Your voice does not suit the song. Raps should be obnoxious and in your face. You're talking to soft for this. Back up and give a small shout into your Turtles, bro. Maybe some autotune would be in order as well. Just a little. Then again, maybe not.
I think you should have less two word lines as well. But this has good potential.
Turtle beaches + rap = my next week. Aw..... Got a rap about Derpy in the works.
@MasterOfRegret Very cool and thanks for the tips! :) It was pretty experimental for a better portion of this from formatting in lyrics to match the song and making sure my voice wasn't too much louder than the music. I honestly went back and forth on the parts where I get to the two word sections as I didn't want to have too much of a gap between stanzas.
Your voice does not suit the song. Raps should be obnoxious and in your face. You're talking to soft for this. Back up and give a small shout into your Turtles, bro. Maybe some autotune would be in order as well. Just a little. Then again, maybe not.
I think you should have less two word lines as well. But this has good potential.
Turtle beaches + rap = my next week. Aw..... Got a rap about Derpy in the works.
MasterOfRegret 1 month ago
@MasterOfRegret Very cool and thanks for the tips! :) It was pretty experimental for a better portion of this from formatting in lyrics to match the song and making sure my voice wasn't too much louder than the music. I honestly went back and forth on the parts where I get to the two word sections as I didn't want to have too much of a gap between stanzas.
UltimaM2 1 month ago