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  • Can you make a Dragon Ball Z Fan animation

  • static shock wannabe seriously

  • Great animation, bad dialogue. "You've created your last electrical burst." Seriously?

  • You should send this to cartoon net work they will provably contract you

  • Static Shock ? lol

  • cool story bro. Guy talked too much lol

  • @BlackWraith328 way too much

  • I like your animation style. It fits with what im aiming to achieve.

    I also like adobe premiere which is why i prefer your flash to photoshop to premiere style. You just havent shown us the rest of the tutorial so im waiting on that as well.

    In terms of critiques. The character designs suck. Not sure if its you or Chris Carter who designed the characters, but they don't have charisma.

  • You know how long it takes him to make these animations, quit complaining, or just don't watch it at all.

  • stick to making naruto animations please, this is just a waste of time

  • Spiderman Lines ! You spun your last web spiderman If you havent been so .. your little girlfriend will die fastly and painless but now that you really pissed me off... Im gonna finish her NICE and slow..

  • that was ajoke

  • all you have to do to beat clyde is wear a rubber suit and know martial arts

  • I wonder if Wire dies or not? :/

  • Anyone else think its a mix between static shock and naruto?

  • Hey Smyton please reply, I have just been dreaming to animate like you and KL, finally i purchased a tablet and im awesome at drawing but useless at animating :( please make more tutorials!!! btw where is KL?

  • too much talking

  • Looks promising...

  • Wow, my and Clyde are so very much alike! Both in looks, and personality-wise.

  • just like the first spiderman movien when the green-goblin faces spiderman 2:36

  • @johnny012345678910

    lol i was thinking the sameee thing

  • awsome!

  • this was done on flash correct? good to know, nice to see an animator who doesnt use stick figures or sprites. (im also an animator, but starting out with stick figures to get the feel for it.)

  • @GroundXeroProduction please, read credits :)

  • this remind me of an old cartoon named static shock

  • Oh man, I had no idea this was up! =D That was amazing! Great job, as always, Smyton! ;D

  • r u not the voice actor for sasuke for the sasuke vs kakashi vid?

  • @VlaudFenikkusu he was the animator too.. :P

    Love your vids smyton been following your stuff for years, your fighting choreography is amazing, no less on par than a main stream anime, honestly id compare it to naruto ep132 sasuke vs naruto fight quality. its epic ^_^

  • I really enjoyed this Smyton, nice choice of characters. very original.

    Quick question, how long did it take you to create this? including everything from coloring to music to video editing.

    I'm an animator too, with a series that I'm working on now. I'm working on my 6th episode.

    But keep up the good work, looks tough.

  • @UntoldDreamsAnime Good to hear from another animator :) This took me 4 months with the help from another animator and color artist. I did about 85% of the animation and coloring and all the backgrounds. If you were to do this solo, I'd estimate 5 months will get you 4 minutes. (working 20 hours a week). Good luck!

  • @smyton4tw Haha either way it goes, it takes hard work and dedication. Keep it up, you definitely do some good work. Looking forward to more. :D

  • you should really really make your own show or website of episodes of this because this is the shitt :)

  • I like the smoothness of the movements, pretty cool. And I could definitely see this as an anime, I would watch it.

  • It's Static shock and naruto mixed in one lol. Cool video.

  • @CBroskiesLuLzx i was gonna say the same thing

  • reminds me of that old cartoon static shock...

  • pure awsome

  • it is pretty dark but still awesome, reminds me of slade off teen titans

  • You've made alot of original series but they end up being just 1 clip of it.

  • @K3eOne Not his,hes the animator.... :)

  • @K3eOne This series belongs to Chris Carter (His name is in the credits). He hired me to animate a clip of his work. Most people hire me to do a 2-3 minute clip. In-Game is the only series I have that is my creation as well.

  • villain ftw

  • Okay everyone, let's go back to critiquing the video. I always encourage people to give me positive and negative notes on my work but when the comments turn into a flame war, it just shows immaturity on both parties.

  • @smyton4tw I truly apologize. He just happened to trigger me into thinking that he was insulting you instead of criticizing.

  • @smyton4tw Yay,Master nick is alive :)

  • @smyton4tw Thank you.

  • What really bothers me is, WHY DOES HE CRY LIKE A LIL FEMALE DOG?!

