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  • I totally cried while readig this

  • ): I feel bad for Danika but Jemi got to get together? Amazing(:

    Nelena would be cool

  • Omg NEMI OMESHOT PLEZ!!!!!!!!!!

  • Ahhh!!! Wow! Loved it, and I have to admit, this has got to be the best jemi one shot everrr! Great job! I cried, and that's a good thing! Btw, u just earned urself a new subscriber! I'll look out for more one shots from you! ;)

  • Im happy Joe and Demi ended up together but wat about Nick and Danika!?i feel sorry for nick and danika.

    Oh and another oneshot should be...

    Nelena, Niley or any couple :P but i like Niey snd Nelena.

  • um can you try Nemi?Nelena?or niley.Three other couples I love.I cant stand to see Joe with sumone else

  • so bitter-sweet

  • NELENA!!!

  • Nemi please???

    AN it was so awesome

    but poor Danika.... she's all alone, well without parents =(

    BUT on the bright side she had Nick ;D

  • omg im crying!!! that was soo sad but it was a good story

  • I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • omg!

    this is so sad. for danika and nick :(

    OMG!

    icant stop crying.:(

    OMG!!!

    poor danika.

  • omg thats so sad! im feel ike crying! AND THE next story should be nelena plz

  • OMG!!! WHAT ABOUT DANIKA!! AND NICK!!! booo! I hate stories like this...but i love them! why did they have to die! it was so unnecessary! ohhh poor Danika :(

  • Whoa... yay that they ended up together, but said for Danika :(

  • nelena please : )

    i loved this one- the best one

    i was crying it was so sweet

  • omg....poor danika....

    if you do another oneshot .... let it be niley...

  • Nelena! please, I mean if you want it's up to you of course....

    that was an awesome story, I'm glad I subscribed :D

  • aww cute but poor danika

  • OMFG WHY THE F DID THEY DIE?!

    what happened to Danika?! AHHHHHH!

    i hate these stories, but they make me love them...

    AHHH!!

    lol: CURSES!!

    (jk)

  • so sad but not as sad as ur otherz and Nelena

  • Niley plz

  • OMG u r so good

    poor demi

    poor joe

    poor danika

  • Thats so sad :( Can you write about hwo Dani turned out?I wan to know,I know how'd I feel losing my parents in one day :'( I'm CRYING!Your cruel :( (;P)

  • Do Niley.

    Jelena and Nemi are yucky.

    lol

  • Amazing. :)

    Jelena or Nelena are good with me. ;)

  • you mean nine hundred ninety nine thousand and ninety nine stars? :)

  • loved it!

    Omg it was so sad i literally cried.

    Nelena!

  • OH!!! WHat song is that? I LOVED IT

  • I LOVE THIS. so so sad...

  • this is so sad yet so good

  • omg,im crying right now )'=

  • omg tht was so awesome...im trying not to cry b/c then my bro and parents will b like wats wrong and if i tell thm they'll b like oh thts stupid so i cant cry but tears are formed in my eyes...amazing job. *standing ovation*

  • omg....that was so sweet at the end!!!!!! i feel so bad that danika lost both her parents!!

    a couple i personally think is really cute is zac efron and taylor swift :P

  • Aw...

    Poor Dani.

    Loved it.

    Taylena please.

  • I loved it. So sad. So cute. I cried. But Joe was kind of selfish, I mean, he left his 5 year old daughter. Yes, he is happy with Demi, living in paradise. But Danika lost BOTH parents!

  • Nelena, Niley, or Jaylor...

  • Anything but jelena or nemi :/ love it two tears came out

  • You didn't make met cry, if that was what you tried to get us to do. Don't take it personally, I just haven't cried in a year... /From the middle of November it has been a year since I last cried.)

  • omg this made me cry from part 1 to part 3 and the music goes beautifully with this

    lol excuse my spellings as i cant really see because of my blurred vision lol

  • jelena nemi or joe and nicole anderson

  • oh my gosh!

    that was so sad!

    poor danika.

    erm....niley!

  • loved it!! =)

    anything EXCEPT Jelena :(

  • loved it :')

    niley :D

  • poor danika! :'(

    i hope nick takes care of her!

    ur next oneshot should be Joe/Nicole Anderson (macy from jonas)

  • this is my favorite one shot 2!!!loved it... im crying my eyes out!

  • i cried so much

  • i love it. ;] so saddd.

    oooh, do nelena.

  • ahhh.... sooo goodd.... it makes me cry..huhuuhuh..

  • i love it and i totally love this pic where did you get it?

  • this is one of the most amazing things I've ever read!

    i dont think ive cried this much at a story...ever! this is beautiful

    you're such an amazingly talented writer :)

  • I love this one shot too.

