Follow the progression of what im saying and it becomes clear. Its about making a girl feel like she is the 1, but just for that night. As the singer, I take on the role of the Man in the song, and paint a picture of what happens. It dips in and out of me talking to u, the listener, and then talking to the actual 'girl of the night'. Thx again for the feedback. Appreciated @TheHARProductions
However "Every other morning there's a new girl" "I gotta find me a next girl" doesn't really go with the focus on the one girl when you say "I tell them you're the ish" or "I love to see you wet". lol So I'd say choose between talking to a particular woman, or if you want to talk about all the women you like/want/have in general. It's Hayden btw :)
Cool, I hear and respect that but, it does make sense. You havent fully understood the concept of the song which is why the lyrics come across as conflicting to you. However, I appreciate the feedback as always. @TheHARProductions
Ok Simon I like it so far! Vocals on point, when you use falsetto sound like Robin Thicke. I really like the effect on the vocals. Its a sexy vibe. Couple things though, whoever mixed it mixed it to the left side a bit too much. Also for the chorus, the music and maybe harmony needs to build up a bit, feels like its mainly the same throughout. Maybe raise the level of the drum a bit, cos I only noticed it when I put headphones in. Simple, relaxed lovemaking vibe.
Thx for the feedback. The track hasent been mixed at all. All I did was add a reverb and chorus effect to the vocal. I didnt get into mixing it hence why the quality isnt great. I kept it repetitive throughout because its more about the feel of what u hear rather than constructing it into a full song. I just created this for fun and to give the YouTube family something new to listen to. Glad your feeling it @TheHARProductions
Oh ok that's fine! I misunderstood, what is the concept?
TheHARProductions 4 months ago
Follow the progression of what im saying and it becomes clear. Its about making a girl feel like she is the 1, but just for that night. As the singer, I take on the role of the Man in the song, and paint a picture of what happens. It dips in and out of me talking to u, the listener, and then talking to the actual 'girl of the night'. Thx again for the feedback. Appreciated @TheHARProductions
Sisings4U 4 months ago
However "Every other morning there's a new girl" "I gotta find me a next girl" doesn't really go with the focus on the one girl when you say "I tell them you're the ish" or "I love to see you wet". lol So I'd say choose between talking to a particular woman, or if you want to talk about all the women you like/want/have in general. It's Hayden btw :)
TheHARProductions 4 months ago
Cool, I hear and respect that but, it does make sense. You havent fully understood the concept of the song which is why the lyrics come across as conflicting to you. However, I appreciate the feedback as always. @TheHARProductions
Sisings4U 4 months ago
Ok Simon I like it so far! Vocals on point, when you use falsetto sound like Robin Thicke. I really like the effect on the vocals. Its a sexy vibe. Couple things though, whoever mixed it mixed it to the left side a bit too much. Also for the chorus, the music and maybe harmony needs to build up a bit, feels like its mainly the same throughout. Maybe raise the level of the drum a bit, cos I only noticed it when I put headphones in. Simple, relaxed lovemaking vibe.
TheHARProductions 4 months ago
Thx for the feedback. The track hasent been mixed at all. All I did was add a reverb and chorus effect to the vocal. I didnt get into mixing it hence why the quality isnt great. I kept it repetitive throughout because its more about the feel of what u hear rather than constructing it into a full song. I just created this for fun and to give the YouTube family something new to listen to. Glad your feeling it @TheHARProductions
Sisings4U 4 months ago
Hey man for reral u can ssing u I ain't fucking with u for real
varneyboima84 5 months ago
Thank you. Appreciate the love @varneyboima84
Sisings4U 5 months ago
Wow, this is super duper amazing. Vocals are just out of this world xx
BrokenSmiles91 5 months ago
Glad u like it missy! x @BrokenSmiles91
Sisings4U 5 months ago
these are the most beautiful vocals !
RawLikeMeTV 5 months ago
Thank you! @RawLikeMeTV
Sisings4U 5 months ago
love it wow ur voice <3 x
smeliie16 5 months ago
Love it Simon! It's mesmerizing. xoxo
nygrrl99 5 months ago
Glad your feeling it. Hit that share button ;) @nygrrl99
Sisings4U 5 months ago