  • @CrysisAnimations He was beaten horribly..

  • @EmptyInfiniti

    Even though he was beaten horribly, I think crying was the most inappropriate action for that scene. If he had yelled in pain, that would have sufficed, but CRYING like a little girl? C'mon, he was the one who was like "TRY IT!" to the antagonist earlier! My first thought of him was like "yes, he's a badass." Maybe it's just me, but that scene ruined this animation imo.

  • @CrysisAnimations when every bone in your body is aching badly beaten,I think it is most appropriate.hes at his breaking point.it was dramatic :)

  • @JPremier1992

    Well, I guess every person has their own interpretations.

  • @CrysisAnimations think of the impact,even chuck Norris would cry like a bitch lol XD

  • @JPremier1992

    I admit though, maybe a tear or two...xD

  • @CrysisAnimations Lol XD

  • @CrysisAnimations Perhaps he was also immensely disheartened.

    The opponent afterward ensured the demise of his affiliates and family. Perhaps Clyed acknowledged this upon sustaining those detrimental injuries, while screaming.

    I'm uncertain- however I concur that the emotional expression is unordinary.

    i appreciated it, though, as seldom do we experience such genuinity; in reality, we'd all cry exactly like that. Excrutiating pain alone would secure that..

  • @CrysisAnimations i am prety shure you wil cry of some one wil

    beat the dog crap out of you

  • too much naruto

  • High voltage really? I belive the idea for a black kid to have electric based super powers has and was already been made anyone remember static shock? Same thing as this

  • lol he crys

  • nikka looks like static shock

  • ele morre?

  • @EmptyInfiniti...did you check my profile in this argument? I coulda been younger than you for all you know. But..whatever floats your boat. Ps. - And dont waste your time giving me some dramatic explanation of a youtube argument cause Im not responding back to it man. Just fun at first..,,waste of time now.

  • @smyton4tw...I like Wire's mancry. So punkish but so MANLY. "WHAAAAAAAAAA!" lol

  • @thestoopsjk There's no such thing as being "black". You read into too many stereotypes and follow the media's trends. I don't intend to do any of that. Education comes before anything else.

  • @FinalJinchuuriki DIS NIGGA RIGHT HERD

  • @FinalJinchuuriki Tell him ><

  • *discerned,

  • So EPIC!! It needs to be a TV show. :D

  • @EmptyInfinity...Its been 5 hours since I was "obsessed" with you. And...well...I still laugh at this stuff. Youre like a Light Yagami. Youd keep killing innocent people who dont fit your plans and tell us that youre God and you can do what you want. ..  Ps. - Youve replied to more than one of my comments. Lets see if you will to this. Lol.

  • @GoldenGhostful I

    You've inadvertently acknowledged my inference in fruitlessely attmepting to contradict it. Exonerating your discerningly fixated behavior in merely opposing the statement, naturally substantiates the inverse. You are now officially obsessed with a fifteen year old boy.

    I doubt...you're not an adult.

  • @EmptyInfiniti "attmepting" you spelled it incorrectly... It's spelled "attempting" last time I checked... Aren't you suppose to be a genius ? Silly mistake :P ... Your dumber than I thought :P

  • @PrydzAnimation Obviously the consonants were incorrectly configured.

    By the way, Einsteine made thousands upon thousands of "silly", entirely jouvenile, unnecessary mistakes.

    So before randomly comparing me to another genius, understand the implications of "brilliance". Thank you.

  • The two top comments argue with each other XD

  • @Pagatcha  lol

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  • @EmptyInfiniti...hypocrites are out of style.

  • @EmptyInfiniti... I dont respond back to comments but youre a funny, hypocritical little one. Lol.

  • Lol. Nice one. Trying to play stupid. Not very smart for a person of your high caliber!

  • @GoldenGhostful you're obsessed with me. Attempting to ellicit my responses in posting repeatedly?

    You deranged little child. blocked.

  • @EmptyInfiniti...If you want to be technical, this is the internet. Unless you speak to yourself while you type, we arent speaking. And if thats the case I want you to spell correctly. "aniorexia" was just one of your mistakes. Come on..really?

  • @GoldenGhostful

    no, not really.

    I'm obviously aware of the correct spelling.

    You unconsiously made an absoutely common error.

