything about it is perfect!! i'm about to go read the fanfiction it's based on.. it is that good:)

  • I don't think he really has loyalty to his wife because he loves her, He's loyal to her because it's the right thing to do and because he has kids with her that he doesn't want to loose. I think that the guilt will eventually fade and he will go with Live like he's always wanted to do.

  • Wah. Have a cry. How can you *not* see the chemistry!!??

  • well he can divorce kathy and still have his kids. people get divorced all the time.

    Elliot is supposed to be with olivia, and every one know that.

    his marriage with kathy isn't even good.

  • B-E-A-U-TIFUL

  • no matter how many times I watch this video, it gets me every time! Especially when Liv closes her eyes while Elliot's holding her. ahhh! lol :)

  • I love it! It really makes you think..... what if things were differen't? Great job! This is one of my favorite episodes.

  • Elliot is not extremely good looking but something about him is sexy as hell!!!

  • "First time I have done one in a "movie trailer" format."

    ^^ I would so watch this movie!

    Also, Proximity updated! Whoo it's finished!

  • Very powerful video. You did the story justice! Kudos to you!

  • This was the best video I have seen so far, hope you do more

  • I love svu! and the e/o pairing ROCKS!!

    UNTIL FEBRUARY 1st!!!! MY PAGE IS DEDICATED TO SVU!!!!!! EVERY DAY A NEW PICTURE IS UPLOADED!!!

  • so beauitful. I loved this story. gorgeous video.

  • This made me cry. =) But in a good way. Well done.

  • This song sounds familiar. Was it used in 'Shall we dance?'

  • So I was reading the reviews on Proximity and I saw your review talking about the story and I was like...THAT IS SO ABOUT ME! And I was excited to see that at least we know that they are sorta working on it!

  • I am still so amazed by this video! I miss this story can't wait till its finished. Seriously wonderful video!

  • Thank you..this story still takes my breath away. Maybe..Just maybe..Jess or Maddy will stop by here one day and get that writing bug back for this story. I'm with you, it's killing me knowing how this turns out for them. Until then..enjoy the vid...enjoy the fic!

  • This video is awesome!

    I loved it soo much. :D

  • That was awsome! Great Work!

  • Excellent Job my Friend. Well done, well done!

  • so im reading the story right now. and i was wondering if all of the dialogue from the episode was in the story. its hard because i just started watching SVU but i saw the chemistry immediatly. is there anywhere i can watch this episode?

  • you did what episode you saw got you hooked on e/o cuz mine was slaves s1 and i was hooked from then on the chemistry was just damn amazing

  • awesome!! i loved it. i've read the fic but now i wanna read it again!

  • So I loved the video. I read this fic when it first started getting published. I made my vid Wild Horses for Mousie to go along with her story when it was complete. This video made me cry lol. Great job.

  • that was wonderful, it was so well put together. you did a great job!!!

  • love the song and vid :] :] great jod

  • Gorgeous.

  • wow!!!!!!! i am speechless

  • wow that was AMAZING!!!!! soo good!

  • that was awesome! great job! i loved it.

  • that was so beautiful

  • WOW. Fantastic video. It totally made me wanna cry. The song was amazing, but the words across the screen totally told a different story, but it made it GREAT.

    Well done, keep up the good work!!

  • that was amazing. it totally made me cry. i love the song.

  • Wow! That was incredible. It put me right back into the story. Way to make a girl cry first thing in the morning!

  • wow that is amazingggggg

    such a good song & fits well with the hole e/o situation

    loved it

  • ohh... my... godd.

    That was incredible!!

  • Excellent, Excellent, Excellent job I LOVE this video

  • AWESOMW AMAZING it ran chicken skin up and down my arms!!!! LOVE IT !

  • Love it! Amazing job! =]

  • Wow! This one's definitely getting favorited! Awesome job!

  • wow. brovo that was the best video I think i have ever watch that was an E/O type video I hope you make many many more!!!!!!!!!!

  • WOW!!! I'm sooo impressed by this video. I actually signed up with Youtube to post a message. After watching this I HAD to read the story. WOW again. So great. The video is such an awsome compliment to the story. GREAT JOB TO EVERYONE INVOLVED!!! I have it on reply at work to just listen to this over and over and over. So impressed!

  • Thank you for the comment! I love to see first time comments. Paternity was such a powerful episode. The Maddy and Mousie captured the grasp of the situation so perfect, that making this vid became thearpy for all the emotions of it. : )

  • I know i have commented on this before

    but

    This video is EXCEPTIONAL

    I could watch it over and over again

    Thankyou for making this

    a million gold stars

  • Thanks to everyone for their continued comments on this video. It really goes to show how great this story is and the inspiration is really all MaddyM and Mousie962 doing. They have taken us on quite a journey with this story.

