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  • Wow

  • Noah stop being a punk and hit kayla already fight for wats urs! Stick and stones girl! Loser?! Who the hell says loser anymore anyway!? smh oh well! Cant wait 2 see the idea

  • but yoooo kayla gotta go.

    if iwas noha i'd grab her hair, knee her, punch her in the face, slap her den i'd say "trick idc if we was sitting in the same womb fer nine months imma kill u!" nd she'd say "noha plz no im sorry!" den id say "too late fer ur apologiez nigga bitch!" nd BAM! there she goes into an abyss. A DARK ABYSS.

  • lmao bryan

  • ROFL BRYANN.

  • i dis intro more dan da otha 1

  • 2:14

  • lOV3 iiT

    =]]

    iiM lAT3 buT lOv3

    iiT!

  • i luvv it

    y so short?? lol

    but anyway good story

    *5stars*

  • omg i luv it 5 stars nellz n noha are so cute lolz haha ava work that plan lolz bryan as doctor phil wow da'll be the day

  • loved it n ava is a good true bestfriend

  • luv this chapter can't wait 2 hear the plan :)

  • oooooo this is good!

  • Ahh i wanna knOw the plann.` :P

    5/5*

  • ooo i wonder what i told bryan....love the story

  • :D

    IM so excited 4 the plan :)

    :) :) :) :)

  • Cant wait till next part!

  • Oehh i wonder what Ava has planned....i wanted to know how bryan looked as dr.phil hahah xD lmao 5/5*

  • heyy i wanna hear the plan lolz

    wat does ava hav up her sleeve hmm lolz

    grreat chptr=)

  • That was good. Uh-oh, i wonder what Ava's plan is... Kayla get on my nerves! She needs to go somehwere. i loveee it (:

  • i loove this chapter!

    hurry up wit henext one cuz i wanna know what Ava have in mind. 5 stars

  • Seriously Carnell, does Kayla really look like she changed???lol Essence is funny she is so right though lol..I feel so bad for Noha buh its a good thing she has a friend like Ava...hopefully her plan works...I can't stand Kayla...I can't wait till Noha and Carnell get together chuz they make a cuter couple:D

  • i noe right kayla is not even close to what carnell needz noah and carnell need to open their eyez before ava does it for them

  • hahaha i know huh.

  • Everytime i read

    Kayla's name On this screen .

    Im like "stfu stfu!"

  • Kayla Didnt change

    yOuh see a change Carnell ....NO

    Noha Hun ...Noha yOu supposed

    tO Fight fOr wats right! Yuh Nut Ball

    Get the stick Out yur ass .& fight

    the POWER! Bryans Freakn Funny Lol

    Its yOur Brother yOu DORK!

    Bryan & Ava Jus seem like Best Friends

    Nuthin More.;-P

  • Kayla Didnt change

    yOuh see a change Carnell ....NO!!!!!!!!

    nOHA HUNNY ...Noha yOu supposed

    tO Fight fOr wats right! Yuh Nut Ball

    Get the stick Out yur ass .& fight

    the POWER! Bryans Freakn Funny Lol

    Its yOur Brother yOu DORK!

    Bryan & Ava Jus seem like Best Friends

    Nuthin More.;-P

  • Kayla Shuld Not b Walkn in

    ppl's HOuses ya dumb trick !

    whO gives a flying Dog whO's cOuntingg

    On Carnell tO Play B-Ball he dOes wat

    the FLY he wants tO Do!

    Fight the power !

  • i lovedd it aww carnells such a sweetheart even in the story hes sexy well hes described sexy i loved it tho keep writing to chapter 50 lol

  • .Oh ma Jeeez ..Crack & pOp .

    wah dha fudge lucka duck!?!

    Kayla needs a LIFE..YES LIFE.. L-I-F-E

    Lol ...& stOp wanting Carnell sO bad

    YES Carnell its really Carnell

    C-A-R-N-E-L-L-

  • I will kill Kayla, I swear. Bryan's a trip. Noha better stand up for what's hers. 5 stars

  • whooo i luved it!!!!!!!! you post these so quickly!!!1

  • I just love Ava right now it's about time i hope somebody beat kayla ass and bryan is a mess

  • luv it.knt wait to see wat dha plan iz

  • Lol bryan is a frak

    Bryan:oo your sexy when you think like that

    Lol funni yess bust kaylas ass Lol

  • whoo =]

  • CAN'T WAIT TILL NEXT CHAPTER!!!

  • loved it

    i jus want choke kayla

    bryan is retareded lol

    Noha needs to start standin up for herself nd smake kayla lol

    5*

  • ILyked dhat chapter

    And im lubbzsin dhat song Halo

  • loved it.

  • loved it

  • lol naught naughty....AVA IS MY KIND OF FRIEND!

  • 1 question wats that b5 song in the intro and noha needs to step up i dont care if it is her sister she needs to grow up gosh haha loved it keep going

  • It's boom boom boom.

  • =0 she got an idea!! i cant wiat till i read the next one!!

    To Natlaie: "HI MISS SPEEDY =X"

    LMAOO

  • Lmaoooo xD

  • omg tht was sooo good

    i cant believe kayla she is actin like a b***h and carnell isnt seein tht

    bryan is a retard lol

    i love it

    keep it comin

    5 stars <3

  • wow awesomeness .....it's good

  • Thank godddddddddddddddddddd for AVA!!!!!!

  • Omg I Wish Noha Would Just Step Up

    I LOved It...Carnell Really Needs To Open his Eyes

  • kayla kayla the things i wanna do to you wud put me in juvie no lie!

    UR SUCHA B!!! CARNELL IS BLIND SHE HAS NOT CHANGED ONE BIT!! STILL RUDE AND OBNOXIOUS!!!

    aww they gettin along

    Ava i hope ur plan work and bry is a retard

  • ohh..me likey:]

    this is gettin good:]

    5*

  • first to comment again im on a role!

  • oh im always busy trying to be first to comment that i never really say anything about your stories, well i do but not lately. so here it goes: that was really good now i really cant wait to read the next one!!! your stories are amazing! keep up the great work!

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