Little Girl, Big Liar [DEMO] Music Video

[ArabellaMuerte]

You should totally reupload this with the full song from "idiot child"....I love it :)

[batgaff]

I like this. Can i offer some constrauctive thoughts though?

I like the quiet, almost whispered part of the song, but to carry it all the way through means the sound isnt textured. At around the 1 min mark when you enter the next phrase, I would be tempted to come away from the acoustic entirely and get some distorted guitar, maybe some drums, (just fills, not a pattern), maybe increase the tempo slightly. Increase your vocal volume to become more shouty and angry, return to acoustic and fade

[kelseymg13]

you said "when I slipped and fall" and your verbs don't match! slipped is past tense and fall is present tense! I love the song but that part bothers me sooooo much :(

[candycabaret]

@kelseymg13 Except for that fact I say "slip and fall" and not "slipped and fall". I wouldn't mix verbs! I love English too much!

[kelseymg13]

@candycabaret lol, just listened to it more carefully and I stand corrected :) Now I love the song in ALL of it's entirety :D

[logankowarsky]

so sincere and actually awesome. best of all, your voice is sooo soothing :) refreshing to see some artists on here

[tsukikyou]

Very interesting

[DiegosLover33]

I can totes see nips at 0:32

niiiiice

[candycabaret]

@DiegosLover33 You know it! :D

[cecilia924]

i think you shouldn't listen to any negative comments.i think this is really good. i notice someone said something about the song being very simple and the lyrics being forced...well, everyones opinions are different and i disagree completely. regardless, if it took you a year or 5 minutes to write, i like it a lot. as long as what you do makes YOU happy and you're comfortable doing it and happy with it then do it how YOU want.

[LaurenIzaMeerkat]

I love it.

[kiah666necr0]

im not sure why but i like this..its...weird. but i kinda like it!

[bebeblingable]

was u singin love the clip

[lovefatebeauty]

i like it , maybe you should show off your vocals more though and not whisper. very interesting,

[WonderGigger]

This song is my new obsession, just sayen.

[OnlineImprovComedy1]

I love it

the black and white theme is awsome its not like the ones on i movie or i photo its more lighter and at the same time more darker. it reminds me hd kinda but i could be wrong

[HeyTrain]

Also, the "I'm not losing my mind" bit goes on for too long, and is kind of lame and overdone as it is. It doesn't really go with the title or rest of the song either.

Anyway, good effort but I'm not really digging it. I tried to give constructive criticism though.

[HeyTrain]

Hmmm. The aesthetics of this are nice, but the actual song isn't very good. First of all it doesn't have much structure musically. The lyrics strike me as pretentious and somewhat forced. I just can't take all these songs and poems that treat the word "cigarette" as some sort of artistic element and use it in every single thing thinking they're creative. Cut that line and it would ALREADY be better.

[PachaTheGreat]

I like the emotion she give behind her voice. Her voice gives it a very melancholic attitude to me. She looks like my friend too maybe that what gave it such a sad feeling to me. I like the song though. =]

[yukaimeal]

great song, you'r really talented, wish i had your voice.

[DanBrino]

WOW! This is genius. You are unrealistically hot, and incredibly talented. Your like an Updated Lisa Loeb.

[NMattherz]

Really love this song and video (especially love your voice). Have you made other music before? Singer? Band?

Only thing that bothers me is that I feel like something is missing for the video. The song and video go well together, but maybe the video needs something more to catch the audience's attention aside from a very hot woman? I still love it though.

[Lalluz95]

I like it!!!!!!! :D

[earthwitch323]

I absolutely love this song.

[ennasooz]

love the rustic feel to this.. very homeade and eerie, love the lyrics, too

you have good music!! I would love to download it honestly I'd show my friends

[ColazioneDaThisvany]

i'm totally in love with your song, video and face. you're just like a dream, like in Cure's song.

[aliyabarter]

hate this song, hate this video. unlike every body else.

[candycabaret]

But why do you hate it?

I'm not being antagonistic, I really would like to know. What are your criticisms?

Love,

Hayley Jane

[Lalluz95]

I like it! :D

[Marmyg]

Love :)

[Lostinmytears23]

i love this

[ElektroAldi]

I like it :-)

[chywigley]

very into this. :) would love to be able to download this song. <3

[AnghellicSuicide]

I love you. And I love this video. I think you are absolutely talented. Can't wait get your next demo!!!!

#1 Fan.

Get more video's on YouTube!!

[Hachapury]

i like this song,but not the video

[m4keUP]

do you have this song as a single on like itunes or anything? I'd really like to download it, I love it. If not I guess I have to wait for the album :P

[irikkiyes]

wow, no really wow.

this is absolutly amazing.

i love ths, you are good at what you do :)

[LuvAddict2008]

well i love it. personally (now dont everyone get mad at me) but i think there are too many "im not loosing my mind"s.

