I commented after only hearing the piece once. After listening several times I think you might as well remove the remark I made. It is not well thought out. Please forgive me for my confusing remarks.
I do think that if you could work on the timing is a little segmented but maybe that is your intention? I personally would like it more if it moved a little smoother and just a bit quicker.
Also what is your tuning for this piece?
I listened to a lot of your music and enjoyed all of it!
I really like the "sound Moods" you have created in your piece. .
When you change from into to next passage it is hard to tell where you are. Almost like feeling lost. If you could somehow add some bass accents to underpin the timing I think it would add to the continuity of the passage. Timing is very important to keep the themes throughout your song connected.
I really like it though and now will probably have that main melody stuck in my head for the rest on the night! Great job!
When I close my eyes I can almost see a mass wall of warrior type men, not in armor but kindda like Braveheart going off to kick some major butt! But its in slow motion. I love it :) Keep it up!
sehr coole ideen in dem stück, die gehämmerten harmonics sind klasse
Manofdarkdesires 1 year ago
@Manofdarkdesires Danke!
eschnack 1 year ago
I commented after only hearing the piece once. After listening several times I think you might as well remove the remark I made. It is not well thought out. Please forgive me for my confusing remarks.
I do think that if you could work on the timing is a little segmented but maybe that is your intention? I personally would like it more if it moved a little smoother and just a bit quicker.
Also what is your tuning for this piece?
I listened to a lot of your music and enjoyed all of it!
tullskull 2 years ago
Cool, glad you're liking it!
There's a lot of odd times going on here. A lot of 5/8 and 7/8...so it's not meant to have a steady rhythm, if that's what you mean.
The tuning is C G C G C Eb.
eschnack 2 years ago
I really like the "sound Moods" you have created in your piece. .
When you change from into to next passage it is hard to tell where you are. Almost like feeling lost. If you could somehow add some bass accents to underpin the timing I think it would add to the continuity of the passage. Timing is very important to keep the themes throughout your song connected.
I really like it though and now will probably have that main melody stuck in my head for the rest on the night! Great job!
tullskull 2 years ago
Thanks! I don't quite understand what part of the song you're referring to. Could you give me a time on the video for a specific example?
eschnack 2 years ago
When I close my eyes I can almost see a mass wall of warrior type men, not in armor but kindda like Braveheart going off to kick some major butt! But its in slow motion. I love it :) Keep it up!
Yngsatchvai 2 years ago
Wow, cool visual. Thanks!
eschnack 2 years ago
fucking sick!
acdc51502112 2 years ago