Ahhh!!! Wow! Loved it, and I have to admit, this has got to be the best jemi one shot everrr! Great job! I cried, and that's a good thing! Btw, u just earned urself a new subscriber! I'll look out for more one shots from you! ;)
OMG!!! WHAT ABOUT DANIKA!! AND NICK!!! booo! I hate stories like this...but i love them! why did they have to die! it was so unnecessary! ohhh poor Danika :(
Thats so sad :( Can you write about hwo Dani turned out?I wan to know,I know how'd I feel losing my parents in one day :'( I'm CRYING!Your cruel :( (;P)
omg tht was so awesome...im trying not to cry b/c then my bro and parents will b like wats wrong and if i tell thm they'll b like oh thts stupid so i cant cry but tears are formed in my eyes...amazing job. *standing ovation*
I loved it. So sad. So cute. I cried. But Joe was kind of selfish, I mean, he left his 5 year old daughter. Yes, he is happy with Demi, living in paradise. But Danika lost BOTH parents!
You didn't make met cry, if that was what you tried to get us to do. Don't take it personally, I just haven't cried in a year... /From the middle of November it has been a year since I last cried.)
NOOOOO! IT CANT B THE LAST 1! Plz make just 1 more so u can tell us wat happened 2 danika! PLZ! If u don't I'm gonna cry :'-( I'll sub if u make just 1 more! :-D
NOOOOO! IT CANT B THE LAST 1! Plz make just 1 more so u can tell us wat happened 2 danika! PLZ! If u don't I'm gonna cry :'-( I'll sub if u make just 1 more! :-D
omg im like srsly crying i feel like hitting joe and comforting dani especially since she has my nickname im so sad rite now D: i can't believe they left dani y couldn't they take her she wanted to go WHY AHHHH im dying here i think im just about to die of tears this is so sad ur a great write ur one of a kind cuz a million is too short no one will ever compare to you ur writing has emotion in it u can feel it :D
Loved it!And please make another one shot!Nelena or Niley.Either one is fine.Just definatly NOT Jelena or Jiley.I can;t stand to see Joe and Demi with other people
I totally cried while readig this
Princess17ever 4 months ago
): I feel bad for Danika but Jemi got to get together? Amazing(:
Nelena would be cool
JoeJonasismine4ever0 1 year ago
Omg NEMI OMESHOT PLEZ!!!!!!!!!!
NickandDemiNemi 1 year ago
Ahhh!!! Wow! Loved it, and I have to admit, this has got to be the best jemi one shot everrr! Great job! I cried, and that's a good thing! Btw, u just earned urself a new subscriber! I'll look out for more one shots from you! ;)
iilovejemii 2 years ago
Im happy Joe and Demi ended up together but wat about Nick and Danika!?i feel sorry for nick and danika.
Oh and another oneshot should be...
Nelena, Niley or any couple :P but i like Niey snd Nelena.
Jemi4thewin 2 years ago
um can you try Nemi?Nelena?or niley.Three other couples I love.I cant stand to see Joe with sumone else
xoPeaceLuvBffxo 2 years ago
so bitter-sweet
flyArea52 2 years ago 2
NELENA!!!
Chrissy21Jonas 2 years ago
Nemi please???
AN it was so awesome
but poor Danika.... she's all alone, well without parents =(
BUT on the bright side she had Nick ;D
DeNiiZzE93 2 years ago
omg im crying!!! that was soo sad but it was a good story
viabelle1928 2 years ago
I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
jaystar29 2 years ago
omg!
this is so sad. for danika and nick :(
OMG!
icant stop crying.:(
OMG!!!
poor danika.
peacemakerbby039 2 years ago
omg thats so sad! im feel ike crying! AND THE next story should be nelena plz
XhateX290 2 years ago
OMG!!! WHAT ABOUT DANIKA!! AND NICK!!! booo! I hate stories like this...but i love them! why did they have to die! it was so unnecessary! ohhh poor Danika :(
KerryEustace 2 years ago
Whoa... yay that they ended up together, but said for Danika :(
JemiSupport547 2 years ago
nelena please : )
i loved this one- the best one
i was crying it was so sweet
megan3105 2 years ago
omg....poor danika....
if you do another oneshot .... let it be niley...
DorsyJB 2 years ago
Nelena! please, I mean if you want it's up to you of course....
that was an awesome story, I'm glad I subscribed :D
cutepenguinz 2 years ago
aww cute but poor danika
DemiSelenaJoseph 2 years ago
OMFG WHY THE F DID THEY DIE?!
what happened to Danika?! AHHHHHH!
i hate these stories, but they make me love them...
AHHH!!
lol: CURSES!!
(jk)
Minizuki551 2 years ago
so sad but not as sad as ur otherz and Nelena
bedwardjeneesme 2 years ago
Niley plz
jemixjemi 2 years ago
OMG u r so good
poor demi
poor joe
poor danika
argentinajb 2 years ago
Thats so sad :( Can you write about hwo Dani turned out?I wan to know,I know how'd I feel losing my parents in one day :'( I'm CRYING!Your cruel :( (;P)
xsportzgurlx 2 years ago
Do Niley.