    Poor Danika. Her parents are gone. :(

    Nick is going to adopt her. :D

    I want a Nelena. Please! Nelena. Please!!! :)

  • OMG i cried what will happen with dani ??? and nick? i know its a one shot but please tell me...

    josmine (jasmine and joe ) lol

    or niley hah

  • I am literally bursting into tears. Oh my gosh. That was so amazing! Um.. Nelena or Niley? :)

  • omg this was the sadest one shot ever.

    but so beautiful at the same time.

  • I never cried this much for a story ='(

  • I cried like a fucking baby that needed to get its diaper changed desperately :P aww, that was so cute yet so sad!!! poor danika :(

  • I cant stop crying ='(

  • Nelena

  • nelena....i cried omg it was sooo sad...and the song fit it and made me cry even more lol

    youre a great writer...it takes alot to make me cry lol

  • NOOOOO! IT CANT B THE LAST 1! Plz make just 1 more so u can tell us wat happened 2 danika! PLZ! If u don't I'm gonna cry :'-( I'll sub if u make just 1 more! :-D

  • jelena lol omg poor danika dude i feel like crying lol this is so sad i will also do that if i was joe .... but pooor danika

  • Poor Dekina, she lost both her parents :( LOVED it though

  • OMG! This is the best one shot ever! :)

    Please make Nelena! :)

  • Please do Kemi! I love them together! PLEASE!

  • ;(

    So sad.

    but AMAZING!

    Jelena...or Nemi:)

  • Nelena!

    And please dont let it be a sad one!

  • That was.... sad.

    And amazingly terrible.

    Poor Danika.

    Nelena, btw ;)

  • Nelena (:

    oh my gosh! POOR Danika! :(

    Im imagining Nick taking care of her :D cutee.

    Im about to cry. that is soo sad. I hate that they both left their kid...but...it wasnt demi's fault..but why did Joe have ot leave?! :/

    anyways. LOVED IT! :D

  • so they both died?

  • I want a Nelena!

  • omg im like srsly crying i feel like hitting joe and comforting dani especially since she has my nickname im so sad rite now D: i can't believe they left dani y couldn't they take her she wanted to go WHY AHHHH im dying here i think im just about to die of tears this is so sad ur a great write ur one of a kind cuz a million is too short no one will ever compare to you ur writing has emotion in it u can feel it :D

  • nemi

  • Nemi

  • aw, I'm crying here! I loved it

  • Nelena

  • Nelena

  • awsome one shot it was sad but awsome!!! btw where did you get the image its awsome !

  • Niley or Nemi

  • OMFG!! they left danika!!! not cool!! so sad!!

  • that was bittersweet....

    poor Danika!!

    Where did you get that picture? I love it!

  • i'M CRYIONG SO MUCH RIGHT NOW

  • Jelena Or Taylena

  • Loved it!And please make another one shot!Nelena or Niley.Either one is fine.Just definatly NOT Jelena or Jiley.I can;t stand to see Joe and Demi with other people

  • niley for suree.

  • OMG so not fair... I'm crying!!

    This was so beautiful and with that song... God!! I could kill you for making me cry over this! ahah

    LOVED IT!! So beautiful! Really...

    nelena or niley, I don't mind... Jelena or jiley... ew... Sorry Jelena and Jiley fans.... but it's just that that doesn't work in my system... lol

  • really sad made me cry

  • Nemi or Niley

  • wait. does that mean they both died in the end?

  • Yeah, :)

  • nelena

  • aww that made me cry im still crying because of all of them!!!

  • omg im still crying!!

    at least they ended up together

    loved it!!

    maybe Nelena

  • So sad :(

    Poor Danika

    Cemi,Nemi,Kemi..

    I dont know :P

  • niley !!!!!!!!! and omg now danika is all alone so sad but this was relly gooodd

  • Awh, that's so cute!

    Poor Danika!

  • Love nelena

    possibly taylena

  • omg that was so freaking good that i cried your awazing writer

  • oh my gosh that was so beautiful! Thank you for being such a great writer :)

    Oh and I like Jelena/Niley

  • nelena

  • omg they died :(

  • made me cry lol and niley

  • Ohhmygoshhh!

    This was so sad.

    I cried..

    you're such a good writer!!

    Anyways, i think you should do Joley, Delena(David and Selena), or Zanessa.(:

  • oh no... poor danika... she's all alone I can't believe it this is soo sad, probably the saddest thing i have ever read but it's still amazing

    gosh i am sobbing over here

  • It was awesome, but it is sad that they died and left Danika. So sad, yet so good.

  • Haha sorry I deff don't like jelena had to let that out I like Erm how bout Nelena?

  • Nelena or niley it would be cool

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