  • Where do i find the story?

  • Where can I read the story? I am a Dean/Liv fan, but I would love to read this story...

    Thanks in advance

    ANDREA

  • This video and the story that inspired it are beyond amazing! I started reading it by accident and soonI realised how good it is. I couldn't leave it. Now I have a soundtrack added to that beautifully imagined reallity. It doesn't leave me. Thank you <3

  • I *finally* have this song! I downloaded the accoustic version but i couldn't find this veriosn. Anyway, I eventually downloaded and had to fond an online converter just so I could listen to it. I LOVE this song and your vid. *Amazing*

  • This was absolutley AMAZING! Great Job!!

  • i have 2 admit that i watch it 1s a day cuz i love it so much.... its so perfect...

  • AMAZING VIDEO i immediately went and got the song! you're videos are beautifully edited and the song timing is perfect! i'm not sure if you've seen the Fault episode or if you've already made a video on that... but if you were considering it, look up the song

    45 by shinedown

    which is perfect for elliot's point of view! Keep up the great work!!

  • This is really outstanding! I need to catch up w/ Proximity, but this really really represents the fic well.

  • Just wanted to say that was awesome. I've watched many of your SVU videos to a embarrasingly repetitive degree and the editing/music/everything is always superior!

    BTW, this comment is a list of firsts for me: First time I have commented on a video; first time I've ever read a fanfic; Thank you for bringing "Proximity" to my attention! YOU ROCK!

  • that was awesome and touching for your first vid.

  • Omigod like amazing! NBC should make previews like this!

  • great song and vid!! i downloaded this song because of your video :)

  • haha me 2 lol

  • that was so beautiful, the song and the clips

  • i'm close 2 tears.... congrats on ur 1st... great job...

  • for ur first video congratulation !!

  • love love love love love.

    this is an amazing video. truly amazing job.

    keep it up.

  • wow. that was great. what song is it?

  • Wow!! As a self proclaimed #1 fan of Mousie and Maddy; I really felt that story through your vid. Completely awesome job!!

  • this song persuaded me to buy the whole lifehouse "who we are" cd. its great! along with this vid!

  • My favorite E/O video. You did an amazing job.

  • awesome video and what a great song choice

  • That was probally the best E\O video i have ever seen, and trust me ive seen alot

  • this was amazing.

    i am amazed.

  • This was an amazing video. Simply amazing.

    Psst, still waiting on a Proximity update :P kidding kidding take your time.

  • im more of a criminal intent fan...but this is a great video...nice work:)

  • that was awesome. good job. I'm not a big E/O fan but this was wonderful.

  • wow that was beautiful!!! i love everyting abt it.

    AMAZING AMAZING JOB!!

  • I just finished watching this eppy on TV it was so good. That scence with the hug, well it really makes it seem like she really is in love with him, and that makes me sad cus I don't think they were ever be together since Cathy was alright. Still loved your video.

  • awesome job everything from the song and video start to finish

  • that was the best fanfic video! awesome job!

  • wow... that was.. wow... amazing.. for real... I've seen a lot of EO fanvids and such.. but that was AMAZING..went so well with the story too...

  • really damn good job loved this one and the song really went with the video

  • I can't find the Fanfic.

    I think Search is down again

    Anyone got the link?

  • oh wow, that was amazing... especially since I'm like halfway through the chapters that are up

  • wow i really wanted to cry while watching this. really good job.

  • who sings this song...?

    awsm vid i cried it was so good..!!

    <3

  • Lifehouse! The version I have is a little different, but very good!

  • you should do more vids based on fanfics like this (if there's anymore like this that revolve around an entire eppy)........it really makes the story come alive more and makes it so much more powerful and beautiful

  • really really good

  • still my favorite and still watch it everyday!

  • every time i see it, i love it even more. still my favorite!

  • omg i have tears down my face that was soooooo DAM GOOD

    i need ben & jerrys now that was so emotional (in a VERY GOOD WAY)

  • I seriously just cried.

    This video is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

    It absolutely broke my heart, that's how beautiful it is, keep it up.

  • oh my goodness!!! oh my goodness!! oh. my. goodness!! *fans face and tries to hold back the tears*

    Beautifully done!

  • OMG, PERFECT!!!

  • Personally, I am a Dean/Olivia fan (and only TIIC know where he is), but this video is unbelievable. Once of the best I have ever seen. Fantastic job!

