Noah stop being a punk and hit kayla already fight for wats urs! Stick and stones girl! Loser?! Who the hell says loser anymore anyway!? smh oh well! Cant wait 2 see the idea
if iwas noha i'd grab her hair, knee her, punch her in the face, slap her den i'd say "trick idc if we was sitting in the same womb fer nine months imma kill u!" nd she'd say "noha plz no im sorry!" den id say "too late fer ur apologiez nigga bitch!" nd BAM! there she goes into an abyss. A DARK ABYSS.
Seriously Carnell, does Kayla really look like she changed???lol Essence is funny she is so right though lol..I feel so bad for Noha buh its a good thing she has a friend like Ava...hopefully her plan works...I can't stand Kayla...I can't wait till Noha and Carnell get together chuz they make a cuter couple:D
1 question wats that b5 song in the intro and noha needs to step up i dont care if it is her sister she needs to grow up gosh haha loved it keep going
oh im always busy trying to be first to comment that i never really say anything about your stories, well i do but not lately. so here it goes: that was really good now i really cant wait to read the next one!!! your stories are amazing! keep up the great work!
Wow
JacqueenaLaLaLa 8 months ago
Noah stop being a punk and hit kayla already fight for wats urs! Stick and stones girl! Loser?! Who the hell says loser anymore anyway!? smh oh well! Cant wait 2 see the idea
carnellndiva101 10 months ago
but yoooo kayla gotta go.
if iwas noha i'd grab her hair, knee her, punch her in the face, slap her den i'd say "trick idc if we was sitting in the same womb fer nine months imma kill u!" nd she'd say "noha plz no im sorry!" den id say "too late fer ur apologiez nigga bitch!" nd BAM! there she goes into an abyss. A DARK ABYSS.
Carnellsbabi1 1 year ago 2
lmao bryan
flygirls64 2 years ago
ROFL BRYANN.
MzCandynB5Production 2 years ago
i dis intro more dan da otha 1
HotCHycK09 2 years ago
2:14
dhoney456 2 years ago
lOV3 iiT
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iiM lAT3 buT lOv3
iiT!
ilovb5andu 3 years ago
i luvv it
y so short?? lol
but anyway good story
*5stars*
mrzpatrickbreeding 3 years ago
omg i luv it 5 stars nellz n noha are so cute lolz haha ava work that plan lolz bryan as doctor phil wow da'll be the day
kaslab1 3 years ago
loved it n ava is a good true bestfriend
Sexyaskiki 3 years ago
luv this chapter can't wait 2 hear the plan :)
ezigbonne 3 years ago
oooooo this is good!
asiabreeding1 3 years ago
Ahh i wanna knOw the plann.` :P
5/5*
xdOpemamiix3 3 years ago
ooo i wonder what i told bryan....love the story
lacrossebabe6 3 years ago
:D
IM so excited 4 the plan :)
:) :) :) :)
Sammi116Sammi116 3 years ago
Cant wait till next part!
popoil9663 3 years ago
Oehh i wonder what Ava has planned....i wanted to know how bryan looked as dr.phil hahah xD lmao 5/5*
tellem123dkt 3 years ago
heyy i wanna hear the plan lolz
wat does ava hav up her sleeve hmm lolz
grreat chptr=)
b5wifeychic 3 years ago
That was good. Uh-oh, i wonder what Ava's plan is... Kayla get on my nerves! She needs to go somehwere. i loveee it (:
puertoricanprincezz 3 years ago
i loove this chapter!
hurry up wit henext one cuz i wanna know what Ava have in mind. 5 stars
SlovesCnell 3 years ago
Seriously Carnell, does Kayla really look like she changed???lol Essence is funny she is so right though lol..I feel so bad for Noha buh its a good thing she has a friend like Ava...hopefully her plan works...I can't stand Kayla...I can't wait till Noha and Carnell get together chuz they make a cuter couple:D
Ulukau808 3 years ago
i noe right kayla is not even close to what carnell needz noah and carnell need to open their eyez before ava does it for them
angelluv8 3 years ago
hahaha i know huh.
Ulukau808 3 years ago
Everytime i read
Kayla's name On this screen .
Im like "stfu stfu!"
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
Kayla Didnt change
yOuh see a change Carnell ....NO
Noha Hun ...Noha yOu supposed
tO Fight fOr wats right! Yuh Nut Ball
Get the stick Out yur ass .& fight
the POWER! Bryans Freakn Funny Lol
Its yOur Brother yOu DORK!