Jelena and Nemi are yucky.
lol
JemixShanie 2 years ago
Amazing. :)
Jelena or Nelena are good with me. ;)
kneykney11 2 years ago
you mean nine hundred ninety nine thousand and ninety nine stars? :)
JemixShanie 2 years ago
loved it!
Omg it was so sad i literally cried.
Nelena!
JCDANCE01 2 years ago
OH!!! WHat song is that? I LOVED IT
xSparklingStar16x 2 years ago
I LOVE THIS. so so sad...
articapple 2 years ago
this is so sad yet so good
Every1LovesJemi 2 years ago
omg,im crying right now )'=
SuperPeaceLoveJONAS1 2 years ago
omg tht was so awesome...im trying not to cry b/c then my bro and parents will b like wats wrong and if i tell thm they'll b like oh thts stupid so i cant cry but tears are formed in my eyes...amazing job. *standing ovation*
mrsjoejonas8000 2 years ago
omg....that was so sweet at the end!!!!!! i feel so bad that danika lost both her parents!!
a couple i personally think is really cute is zac efron and taylor swift :P
avisinah 2 years ago
Aw...
Poor Dani.
Loved it.
Taylena please.
CooroFan 2 years ago
I loved it. So sad. So cute. I cried. But Joe was kind of selfish, I mean, he left his 5 year old daughter. Yes, he is happy with Demi, living in paradise. But Danika lost BOTH parents!
SelenaDemiAlysonJenn 2 years ago
Nelena, Niley, or Jaylor...
SelenaDemiAlysonJenn 2 years ago
Anything but jelena or nemi :/ love it two tears came out
samysami7 2 years ago
You didn't make met cry, if that was what you tried to get us to do. Don't take it personally, I just haven't cried in a year... /From the middle of November it has been a year since I last cried.)
GoOnJB 2 years ago
omg this made me cry from part 1 to part 3 and the music goes beautifully with this
lol excuse my spellings as i cant really see because of my blurred vision lol
kuhadiza 2 years ago
jelena nemi or joe and nicole anderson
jenessa122 2 years ago
oh my gosh!
that was so sad!
poor danika.
erm....niley!
xxmelodiezacloverxx 2 years ago
loved it!! =)
anything EXCEPT Jelena :(
selenagomezlova97 2 years ago
loved it :')
niley :D
FrogsGoMiuMiu83 2 years ago
poor danika! :'(
i hope nick takes care of her!
ur next oneshot should be Joe/Nicole Anderson (macy from jonas)
luvinJOEjonas 2 years ago
this is my favorite one shot 2!!!loved it... im crying my eyes out!
bibsrn 2 years ago
i cried so much
MsJonasbrothersgirl 2 years ago
i love it. ;] so saddd.
oooh, do nelena.
TW1ST3DSYMPHONY 2 years ago
ahhh.... sooo goodd.... it makes me cry..huhuuhuh..
michelleluvblue28 2 years ago
i love it and i totally love this pic where did you get it?
JAMYLOVESDEMILOVATO 2 years ago
this is one of the most amazing things I've ever read!
i dont think ive cried this much at a story...ever! this is beautiful
you're such an amazingly talented writer :)
nataloola 2 years ago
I love this one shot too.
Poor Danika. Her parents are gone. :(
Nick is going to adopt her. :D
I want a Nelena. Please! Nelena. Please!!! :)
sayekuna10 2 years ago
OMG i cried what will happen with dani ??? and nick? i know its a one shot but please tell me...
josmine (jasmine and joe ) lol
or niley hah
jonasgirl36512 2 years ago
I am literally bursting into tears. Oh my gosh. That was so amazing! Um.. Nelena or Niley? :)
xAshleyxAmyx 2 years ago
omg this was the sadest one shot ever.
but so beautiful at the same time.
SarahAlwaysKnows10 2 years ago
I never cried this much for a story ='(
jemifan11 2 years ago
I cried like a fucking baby that needed to get its diaper changed desperately :P aww, that was so cute yet so sad!!! poor danika :(
xxxTakeABreathxxx 2 years ago
I cant stop crying ='(
jemifan11 2 years ago
Nelena
crazybaby2120 2 years ago
nelena....i cried omg it was sooo sad...and the song fit it and made me cry even more lol
youre a great writer...it takes alot to make me cry lol
cantreadme27 2 years ago
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NOOOOO! IT CANT B THE LAST 1! Plz make just 1 more so u can tell us wat happened 2 danika! PLZ! If u don't I'm gonna cry :'-( I'll sub if u make just 1 more! :-D
WWERocks620 2 years ago
NOOOOO! IT CANT B THE LAST 1! Plz make just 1 more so u can tell us wat happened 2 danika! PLZ! If u don't I'm gonna cry :'-( I'll sub if u make just 1 more! :-D
WWERocks620 2 years ago
jelena lol omg poor danika dude i feel like crying lol this is so sad i will also do that if i was joe .... but pooor danika
13fernandaiscool 2 years ago
Poor Dekina, she lost both her parents :( LOVED it though
kawakamanga 2 years ago
OMG! This is the best one shot ever! :)
Please make Nelena! :)
eryjonas 2 years ago
Please do Kemi! I love them together! PLEASE!
