You Are Mine~A Jacob and Renesmee Story~Chapter Thirteen

[katherinered1]

I just found this story and im in love with it please continue

[xxalielovexx98]

love it more plz

[0CTracey]

post more NOW

[366starfish]

this was posted in 2010 are you going to post any mor or not its almost 2012

[LivLaughLove1196]

POST THE NEXT CHAPER! I LOVE THIS STORY!

[inuitgirl99]

Your story is really good please post the next chapter it is so freaky

I wanna know what happens next

i wanna see carlisle fighting with the oldest one and Bella or Edward with Kassy and Jacob is coming because he sudddenly realize that he has to help Nessie and murder Kyle

Yes and than they are going home and helping Nessie to get her memories back they show her everything but she can't remember then Jacob kisses her and she would have all her memories back

That would be a good ending

[sodapopTL]

have you stopped writting? its been about a year since you last posted

[HeartRoslieCullen]

Fourteen please?

[ebtwinkletoes79]

fourteen?????

[Caseyerincullen]

where is fourteen??

[DevinJane14]

how rude why would u control a girl like tht. i b et when she see's jacob once again it will change she will come to her sences, i hope

!?!

[mileycyrusgirl66]

omg! wheres 14!

im in love with this!

HURRY! PLEASE!

[CrAzYForHiM4]

WRITE MORE I BEG OF U!! BTW I LOVE THE SERIOUS!!! LOVE YOU!!!

[TheBrianna7789]

NOOOOOOOO when do you think you will post the next one i love this series!!!!!!!

[CrAzYForHiM4]

@TheBrianna7789 I AGREE



[LadyCrimsonHeart]

Oh and good work!!! Like your style of writing, very descriptive. I like to write myself :D But I have made up my own fantasy/love stories :)

Keep it up and you could go far!!!

[LadyCrimsonHeart]

1.Doesn't really matter.

2.Kyle is making her believe she loves him to take be the most powerful of all vampires but she is strong willed and will snap out of it (Jacob + Kyle should have a fight and during it Renesmee's affections will slowly go back to Jacob as Kyle gets weaker and Renesmee then finishes Kyle off) lol :P

3. Kyle is just power hungry, as are the others - maybe due to rubbish human lives.

4. Has to be the Cullens :)

5. Up to you for the ending... But Ness and Jake = <3 :D

[ParodyGyrlz]

@LadyCrimsonHeart thats exactly how i imagined it! kyle & jake fight, renesmee breaks free from kyle's mind tricks, and she kills him herself. then it's happily ever after for nessie and jakey :)

[LadyCrimsonHeart]

@ParodyGyrlz Yeah, that would be the best ending :) (In my eyes)

Great minds think alike, they say :P

[querenmm99]

love it post soon:D

[loveyoutaylor1]

Oh and for number 5 add his: and he will end up being a member of the volturi and the cullens and wolfs killed Kyle, his family, and the volturi! O and the cullens will be one the new "royal" family and stuff!!! Lolz

[loveyoutaylor1]

1. Doesn't really matter in my eyes.

2. I think shell snap out if it when she's sees her family

3. Hate him. And cuz he prob treatened them

4. Cullens and wolfs.... HOPFULLY

5. I just want a new episode but Nessie suprising Jake when she gets back and then them gittin together

[br422ify]

1 I WISH THEY DIDN'T DIE

2 YEAH IT DID

3 IDK

4 CULLEN'S DUH

5 IDK

[sillysky9]

when are you posting a new video

[mylove4music1]

1. i dont really care if they died

2. she'll snap out...i hope

3. idk

4. cullens duh

5. idk...i like the person who comment before me idea

hurry with the nest eppie plz

[TwilightEpisodes]

1. Uh, I don't really mind that they're dead. Yeah, I know, I'm mean! LOL

2. I HOPE she'll snap out of it.

3. His family is twisted, that's why

4. I WANT THE CULLENS TO WIN

5. I think the Volturi should help the Cullens and kick this DAMN FAMILY'S butts!

Oh, and why do you take so long??? It's torturing!

[clublokez]

Meghan your such a great writer!!

Hey when is the next ch of laughing while I sing going to be up?

Ohkay anyway ahmazing...as always :)

[CooperOpie08]

1. I didnt suspect it and its sad that they are.

2. I hate what kyle is doing and I think she will find some way to fight her way out of it.

3. Well he does have mind control right so cant he just convince the others to be on his side

4. The cullens of course! at least I hope so!

5. I want Nessie to be the one to save her family!

[400yellowjello]

1. I'm very sad that they are dead... :(

2. I'm not sure, but I hope she does.

3. I think he's evil. They're on his side because they are retarded.

4. The Cullens. Hopefully.

5. well, I want the Cullens to win.