we had sum problms shooting the last scene for the reason tht we had less time ! and we literally had to cut out many things frm the script while shooting on location! i wish we cud complete the movie the way it was scripted ! anyway it jus became a journey for us, infact for the entire team, a journey of learning and im sure we wont make the same mistakes again! the experience n the fun we had is memorable!
I see you have worked harder on this, and there seem to be some good camerawork here. Still there are some cuts I would have left out, remember "Kill your darlings" ;) But I see big improvement. But you should have made the teaser shorter, teased us more. But good work, keep going :)
rest I love the shots, amazingly done job and i feel like saying just write a script, get a producer and shoot a freakin feature on HD or 35mm. great smoke shots, thats the hardest part lighting smoke :D trust me. great acting, the girl seems a bit shy, but naturally that's just a teaser, waiting for the whole thing :), then i ll give you a proper review.
anyhow, great work. as I told you on msn, work on lighting, get a proper dop, working with him and you will have a idea on lighting, rest crazy shots, you did miss something in the start, an aerial shot of the car, and then we go down, you' were missing continuity there!.
hassan man, i m speechless, the way you have improved.excellento it is , certainly. Respect for you bro, how everytime you produce something and your'e eagerly waiting for my response. Makes me feel big haha.
hey dude... this is an amazing work of art.. I love it man.. i seriously just LOVE it... u have made a masterpiece for sure, and yes, without any proper training.. Kudos to you bro!! =D
Judging from those 2 clips I'd say you're on your way. It's got a cool City of God vibe. Don't know if you've seen that movie. Anyway keep it up. If that's what you did without any film study yet, you're definitely on the right track!
Excellent camerawork! Very impressive.. finally i saw your trailer and it did not fail to meet my expections. As usual, captivating!
A9B2M 4 years ago
woah thank you very much! :)
hassaanislam 4 years ago
very immature!
gandabacharulz 4 years ago
Ahan... Great work buddies. im sure this Ganxta type moVie gonna click the media.. hope soon b released
shariques 4 years ago
no no its wont b out until we fix the sound problem! thanks to our boom man. he literally had the boom up in his ass! jk!
hassaanislam 4 years ago
looks good..when is it cming out?
ahmedz912 4 years ago
Hey hassan im soo proud of ya bro!
cant wait too see dis on aag..
btw.. the background score is by us hehehe
THE BAND O2 - SARGUZISHT
muazraja 4 years ago
looks great
rameezasif 4 years ago
we had sum problms shooting the last scene for the reason tht we had less time ! and we literally had to cut out many things frm the script while shooting on location! i wish we cud complete the movie the way it was scripted ! anyway it jus became a journey for us, infact for the entire team, a journey of learning and im sure we wont make the same mistakes again! the experience n the fun we had is memorable!
irisheye90 4 years ago
ye tv pe kab aye gi?
zerocooljunooni 4 years ago
I see you have worked harder on this, and there seem to be some good camerawork here. Still there are some cuts I would have left out, remember "Kill your darlings" ;) But I see big improvement. But you should have made the teaser shorter, teased us more. But good work, keep going :)
MoreTEN 4 years ago
Goooooood !!! :)
fahadaliasif 4 years ago
Nice One Hassan
Music as good as usual
Story seems to be interesting
Release the short film quickly
ChhatrapalN 4 years ago
Very nice Hassan.
I like some of the camera angles. but few were worst. Peace.
Am waiting to see this on agg.
Omerj4jumpy 4 years ago
good work hassan. I see a lot of improvement from your previous work. keep it up
SBProductions2 4 years ago
keep up the good work, your'e already there, you just need a producer that's it :). good song selection at the background :D
smaniq 4 years ago
rest I love the shots, amazingly done job and i feel like saying just write a script, get a producer and shoot a freakin feature on HD or 35mm. great smoke shots, thats the hardest part lighting smoke :D trust me. great acting, the girl seems a bit shy, but naturally that's just a teaser, waiting for the whole thing :), then i ll give you a proper review.
smaniq 4 years ago
anyhow, great work. as I told you on msn, work on lighting, get a proper dop, working with him and you will have a idea on lighting, rest crazy shots, you did miss something in the start, an aerial shot of the car, and then we go down, you' were missing continuity there!.
smaniq 4 years ago
hassan man, i m speechless, the way you have improved.excellento it is , certainly. Respect for you bro, how everytime you produce something and your'e eagerly waiting for my response. Makes me feel big haha.
smaniq 4 years ago
woah tht r some realy great comments! thank you everyone! thank u very much! :D
hassaanislam 4 years ago
except for a lot of guns in hand, and the attitude of the umm gangsters, looks promising ! Hope it is !
dehog 4 years ago
hey dude... this is an amazing work of art.. I love it man.. i seriously just LOVE it... u have made a masterpiece for sure, and yes, without any proper training.. Kudos to you bro!! =D
harisnaeem 4 years ago
Judging from those 2 clips I'd say you're on your way. It's got a cool City of God vibe. Don't know if you've seen that movie. Anyway keep it up. If that's what you did without any film study yet, you're definitely on the right track!
giammamike 4 years ago
The quality is compressd and the aspect ratio has been changed because of it.
hassaanislam 4 years ago