    "anorexia"

    now, speak properly, please.

  • @EmptyInfiniti... If you wanna prove your good, then make a vid exhibiting the work you have. And animate it, if you want. If theyre subpar , well tell you. But youd probably say, "This is high quality! Youre all idiots! Best in my age group!" lol

  • @EmptyInfiniti... If youre exceedingly talented...then show me some exceedingly talented footage. Lol.

  • @GoldenGhostful Channel.

    Oh, and, you misused the adjective, "talented".

    this adjective cannot describe inanimate objects, but people.

    please, speak properly.

  • Here we tooouch, HERE WE KISS! danger danger! HIGH VOLTAGE

  • @Pagatcha What lol? Good im not the only one that keeps coming back to watch this.this is like my 10th time

  • @JPremier1992 because.. this is funny :D i referenced good old song, danger, high voltage

  • @EmptyInfiniti...in this case youre more concealed than Smyton. His work includes concealed jewels that we are now excavating. You, on the other hand, have nothing. Its sad to see talented people get attacked by "talented" people.

  • @GoldenGhostful I'm exceedingly talented for my age.

    Having zero formal instruction in the arts.

    Zero tools.

    Zero references.

    Don't even try.

  • @EmptyInfiniti I'm not attacking you.What are you trying to say, when you say "zero references"?

  • @JPremier1992 I appreciate your specifiying.

    My work isn't accomplished in implementing some sort of resource, like, for example, a photograph, a scene. 

  • @EmptyInfiniti So you never used reference not once?Isn't memory a form of reference? Or i must be going about this all wrong

  • @JPremier1992 Memory is not considered a tangible reference.

    I rely on my mind, contrary to most arists, who, depend upon static imagery.

  • @EmptyInfiniti Well lets just call it a "mind reference" then :). Well ok dude, try and end the arguments :)

  • @EmptyInfiniti Ok,try and end the arguments :)

  • @JPremier1992 As if I'd allow anyone to depreciate character.

    Consult youtube managament, have the lot banned, and the altercations will be terminated. Thank you.

  • @EmptyInfiniti....in this case, youre more concealed than Smyton. Thats cause his work includes concealed jewels that we are finally excavating. You, on the other hand, ... have nothing. Point blank. Its a shame that talented people get attack by "talented" people.

  • @emptyinfiniti. Think of it like this...at least a million people have seen Smyton's vids. How many have seen yours? Idk cause I havent seen it. Lol. You can brag and misspell as many advanced vocabulary words as possible, but it wont change the fact that youre, virtually, unknown.

  • @GoldenGhostful

    Everyone is concealed at some juncture.

    My, aren't we naive?

  • You are talented man! The show gives me a nostalgic feeling from my memories of Static, which was stated. Your animation qualties are great for a "non-mainstream" artist. Keep it up!

  • Let the motherf*cker eat his gifted sh*t everday

  • @Pagatcha haha lol.Thats pasha

  • I actually went on to deviant art, browsed through some of the character bios and this is a very promising series. Hopefully it grows :) I'd love to see more of it!

  • MUST. SEE. MORE.

  • I meant to say, I am not going to babble on explaining.

  • You clearly understand sarcasm. There is sarcasm in that sentence, did you notice?

    Anyways, you finally made a constructive critique (though, it was very weak but I am going to babble on explaining that). See? Was it so hard to criticize properly? Now apply this to everywhere you comment. Thank you.

  • @MohanABK

    Yes, I couldn't recognize the facetious connotation of that inquirie.

    It's text...it's not always so distinguishable.

    Well..goodbye.

  • Is that Yuri Loventhal's voice I heard?

  • *ostrasizing

  • superhero static shock

  • @upload You were banned for physicaly threateninga child. Obviously they're minimal validity in your complaints, alongside theirs.

  • @EmptyInfiniti *there's

  • @EmptyInfiniti *there's doesn't make sense.

  • @MohanABK *there's = There is.

    Really?

  • @EmptyInfiniti I wasn't referring to the "there is".

    I simply thought that your correction was referred to when you said "theirs", but as I realize now, you meant to correct "they're". My bad.

  • @MohanABK Yes, now please... Occupy yourself elsewhere.

    I don't require your or their constant tantalizations.