Bryan & Ava Jus seem like Best Friends
Nuthin More.;-P
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
Kayla Didnt change
yOuh see a change Carnell ....NO!!!!!!!!
nOHA HUNNY ...Noha yOu supposed
tO Fight fOr wats right! Yuh Nut Ball
Get the stick Out yur ass .& fight
the POWER! Bryans Freakn Funny Lol
Its yOur Brother yOu DORK!
Bryan & Ava Jus seem like Best Friends
Nuthin More.;-P
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Kayla Shuld Not b Walkn in
ppl's HOuses ya dumb trick !
whO gives a flying Dog whO's cOuntingg
On Carnell tO Play B-Ball he dOes wat
the FLY he wants tO Do!
Fight the power !
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
Kayla Shuld Not b Walkn in
ppl's HOuses ya dumb trick !
whO gives a flying Dog whO's cOuntingg
On Carnell tO Play B-Ball he dOes wat
the FLY he wants tO Do!
Fight the power !
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
i lovedd it aww carnells such a sweetheart even in the story hes sexy well hes described sexy i loved it tho keep writing to chapter 50 lol
skittlezz4 3 years ago
.Oh ma Jeeez ..Crack & pOp .
wah dha fudge lucka duck!?!
Kayla needs a LIFE..YES LIFE.. L-I-F-E
Lol ...& stOp wanting Carnell sO bad
YES Carnell its really Carnell
C-A-R-N-E-L-L-
MiXedBicHYADIGG 3 years ago
I will kill Kayla, I swear. Bryan's a trip. Noha better stand up for what's hers. 5 stars
MissKellyBreeding196 3 years ago
whooo i luved it!!!!!!!! you post these so quickly!!!1
kimmys89 3 years ago
I just love Ava right now it's about time i hope somebody beat kayla ass and bryan is a mess
Shunte012 3 years ago
luv it.knt wait to see wat dha plan iz
pialuvdustinbreeding 3 years ago
Lol bryan is a frak
Bryan:oo your sexy when you think like that
Lol funni yess bust kaylas ass Lol
mszbreeding 3 years ago
whoo =]
YouCantBeMe93 3 years ago
CAN'T WAIT TILL NEXT CHAPTER!!!
datfptchick 3 years ago
loved it
i jus want choke kayla
bryan is retareded lol
Noha needs to start standin up for herself nd smake kayla lol
5*
teetiegyrl 3 years ago
ILyked dhat chapter
And im lubbzsin dhat song Halo
mizzkrystin 3 years ago
loved it.
Souljagrl17 3 years ago
loved it
keyarah1996 3 years ago
lol naught naughty....AVA IS MY KIND OF FRIEND!
Patrickownz4life 3 years ago
1 question wats that b5 song in the intro and noha needs to step up i dont care if it is her sister she needs to grow up gosh haha loved it keep going
hiuty1 3 years ago
It's boom boom boom.
OneToughCookiee 3 years ago
=0 she got an idea!! i cant wiat till i read the next one!!
To Natlaie: "HI MISS SPEEDY =X"
LMAOO
StuntinStar 3 years ago
Lmaoooo xD
OneToughCookiee 3 years ago
omg tht was sooo good
i cant believe kayla she is actin like a b***h and carnell isnt seein tht
bryan is a retard lol
i love it
keep it comin
5 stars <3
CillaGirl94 3 years ago
wow awesomeness .....it's good
cRaZiGiRl2012 3 years ago
Thank godddddddddddddddddddd for AVA!!!!!!
Qtee4eva16 3 years ago
Omg I Wish Noha Would Just Step Up
I LOved It...Carnell Really Needs To Open his Eyes
angelasweet3 3 years ago
kayla kayla the things i wanna do to you wud put me in juvie no lie!
UR SUCHA B!!! CARNELL IS BLIND SHE HAS NOT CHANGED ONE BIT!! STILL RUDE AND OBNOXIOUS!!!
aww they gettin along
Ava i hope ur plan work and bry is a retard
Nellz1luva 3 years ago
ohh..me likey:]
this is gettin good:]
5*
neabooB5 3 years ago
first to comment again im on a role!
marjksf 3 years ago
oh im always busy trying to be first to comment that i never really say anything about your stories, well i do but not lately. so here it goes: that was really good now i really cant wait to read the next one!!! your stories are amazing! keep up the great work!
marjksf 3 years ago