    ANDREA

  • OMG i nearly cried! it was faboulous!

    amazing,

    the last phrase, 'One moment would be what she'd ever get' amazing

  • This video was so great.I loved it,it made me cry.This is definitley one of my favorites.The song and the editing was so perfect.e/o 4ever.

  • such a great video and love the editing

  • love it but i would have been cool if u put where it said his child olivia his wife if u did his child his wife and real slowly his partner

  • this is amazing FAVORITES!!!!!

  • That was so amazing. Great choice!!!!! i love it.

  • damn that was really good great song choice

  • Wow. This absolutely touched me! Ammazing, amazing video!

  • All your comments mean so much to me. This vid was an emotional one. If this vid isn't enough, Chapter 7 of Proximity will put you over the edge. Maddy and Mousie are at it again. I don't recommend reading that and watching this back to back, that may be too much. Again, can't thank you all enough for your wonderful comments. Happy New Year. E/O in '08!

  • I was just thinknig that the song 'Apologize ' by Timbaland would fit Proximity extremely well, but sadly I have no clue how to make music videos. If I did, I'd be making one focused on 'Proximity ' with that song. Do you think you could maybe work with that? I'd be so grateful. Anyway, take care! XxX

  • ITPROF4U: You have so much talent. I absolutely adore how you put this vid together, and how you used exactly the right words and music to bring it all together. This is an E/O shipper dream! Thank you so much for creating this video. It's the most beautiful one I've ever seen

  • Holy.God.

    "Proximity" (the fic) is so inexplicably powerful and this video has really captured that. Your editing and choice of text is just perfect. I really never expected to see something like this and I am so happy you did this and posted it. I'm going to have to watch this a couple hundred times...

  • beautiful and breathtaking!

  • i love how at 1:58 elliot gives liv a quick body skim to make sure she is alright! HA!

  • love it love it love it love it love love love love love love it!

    ive watched this video at least 10 times! i really love it!

  • i was just given this link about 10 minutes ago. even now, i am struggling to see behind the thick cover of tears that are forming, have formed and will continue to form. there has never been a video that has reduced me to sobbing, and i just want to say... what an incredible talent you have and thank you for this... i haven't cried, REALLY cried in what seems like forever and it feels so good to finally let it out. beautiful job. beautiful...

  • Omg. Your comment is like dejavu. It's so weird. I'm having mak=jour dejavu here. Wooooaaahhh...Okay...still got it...oh well.

    Anyway, I know what you mean. I ALMOST cried...not quite. I'll have to watch it when I hvae a really shit day and I can just sit and my computer and cry.

    Yay!!

  • I freakin' love this video. I have been reading this story, its wonderful.

  • Granted the story in it self is already amazing, but your 'trailer' took this beyond. I loved the choice of song, the way you incorporated important bits of the story and the way the scenes were woven together.

    I was heartbreakingly sad and inspired. Thank you...

  • Oh, wow. Loved it. I'm loving the story - Maddy and Mousie are incredible writers - and this video is an amazing companion. I'd never heard the song you used, either, so I'm on my way to download it. Excellent video, excellent story. :)

  • amazing. I have chills.

  • Best e/o video in a long time. :)

  • i loved this so damn cool and i love the editing really cool

  • I'm not an E/O'shipper, but that was a *kick ass* video.

    Excellent editing...and use of Mousie962 and MaddyM's story. Kudos!

  • Nat...this is truly amazing! First time I think there's ever been a video tribute to a fanfic. And this was absolutely perfect! Wow Nat! I'm just at a loss for words! You are UNBELIEVABLE!

  • this is absolutly amazing. MaddyM, ive read many of yours and other people's stories on svufiction and they are incredible! I cant wait for more updates on ropes, but i dont want the story to end!! all you of you guys are truly inspiring, keep up the GREAT work!

  • (sryy i kno im posting twice) but i have an idea for a vid if u love the shows bones and svu but i need eveyones help. i think someone should do a comparision of the shows like the ways doors are always slammed down, the muscles of booth and stabler, the awkward sexual tension (gotta love it)..... etc. there are lost of similarities. if you cant make this but you like the thought, try and spread this idea around thanks!

  • OMg omg omg!!

    Totally obsessed with this vid - I've also had the most brilliant brain wave of all time.

    Someone said SVU movie.

    Not sure who but I'd like to elaborate on the idea: SVU Movie Length episode.