    You all seem to be under the assumption thar I'm a flawless being. Well, I'm flattered , but that's simply not applicable to me.

  • Dude, you can animate the HELL out of stuff. Nice job. Too bad it ends on such a downer, makes it kinda monotone as far as dramatic tension. I assume there's more to the story?

  • Personally I like how this character pays tribute to the past African American lightning heroes, but retains its own character.

  • You people need to read a comic book! THERE WERE OTHER BLACK LIGHTNING HEROES BEFORE STATIC! Example: Black Lightning, Black Vulcan, Storm, and Azari (After Static). And in case you morons didn't notice, Static has ELECTROMAGNETIC POWERS, NOT PURE LIGHTNING. You people need to shut up. I think this has potential to make a good television show for kids. KIDS who appreciate a good action show.

  • @Flashcannon377 Static Shock was infused with "artifical' electricity as well.

    It wasn;t "pure lightning".

    ...They're extremely similar. But there's nothing wrong with that. This man may emulate whoever he pleases

  • Amazing! I lol'd the spiderman reference. "You've spun your last web spiderman."

  • Good job very inspiring.

  • Whoa lol. Clyde reminds me of Static Shock :O

    Awesome animation...amazing :D

  • @Pikadav Amen.... This asshole thinks he's the shit but he doesn't realize that no one here cares about him and his work ... I

  • Wow! When I saw the key and in-between frames video and the high voltage clip came up I was of amazed by your animation complete! Now I realize that the video you were showing was actually the frames for High Voltage which was btw a good title lol. Anyways everything about the video like the photoshop, flash, after effects and premiere was really good. Best 3 mins I've seen in a in quiet a good while lol

    Good Job and keep it up!

  • static shock

  • *me intially

  • @EmptyInfiniti I'm a few months past the age of 16. So, by your logic, I get to talk down to anyone older than myself and brag about my achievements. There are plently of child prodigies. You can find plenty on Youtube. However, you're not one of them. I'd also advise you to stop using words that are too much for your shallow vocabulary to handle. You misspell nearly every sophisticated word you type. It's getting embarrassing to read and it makes you look like an idiot. Please, go learn.

  • @FinalJinchuuriki Yes, thank you for correcting my occasionally errononeous usage, however don't permit that to manifest in arrogance. The majority of those errors can be attributed to to the insufficient performance of my Android phone. To depreciate my apptitude in drawing to such a degree, excoriating an entirely benevolent individual is indicitave of nothing but intimidation. This is fundamental physcology, and is associated with the comcept of "projection". (continued)

  • @FinalJinchuuriki Now provided any of the antagonistic brats here were remotely competent..they'd consult my channel and understand the extent of my forte. "You're not a child prodigy.". oh, really? I honestly haven't encountered a 15 y/ o, profficient in architecural perspective and anatomy, realism. One moment while I disable comments on my video. Although your cowardice intimates that my preventing your expressing yourselves isn't indispensible. (continued)

  • @FinalJinchuuriki Obviously my presence here greatly perturbs you, as your attempts to compensate for your increasing consternation become more ruthless. Ostrsaizing another personn will never alleviate you of your afflictions, or relieve you of your predicaments; for whatever reason, you feel compelled to bully an entirely innocent person.. You're exceedingly envious, or extraneously resentfull. Select one, as I've already attainede an understanding of your id.

  • @EmptyInfiniti Are we expected to clap because you're using a thesaurus to respond to all of our messages? I can tell the difference between a child who has a natural affinity for language and one who attempts to mirror the gift. I watched your video, and I found it mediocre for all of the bragging you've done. A few simplistic pencil sketches don't make you gifted. If you haven't encountered a person of that age range who's FAR more gifted than you, then I have quite the surprise for you.

  • @FinalJinchuuriki I don't employ additional resources. I'm flattered that you commend my vocabulary. My teachers concur. Yes, just another affinity of mine.

    "Simplistic". "Far more gifted". Tis is simply hyperbole. Your denunciations can never, ever, alter my talent.

    The children I've observed are painters- and use tools alternatively to NUMBER TWO PENSILS, and UTILIZE REFERENCES. You can't compare me to anyone my age.

    nice try, though.

