Very good work! Excellent coordination of image and sounfd. I would muchly prefer it, though, if you kept only the first idea (the stensil in darkness) and made it significantly shorter, addind a narration of the text.
@maurosgatos Yes, it would be better shorter: I have chosen a fixed duration of three minutes for all my Invisible Cities, and sometimes this is too much. As for narration, not only is Calvino's copyright correctly protected, but there is a major question: which language should it be read in?
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Keiichi0717 1 month ago
Very good work! Excellent coordination of image and sounfd. I would muchly prefer it, though, if you kept only the first idea (the stensil in darkness) and made it significantly shorter, addind a narration of the text.
maurosgatos 2 months ago
@maurosgatos Yes, it would be better shorter: I have chosen a fixed duration of three minutes for all my Invisible Cities, and sometimes this is too much. As for narration, not only is Calvino's copyright correctly protected, but there is a major question: which language should it be read in?
makeyourownworld 2 months ago