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  • can u re-open it :(

  • can i join?

  • Yes, you will be the last to join if you still wish to

  • yay XD,ok,my RPC is in my videos,her name is jessica,she has an inner demon named deimos,she is immortal,and she transforms having white hair,fangs and can sprout wings,shi is immortal,13 years old,she can be on teh good team :)

  • I love the way you described my team! It's fits perfectly with how I immagined they'd act XD Thanks!

  • No problem, no problem. XD I just try to get into their heads

  • so can i join

  • Oh. My. Lord. *Gives FireoftheHeart super ultra mega glomp of doom* Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou, thankyou, thankyou, THANKYOUUUU!

  • Haha,

    what's all this for?

  • <3 I like the way you described Ruuki :D

  • That's good to hear! :D

  • I'm having some issues with the site at the moment; I'll get the latest chapter up as soon as I possibly can

  • i think i will add some of my charas too....but i am not sure yet who of them Xx....i have to much lolz

  • this is such an awesome idea! uhhh maybe i'll enter one. hmm i'll have to think about it tho.

  • Feel free to join in! :3

  • A new chapter is up.

    The site will be updated every Monday or so.

    I'll be adding the characters that just appeared in the story to the character page a.s.a.p.

  • omfgg.

    bliss ish going to be on the Hollow's side.

    >:]

  • Hmmm... I'll enter Kiyo-chan, but no dying for her. She lives till I die.

  • this looks awesome! can i join??

  • Of course! The more the merrier

  • oh and i was wondering does this take place during shippuuden or when there younger?

  • You can use whichever age you want for your characters, because there will be very little involvement with the actual Naruto characters I'm not depicting it as any certain time. :3

    SOrry if that is a bit confusing

  • Oooh....Can I join? If so, can I be on the dark side? :)

  • Yes of course!

  • P.S. You can change what you want in the story, but that's what I have for Elli's part. :] Hope you enjoyed reading it. X3

  • Ok, I'll probably have to do some editing to make everything work-but I'll use this as a base

  • Okay. :]

  • Storyline Continue: Anko had brought a whole bunch of Dangos to share with Elli, while Kakashi stood next to the bed and smiled. "What are you smiling at?" Elli and Anko asked with there mouths full of Dangos. Elli had forgotten that she told Kakashi she loved him, sadlly. "Oh nothing," Kakashi replied, still with a smile on his face. Elli and Anko just kept stuffing themselves with Dangos and talked about random subjects. The End.

  • Storyline Continue: ... She finally found peace with herself, rested in Kakashi's arms and told him she loved him. *** After the war, Elli found herself in the hospital and still much alive. "But how?!" Elli thought to herself. She remembered commiting suicide... Sakura Haruno came in and explained that Elli just fainted because loss of blood and missed her heart by an inch. Then Kakashi came in with Anko, and Sakura left...

  • Storyline Continued: ... She tried fight back, but she was to weak to do so. Her next target was now Kakashi Hatake, who she had loved for so long but too ignorant to tell him. She couldn't see him die like this, by her hands. She focused all her chakra on herself, struggling to kill her demon form and... herself. She struggled, but slowly, pointed the kunai at her heart as she saw Kakashi running at her. She stabbed her heart as much as she could, suddenly feeling cold...

  • Storyline: Elli Rayne eyes started to turn blood red, into her demon form, in the middle of battle. She was getting weak from using her Byakushan, which consumed most of her chakra, and her demon form was unleashed when it had a chance. She tried fighting back, but it was futile. This time was different, when her demon form was unleashed, she was still conscious of what she was doing. Her demon form annihilated some of her comrades painfully and mercilessly...

  • Maybe i join the good side XD

  • Great :3

  • I want to join too.. :3. I'll enter Shaun,Ohan,and Gaahira XD I'll post the response ASAP♥

  • Great! I'll be looking forward to it! :3

  • I wanna Join :3

    I will enter Juliet, Ryo, and Serena.

    I will make the video later on today.

  • I can't wait!

  • I'll join! X3 For my profile of Elli Rayne, please check my profile since it's really long. X3 Thank you.

    Story for Elli: I'll think about it. ^.^;...

    P.S. Elli will be a Faytes. :]

  • Ok, I'll go collect her information and add it to the files :3

  • I'll enter Delilah, Element, and Sin. I'll make a video response on them later on (Too busy to right now)

  • Ok! :3

    I look forward to adding them in! :3

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