Avrilrocks989 2 years ago
;(
So sad.
but AMAZING!
Jelena...or Nemi:)
jen17hilary 2 years ago
Nelena!
And please dont let it be a sad one!
NoorHilwaniie94 2 years ago
That was.... sad.
And amazingly terrible.
Poor Danika.
Nelena, btw ;)
UniqueMakis 2 years ago
Nelena (:
oh my gosh! POOR Danika! :(
Im imagining Nick taking care of her :D cutee.
Im about to cry. that is soo sad. I hate that they both left their kid...but...it wasnt demi's fault..but why did Joe have ot leave?! :/
anyways. LOVED IT! :D
jemiandnelenalovers 2 years ago
so they both died?
demilovatolover1993 2 years ago
I want a Nelena!
LDgirl8 2 years ago
omg im like srsly crying i feel like hitting joe and comforting dani especially since she has my nickname im so sad rite now D: i can't believe they left dani y couldn't they take her she wanted to go WHY AHHHH im dying here i think im just about to die of tears this is so sad ur a great write ur one of a kind cuz a million is too short no one will ever compare to you ur writing has emotion in it u can feel it :D
Tayandrobluver 2 years ago
nemi
hotgirl756 2 years ago
Nemi
hotgirl756 2 years ago
aw, I'm crying here! I loved it
kuuipozv 2 years ago
Nelena
emmass66 2 years ago
Nelena
emmass66 2 years ago
awsome one shot it was sad but awsome!!! btw where did you get the image its awsome !
zacalishus 2 years ago
Niley or Nemi
hollisterluver20 2 years ago
OMFG!! they left danika!!! not cool!! so sad!!
anonymouslypopular 2 years ago
that was bittersweet....
poor Danika!!
Where did you get that picture? I love it!
DollingerBabe16 2 years ago
i'M CRYIONG SO MUCH RIGHT NOW
PopStarAndSisters 2 years ago
Jelena Or Taylena
22pretty22 2 years ago
Loved it!And please make another one shot!Nelena or Niley.Either one is fine.Just definatly NOT Jelena or Jiley.I can;t stand to see Joe and Demi with other people
xoPeaceLuvBffxo 2 years ago
niley for suree.
lovebugagainxx3 2 years ago
OMG so not fair... I'm crying!!
This was so beautiful and with that song... God!! I could kill you for making me cry over this! ahah
LOVED IT!! So beautiful! Really...
nelena or niley, I don't mind... Jelena or jiley... ew... Sorry Jelena and Jiley fans.... but it's just that that doesn't work in my system... lol
MartuXa16 2 years ago
really sad made me cry
loverboyz45 2 years ago
Nemi or Niley
Mikki586 2 years ago
wait. does that mean they both died in the end?
caison95 2 years ago
Yeah, :)
aznxsweetiex3 2 years ago
nelena
nelenalover11 2 years ago
aww that made me cry im still crying because of all of them!!!
tina24tinker1 2 years ago
omg im still crying!!
at least they ended up together
loved it!!
maybe Nelena
mizzshorty64 2 years ago
So sad :(
Poor Danika
Cemi,Nemi,Kemi..
I dont know :P
Vontavia09 2 years ago
niley !!!!!!!!! and omg now danika is all alone so sad but this was relly gooodd
titanicleolove123 2 years ago
Awh, that's so cute!
Poor Danika!
xxjoejonasluver96xx 2 years ago
Love nelena
possibly taylena
1virocker 2 years ago
omg that was so freaking good that i cried your awazing writer
xxMagicalPizzaxx 2 years ago
oh my gosh that was so beautiful! Thank you for being such a great writer :)
Oh and I like Jelena/Niley
laneline52395 2 years ago
nelena
tonyygirl 2 years ago
omg they died :(
minimuffinsjemilove 2 years ago
made me cry lol and niley
DramaQueen7498 2 years ago
Ohhmygoshhh!
This was so sad.
I cried..
you're such a good writer!!
Anyways, i think you should do Joley, Delena(David and Selena), or Zanessa.(:
xomiszloverxo 2 years ago
oh no... poor danika... she's all alone I can't believe it this is soo sad, probably the saddest thing i have ever read but it's still amazing
gosh i am sobbing over here
saBse14love 2 years ago
It was awesome, but it is sad that they died and left Danika. So sad, yet so good.
MsPurpleDragofly 2 years ago
Haha sorry I deff don't like jelena had to let that out I like Erm how bout Nelena?
iCookieesXx 2 years ago
Nelena or niley it would be cool
tinkiwinki4ever 2 years ago