Dramatic Monologue

[mmhstalker23]

this is awful

[mmhstalker23]

u need more emotion and u need to really work on it.

[mustafaalhamid1]

u need dramatic techniques for yr play u cant just read a learnt piece of by heart honestly that wouldve rocked if u added a bit of suger on it any how i like the way u were trying to cry

[zeromenace]

to much playing up the camera...  but it was ok ..

[babybooty2461]

what is the last sentence you said after "but you dont get it.."??