I found your voice hypnotic! What a talent you are, will enjoy what else you have posted I am sure. Great Job! and keep on writing and singing your own stuff, it is so refreshing!
Great song, It's funny how people with no musical talent at all try to give you constructive criticism, but I guess most people who listen to music are not musicians. Kind of a catch 22, the battle between writing good music and writing the music that most of the general public wants to hear which is usually crap. Especially in today's crappy Disney monopolized music industry. I usually don't rant my opinions like that, I must be hungry and grumpy or something.
nice but i think that somethings a little off in the song. Don't get me wrong i love a lot of yours songs and the lyrics to them, but this one has something strange to it. Piano and voice don't always flow well at certain points. but still good :)
@wwechampion8 I'm pretty sure wwe meant "badest" in a good way. Bad means good nowadays :D if he really meant "not good" he would have typed "worst" not badest lol
I love the words, the song structure, the flow but I think it would sound a lot better either in a different key or on a guitar with a less repetative progression...gets kind of old on the ears. just a suggestion.
I found your voice hypnotic! What a talent you are, will enjoy what else you have posted I am sure. Great Job! and keep on writing and singing your own stuff, it is so refreshing!
leadlightlady 1 year ago
Great song, It's funny how people with no musical talent at all try to give you constructive criticism, but I guess most people who listen to music are not musicians. Kind of a catch 22, the battle between writing good music and writing the music that most of the general public wants to hear which is usually crap. Especially in today's crappy Disney monopolized music industry. I usually don't rant my opinions like that, I must be hungry and grumpy or something.
RyanUnplugged 1 year ago
BEAUTIFUL VOICE :)
KittieCaat 2 years ago
I love it..!
Your voice is remarkable..!
Reminds me a bit of Tori Amos
5 stars...
christrealized 2 years ago
nice but i think that somethings a little off in the song. Don't get me wrong i love a lot of yours songs and the lyrics to them, but this one has something strange to it. Piano and voice don't always flow well at certain points. but still good :)
japaneseluvinfreak 2 years ago
I dont get the melody nor the chord progression, couldnt reproduce this even if I wanted to.
jonasjar 2 years ago
great song !
congratulations!!
silvioAT 2 years ago
Repetitive and trite. Nice voice and effort though. Keep it up.
nick00goku 2 years ago
Repetitive...maybe. Trite? How is this trite? Do you hear songs with this same style all the time? This is not trite, or banal. Get a dictionary.
oakpianist 2 years ago
Trite my ass...
This is wonderful.
brittleeperkins 2 years ago
badest voice in the world
wwechampion8 2 years ago
@wwechampion8 I'm pretty sure wwe meant "badest" in a good way. Bad means good nowadays :D if he really meant "not good" he would have typed "worst" not badest lol
This song is bad to the bone 5/5
RyanUnplugged 1 year ago
very very nice song!!!!!!!!but try to put it to lower key...
littlerainworm550 2 years ago
very nice
jmm1714 3 years ago
I love the words, the song structure, the flow but I think it would sound a lot better either in a different key or on a guitar with a less repetative progression...gets kind of old on the ears. just a suggestion.
thekoda 3 years ago
wow!!
jovossuck123 3 years ago
This song is sooo amazing!!! :)
alluneedislove18 3 years ago
YAY! ive been waiting for a new song from you :P
rainbosprinkles 3 years ago
I very much liked to listen to your new song - and somehow felt really hypnotized by your music. What you do is great.
Alberad08 3 years ago
oh and is this on itunes yet?? i want it!!!
LifeIsBeautiful90 3 years ago
thanks!!! its not a itunes yet... hopefully eventually...
DylanPatrello 3 years ago
I LOVE your voice!!! :)
LifeIsBeautiful90 3 years ago
Great song! Lovely! *****
I enjoyed the way the lyrics danced across the top of the melody ~very musical tune! <3
moondogg55 3 years ago
thanks moondogg!! ha i felt like the lyrics/melody was very dancy too in some weird way lol
DylanPatrello 3 years ago
On earth Jamie, you will stay on earth
MattFlynn000 3 years ago
that was beautiful
fijberto 3 years ago
i liked the 5/8
fnordly 3 years ago
thanks!!! it was so hard to get that part down haha
DylanPatrello 3 years ago
Awesome piece :) Special sound to it :)
And really nice voice =) 5st
Thomas
thomandy 3 years ago
It has real nice lyrics ,
a great original post!
BeautifulGirlByDana 3 years ago
oh dang. so melodic. that was awesome. Million dollar hands.
Do you have nails? could you play with long nails?
surfnakd23 3 years ago
yes i have nails.. they're medium length.. should probably be shorter.. i dont even own nail clippers tho i just always rip em off
DylanPatrello 3 years ago
u rip them off? ouch man. why would you do this. im sending you nail clippers. so do you paint them?
surfnakd23 3 years ago
@DylanPatrello That's bad ass
RyanUnplugged 1 year ago