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  • aw i loved ittt !

    i subbed, and oh do you think you can help me get subs on my story called much better on my other account productionsKS, please check it out :)

  • oh my gosh! You have got to post soon Please! my friend told me about your story so i started reading it and it's Amazing. You're a really good writer. And I think opposite of your mom. I bet one day you will have a book because you're an awesome writer. can't wait for more!!!

  • oh no.

    this will be interesting.

    because honestly, i'm not sure if I know what happened, and that's saying a lot.

    in a good way :)

  • ahh I feel bad for Nick but its really sweet how worried he is about Ellie

  • LOVE ITT! JILL

    Just as good as the first time I read it!

  • ahhhh this is amazingg!! whatever makes you think the story is lame... you're wrong! haha and omgg joe is sooo sweeet to his brotherr!!! and im glad nick's ok.. even though he looks horrible. i cant wait for him to see ellie again!!! oh and my story is in related videos :D Hahah just felt like saying it :D loved it honeeyyy

  • ahhh i loved it

    your mum is silly.

    i know you will. you will become famouser then j.k rowling :]

    and then i can be like.

    OMFG that is my chocolate chip buddy :D

    i love youu

  • this story makes me sad. I cried at the end of marley&me. And is joe gonna tell Nick the truth?

  • I want the next one...NOW!!! haha;)

  • What are you talking about?

    No one likes this story...psht, I LOVE IT.

    and yes, you WILL have a book in the library.

    And I'll buy a copy.

    Which will be autographed.

    And personalized to me.

    Duh. :)

  • I will hand it to you personally. :p

    hehe

    that'd be cool. Yeah!

  • whoa there, HANDED to me?

    Your mom wont even let you come to NY.

    Dont get your hopes up.

    But still, That would be SO COOL.

    And youll be a famous auther. You could do anything.

    (Like come visit me...)

  • Ugh.

    I know it.

    But I will hand it to you. One of the first copies. I'm sure. :)

  • here's where I'm getting my hopes up.

    Taylor Launter is going to be in it!

    hahahahahhahahaahhahahahahaah

  • if they made a movie. Which they willll pfttt

    :D

  • Whoa, ONE of the first?

    but i want the first copy!!!!!!.

    sigh.

    and theyd have to make a movie out of it.

    since itll be an awesome book.

  • Um. HELLO. Author gets the first copy!

    and.. i think it's coming along nicely. that is if it's the one that i'm doing.. yeha

    pft.

    it'll be awesome.

  • you cant give me it?

    it'll be an honor.

    to give your biggest fan the very first copy of this currently untitled book.

  • No. It's mine.

    You can have like.. the 10th or something.

    And... I'm sure it'll have a title soon enough.

  • THE 10TH???

    but, but....but...ugh. fine.

    :P

  • hehe.

  • if you think about it...

    (and if the main character is a guy...)

    u can put taylor lautner for the cover

  • like... the back of his head!!!

    that'd be awesome. Like.. looking over his extreamly hot shoulder!

    eh... we'll see.

    ha

  • he doesn't remember?!?!?!?!??!!? oh boyyy now he has to relive it all over again when someone tells him what happend. and Nick + Ellie = ADORABLE.

  • I love it! Post again soon!! :D

  • You're definately not disappointing me with this story. This is completely the most creative, unique, and addicting story. For real. I love reading so much, and this story is awesome! Everytime I see you posted, I am so thrilled. I can't wait to see what happens with the story and I hope you post more often. :) Keep up the great work! And I totally believe you'll write a book one day, and I can't wait to read it. You rock!

  • Poor Nick....gosh he's gonna hate it if he finds out that Joe loves Ellie too....:/ But I'm glad he is somewhat ok now. :)

    I'm sorry you're depressed...I've seen Marley and Me too. It's so sad. Have you read the book?? I have. It's awesome. And they did a good job with the movie as well. :)

  • Yay! Nick! Love it!

    i love this story!!

    and I am definitely not dispointed at it at all!!! :D

  • i'm glad he's okay...and joe...i'm glad ur making an effort :)

  • dude whoevers dissappointed at ur stories needs to get a good reading counslor!!seriosuly!!ur writin is lyk THE BEST!!n i hope u do write a book one day so tht i can boast arnd sayin yo midgets thts my frnds book ur readin!! HA! i know her n u guys dont!! lol anyhoooo back to the story.amazing as always poor nick i feel for him.n joe for the millionth tym u belong wid megan DUH!hmm i wonder what made nick say tht at the end..post more soon :) n idk wat sixlets are.i do know skittles tho..lol...

  • I'm not dissappointed at all with this story! I love it! And take your time with the other stories. I can understand that completely.

  • you know i hate you :P you make amazing storys and then i make crap ones and !!!!! im not in this i UGH!!!!

  • Sixlets are amazing!! LOVE them :]

    And i LOVE this story ! :)

  • lovedddd the chpater!!

    i love nick&&ellie together :)))

  • loved it(:

    i already started school, my 1st day was last thursday T_T haha

    and ive never heard of Sixlets...till now haha

    Honestly you are not disappointing me with this story haha. i love it!

    im sorry your depressed!

    but when you do have a book in a library someday, make sure to tell me! ill be the first one to pick it up haha!

    ive never watched Marley and Me LOL

    is it good? (:

  • uh oh he has to tell nick he's falling for her

    btw what u wrote in the start....didnt get any of it :/

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