it varies and being from the west some say this is not important..I.E. one or two less or one or two more.I myself feel that one SHOULD try to stick to a pattern.say 2-3-2 5-7- 5 3-6-3 or whatever. Minimalism however is a great discipline do you not think?Regards.
My favorite was the first! Powerful. Leaf/ax and butterfly-lands-on-page very evocative, too. Did you mean politician's economic warfield with the apostrophe?
I know you're thinking,
Oh Fuck, another haiku,
Was that so painful?
DrummingMonkey13 1 month ago
Just words to me...I get no significant meaning..the dead child one is trite...sorry...just my opinion...
Poemsapennyeach 5 months ago
haikus are easy
but sometimes they don't make sense
refrigerator
cethalon 8 months ago
Check out myhaiku poems by typing in bunterify, and you'll see a video entitled "Self -Made haiku Poems."
bunterify 11 months ago
This is really weird
Someone get me out of here
I am now crying
96THEPRINCE 11 months ago
i can make better
haikues in my slep than you
so deal with it
caosdaninja 1 year ago
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caosdaninja 1 year ago
Added to favourites...Love & Appreciation
CCPoetryNow 1 year ago
You guys are stupid,
I really hate you so much,
For writing Haikus.
flybli 1 year ago
@flybli - Obviously, not a traditional Haiku versed poem.
LorenzoMorganJr 1 year ago
how nice
the white cloud-sounds...
something else?
haikupoettt 1 year ago 4
" You can't shake hands with a clench fist"
Gandhi's wife...............oh duh, why shake hands with wrong doers?
No wonder he stayed married to a sick PEDO. Read behind the Mask of divinity....about the "real" Gandhi.
pumehana99 2 years ago
Gandhi was a pedophile read about it, oh it was his wife quote not his, my bad.
pumehana99 2 years ago
Haiku,s are easy
But sometimes they dont make sense
Refrigerator.
sUUpErC00W 2 years ago 14
@sUUpErC00W DAMNIT!
i was JUST about to post that...
ArceusShaymin 7 months ago
@ArceusShaymin lol, it's my one year old comment. I couldn't make a ' back then :P
sUUpErC00W 7 months ago
@sUUpErC00W
refrigerator
overused word in haiku
procrastinator
Genjinai 5 months ago
@Genjinai old comment
still gets lots of replies
i suck at haikus
sUUpErC00W 5 months ago
You know Haiku
when ever you see poets
counting sylables on fingers
arapkunde 2 years ago 5
it varies and being from the west some say this is not important..I.E. one or two less or one or two more.I myself feel that one SHOULD try to stick to a pattern.say 2-3-2 5-7- 5 3-6-3 or whatever. Minimalism however is a great discipline do you not think?Regards.
bilstew 2 years ago 8
Video haiku? Strange post-modern poetry compelling vision.
docevolution 3 years ago 2
Good one by Spinoza.
ZERXO 3 years ago 2
Thanks for a fantastic video!
Beautiful words.
iCE2sKY 4 years ago 4
horizon stretched past my reach-
hand of my mother,
lined, parched and now transparent.
artlad7 4 years ago 2
i am gonna start shaking hands with people with clenched fists! :P
mohawkid 4 years ago 2
My favorite was the first! Powerful. Leaf/ax and butterfly-lands-on-page very evocative, too. Did you mean politician's economic warfield with the apostrophe?
Still I have my life. Cool!
unexpectedkangaroo 4 years ago