    Olivia is kidnapped by 'enter name here' and is beaten unconscious. Her life hangs in the balance as she's kept in a room that's slowly filling with gas and Elliot has to find her - how cool would that be. It would also have to be mega fast paced.

    Man, LOVE. THIS. VID!!!

  • Well done.

    :)

  • i've watched this video OVER 10 times i love it that much!

  • I used the word "incredible" four times in two comments...does that tell you something? :-) Left me at a loss for words.

  • You don't know how much it means to me that you like this. I don't even know how to describe how Proximity touches me. I've never been a patient person, but I tell you, this story is teaching me patience. You're writing puts me in the room with them, watching them, and on this ride that just when I think the coaster ride has done it's last climb and plunge, takes me up again. So good!!

  • Okay, darn it. Here's the rest of my comment...the fact that you gave a life to something like this, it's truly stunning. I was so incredibly touched, you have no idea. You're incredibly talented. And your Elliot in your Elliot vid? That's my El from Ropes, so thank you for the inspiration!

  • OKay, I'm not a member of svufiction (I'm on another site) but seriously - I love 'Ropes'!! I'm addicted to it - I actually think it's probably unhealthy - and I just wanted to say you are one of the most amazing writers ever. I mean that 100%. I go on and on about you to so many people.

    Lol.

    So yeah, anyway - I love your work and you should keep it up!!

  • I've been trying to post a comment to tell you how incredible this is, but it wont let me post the message I want to leave! This is invcredible...I don't know what to say...thank you SO much.

  • awesome vid u did a really great job :)

  • Really beautiful...love the song!

  • WONDERFULL !!!

  • omg ive never commented on a video before but i had to comment on this, im already reading the story and that is awesome just like this video well done!

  • that was beautiful wow

  • im speachless ... that was awesome!! off to find the story

  • OMG! Seriously that was so amazing and I love the story. You guys are so amazing!! Beautiful!

  • I absolutely love "Proximity." It's one of the best things Mousie has done and she's written quite a few great stories.

  • I actually almost cried in this.

    Lol.

    Wow. Just wow.

    So amazing!!

  • absolutely amazing....I'm off to find the ff now.

  • I am actually 99% speechless.

    Wow.

  • Okay, that is seriously like the most flattering thing someone has done for me regarding writing. Your take on the story...the use of our dialogue, our words, the song (I find myself very attached to Lifehouse these days) worked so well and I am just so honored and so flattered.

    Thank you so much. The video was gorgeous.

  • I don't know what to say. I'm beyond words that you liked it, that everybody likes it. I think I was moved to do this like a movie trailer because the writing in this story is so powerful and overwhelming that it could only be told on a big screen. We should send Dick your story and this video and tell him to get on it! You notice I made this an "R" rating. Please don't make me change it to PG-13 **wink**. No pressure. LOL

  • what was in the fic? my parents won't let me read them anymore. i just wanna know what happens. by the way great vid!

  • Lost for words. Not many people have really captured poigniancy of their relationship, but you nailed it. Thanks for an AMAZING vid!

    Olivia (Yes same name!)

    P.S Can anyone post a link where I can download Paternity, we're running numerous seasons behind in Aus

  • We're mot loads behind.

    I think Season 9 airs in February or something.

    *Squeals*

    Can't wait.

  • THAT VIDEO WAS AMAZING! seriously a really good 3 minutes and 55 seconds of my life.....it was really good. i loved it!

  • Loved every second of it! Just perfect! E/O4ever!!!!

  • i loved that and it was the best vid ever!!! and they need to make an svu movie so bad and definitley its like thats hte only moment she gets then its all kathy and el jr this and that

  • Oh, and it's his ex-wife. Not just his wife. Just so you know... =) {kat}

  • Um. I don't think they went through with the divorce after Kathy said she was pregnat. But I may be wrong. :)

  • I loved it! So-- sweet! Sad though, but still sweet. E/O forever! =) {kat}

  • Great Job... I love this song, and so was hoping a video was made to it. I love the format- excellent. And the fic... you just have to read if anyone out there hasn't.

  • Amazing job. Encore. i think it is one of the greast e/o videos of all time. outstanding job. this is a favorite. =)

  • i love ur video and tht fic!!!

  • OMG...I am honestly SPEECHLESS. I have NO WORDS..That video..wow..just...wow...Beaut­iful, heart touching, emotional...

    I cried. You gave such a great tribute to that fic! Beautiful...beautiful work!!

  • This has to be the best video EVER, really. Very touching, gave me goose bumps. I love the whole feel of it. I would go to see this movie in a heartbeat, just based on this. You did an OUTSTANDING job on this, Bravo.

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