[blackdeath14]

this is fabulous :D

xoxo

[emmeenchanted]

Very well done!! :)

[nixichixi85]

OMG THIS IS SO ARTISTIC!!! AHHH!!! great song! =)

[venusinfurs89]

I was running out of text, sorry. I just mean amateurish like, this is great, but I can't even imagine what you could do live or with adequate recording tools. In other words, I'm glad you're on here, but youtube doesn't do you justice. As for the lyrics, I love anything dark, sadistic and raw.  You should post the lyrics, although I'd be afraid someone might steal them.

[candycabaret]

Just you wait until the Hayley Jane HD DVD makes its way onto the internet. :D

I've been in and out of the studio for my second album, and I want to release a DVD sometime in the next year of music videos, burlesque performance, and other nonsense.

[venusinfurs89]

This is really great. I know people are going to hate me for this, but it does seem a little amateurish. But I mean it's youtube, homemade, and then through my crappy mac speakers. I was not expecting to like this, but you seem so sincere and you are so raw and seductive that it totally works. I don't know how to explain it. Like, open and innocent and so like a little girl playing dress up that it seems wrong to call it sexy. Which is why it works.

[xcountxcodyx]

I can't even put into words how much I love this song. I've listened to it sooo many times.

[velderia]

Miss K featured you on her blog! I squealed like a fangirl! 8DDD

[poppymoone]

mesmorising and haunting, the very odd thing is I remeber having my hair and make up identical to this around 20 years ago when i was 16...

[Maliki00]

Haunting and beautiful. Want a copy for my Ipod, it would go great with Abney Park n Dresden Dolls and Rasputina. Though I can only imagine the impact of the song live! True tallent, keep it up and DO NOT let yourself take the negative people seriously, they are blind AND deaf!

[KriBlackRoson]

favourites

[xFallenAngeLx666]

wow omg i love it =D

[Penquin420]

Amazing, I loved it.

:D

<3 Much loves.

[xAliceDollyMisfitToy]

LOVE it!! This is now my profile song on myspace =]

[gavillavome]

very sexy, but with shave eyebrows, you were so wonderful !!!

[lonelyaliceofficial]

gorgeous

[dixonsviolin]

Wonderful! Haunting, sexy, engaging, fascinating! Bravo!

- Dixon

[EmeraldGemstar09]

I applaud your decision to shoot in black and white - very dramatic and so engaging!! Well done indeed! Thanx so much for sharing with the world....

[jdrseven]

That was pretty sweet. you rock

[KuuLingonberry]

You're really gorgeous.

[Ember20]

This is kickass!! It's so sultry! Good job!

[zombiechick24]

OMG i love it!!, and i agree with person below, dont wanna here the cleaned up version hahah cause this is really haunting as it is =] xxx

[galactus5000]

Seriously, HJ, this is amazing. I don't think I want to hear a cleaned up version, that's how amazing it is.

[doodleheart]

really love this, kate...do a tutorial for the makeup too. (:

[xcountxcodyx]

I just keep listening to this over and over and over, love it.

[RainbowSylph]

interesting

[calicoboricua83]

*standing ovation*

[HelloFizzy]

this is cool very moldy peaches and fiona apple cool cool..hey you got your septum pierced

[xLolita138x]

this is beautiful!

[metamorphazised]

very nice!!

[TheBonnieRose]

beautiful

melancholic

poetry and 

vision

a feast for the ears and eyes and soul

Merci

*sparkles*

[LILSONIC88]

That was great Hayley Jane... BTW This Is Yung Denz

[annikee59]

We are watching a star rising. Serious. Hold on to your self; you're unique. That's precious these days.

[kindagorgeous]

so cool!!! love it!

[Cs2q]

you are so awesome, are you putting more of your songs up? please do. : ) i love all your music. <3

[belladonna818]

Seductively sadistic. Loveeee it. <3

You have the most amazing lips ever! Angelina has nothing on you!

Your septum piercing is definately not distracting in a bad way. ;D

[sketchyartydoll]

this is amazing !

[zacangermusic]

You're the best.

[1974crystal]

it's verry good

[JayteeStarr]

Little girl, you are fantastic. I'm always a sucker for a burlesque diva with rockin make up... And a good song makes it all the better. I like the "much like" parts... You're great!

[Wigglycito]

Very nice. I still love your voice. :D

[iinvalid]

amazingg<3

[kathleenvieira]

i love love love the song!

[larengalexus]

Your make up at 0:35 and 1:30 is awesome! I love it!!!! Please, make a tutorial of it :D

[candycabaret]

Haha, I totally will!

It's really simple.

[larengalexus]

Great! Thank you ^_^

[luxjewels]

yay im so excited to see you back!!

[Zoeebella]

Yay! More of Kate:o) Love it! Great piercing, too;o)

[RougePapillion]

I'm excited to see the first Hayley Jane video. It's great!

[caarrllyyy]

awesome

[vivalabeavaaa]

new video!

[drpepperaddict09]

o.o Your septum is pierced? So distracting in the video!

[VegasVersa]

Love it. So film-noiresque.

[HvAllience]

Lol..on point <3