I like the progression of the story. Nicely done. Have you thought about doing voice overs to help get rid of the background noise in the park and to make the Mark's dialog more clear in the bedroom? (since you played the mark it would be easy to play around with it.) Have you ever tried playing with lighting? I don't film very much at night, so I don't have any great tips, but if you had some studio lights or something similar, it may help! Anyway, great movie! loved it.
I like the progression of the story. Nicely done. Have you thought about doing voice overs to help get rid of the background noise in the park and to make the Mark's dialog more clear in the bedroom? (since you played the mark it would be easy to play around with it.) Have you ever tried playing with lighting? I don't film very much at night, so I don't have any great tips, but if you had some studio lights or something similar, it may help! Anyway, great movie! loved it.
withil 2 years ago
Nice work! Love it!
ProfessorZaroff 2 years ago