Your voice is blan on it as if you were just reading it off a paper, the vocals were low, and idk why but the sound is something i can't get used to... its need some work... ---
and don't hate me for this my life is based on music and i just dont want you fail x.x
I hate it when people spam for their vids in the comments of popular vids, but I thought I'd give you a shot.
You have a decent sound, but all the focus is on the instruments, which all mesh together too well (from distortion) to be a good focus. Bump up the balance on the vocals and put more work into melody/harmony. There are tons of bands with that instrumental sound, so you need to have something to set you apart. Good luck!
@SyreenInSapphire i'm the lead guitarist in the band, thanks for your opinion :) can i ask if you know who it was that commented about the video to lead you here? and on what video it was on?
Woah almost a thousand views! Fair play, just gotta get the music video up :)
DysfunctionSB 6 months ago
Not a unique sound. Honestly, they sound like every other second-rate band.
Jarrheadd00 7 months ago
Your voice is blan on it as if you were just reading it off a paper, the vocals were low, and idk why but the sound is something i can't get used to... its need some work... ---
and don't hate me for this my life is based on music and i just dont want you fail x.x
NaomiStarCrazy 7 months ago
I hate it when people spam for their vids in the comments of popular vids, but I thought I'd give you a shot.
You have a decent sound, but all the focus is on the instruments, which all mesh together too well (from distortion) to be a good focus. Bump up the balance on the vocals and put more work into melody/harmony. There are tons of bands with that instrumental sound, so you need to have something to set you apart. Good luck!
SyreenInSapphire 7 months ago
@SyreenInSapphire i'm the lead guitarist in the band, thanks for your opinion :) can i ask if you know who it was that commented about the video to lead you here? and on what video it was on?
SamEqualsMusic 7 months ago
@SamEqualsMusic
I believe it was on "Playing God" by Paramore, but I don't know who commented it.
SyreenInSapphire 7 months ago
@SyreenInSapphire thanks! :)
SamEqualsMusic 7 months ago
Wow I love it there great!! <3 :)
2016BlulRose 7 months ago
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bhawkins04 8 months ago
this is sooooo good for a first song!!!! :D
HowToTrainANarwal 8 months ago
how can someone disslike this? o,O
19philip96 8 months ago 8
"My Patience will be the Death of me" - This is awesome.
alexxross 8 months ago 6
2 dislikes? Whaaat!
FreakyThom 8 months ago
@FreakyThom 3 now, this makes me sad :|
SamEqualsMusic 8 months ago
So good!!
Bierob3 8 months ago
awesome!
JSzumowski 8 months ago