  • @EmptyInfiniti I honestly feel very sorry for you. Since you feel the need to confirm my age by browsing my channel, I'll tell you that it's false, because I never use my real age, adress, or phone number when I create an email account. I was born June 19, 1995, so that negates your accusation. Smyton's a good friend to all of us, and as his friends, we support his work. If you beat the beehive, you get stung by the bees. You're too blinded by your jealousy to make a decent point.

  • @FinalJinchuuriki You honestly don't- that's merely an alternate method in disgusing your ascending displeasure. I can read you like a book.

    I possess an intimitable ability; envy isn't plausible.

    Your simply resent superiority.

    The others withdrew from this discussion after establishing compromise with me, while you persist to onsluaght me with nonsense.

    "Should we clap because you speak with a book"

    Surely, you must be joking. How obvious does that render your envy?

  • @EmptyInfiniti Envy of what? I have no envy towards anyone of this generation. The only thing I envy is the simpler times of this world. You can't "read" me. No one on this planet understands another. Your ability doesn't make you higher than anyone else because everyone on this planet has a special ability. You're just another child who thinks he's leagues better than everyone else. When the time comes, I hope you're shown the light of your arrogant ways. It may save you from being lonely.

  • @FinalJinchuuriki In actuality, you've insinuated your jealousy in immediately- without consideration- deeming my remark malcious, and labeling me as pompous.

    I do indeed read you. There's a *reason* you feel obligated to foment my corybatic reaction. Look, should I be mistaken, I'd suggest that you alter your disposition, as whatever you exude is predominantly ireful.I'm not conceited- as an indivudual afflicted with anoriexia nervousa-I am not.

    You're unequivically ignorant.

  • @FinalJinchuuriki Now, I'm appeased to have educated you.

  • @EmptyInfiniti It's okay to dislike things, just don't be a dick about it.

  • @gamedoodle I understand that. All I said was, 'I'm not impressed.'

  • @EmptyInfiniti Oh man are you still with this? Are you still bragging all your"talent" at us? Dude, I thought you learnt a lesson some days ago. I'm dissapointed.

  • @SpitfirePampa I never bragged.

  • @EmptyInfiniti Then what were you doing all this time? oO;

    Look, if you want people to leave you alone and stop"bullying"you, DON'T REPLY TO THEIR COMMENTS, otherwise you'll make this problem bigger and bigger because of your actitude which is annoying many people, and NO, I'm not talking about what you said about the animation, I'm talking about the actitude you take when you reply to other people.

  • @SpitfirePampa "You're a nobody"

    How'd you respond to that?

    

  • @EmptyInfiniti I wouldn't respond, simple as that, if someone from the internet said that I simply won't reply and don't take it seriuosly, or I would move and try to prove that I'm not a loser with actions, not words, but I only would do that if it was someone from the real life, not from an annonymous person on the net.

  • @SpitfirePampa

    Exactly- I'm not you.

    Don't assume I'd conform to your expactancy.

    As another indivudal..respect my preferences.

    Thank you.

  • @EmptyInfiniti Whatever you want dude, but if we apply this then the other people has the right to reply you like thet did and you must respect it.

    "I'm exceedingly talented for my age

    Having zero formal instruction in the arts.

    Zero tools.

    Zero references.

    Don't even try."

    And you told me that you never bragged. huh?That's why people are replying to you.

  • @SpitfirePampa Never bragged once.

    That was in my defense.

    You're clearly biassed- you delibretely neglect,"You're a nobody'

    "You're not a porodigy"

    "dumbass"

    "no talent"

  • @EmptyInfiniti I don't think that saying this kind of stuff can defend you, I think it would annoy more people. Especially here, on the net. I think that if you want to prove that you are someone then you can move, ignore, and do something to shup me up and all the people who are annoying you. But if you are only saying what you said before, it won't work, more people will get annoyed and think"who does he thinks he is to say that?"

  • @SpitfirePampa

    Regardless of their convictions, or yours, I know myself.

    Isn't that what you'd implied, just now, to disregard their instigations?

    I think you're beginging to recognize that I truly am not a malevolent presence here..

    but, people like, "jinchrichi' or whatever will never understand.

    However it's not as though I'd permit defammation of character. which, incidentally, the lot of you are liable for.

    (except for you. you haven't directly degraded my character yet).

  • @EmptyInfiniti Hmm, yeah, that would apply to others too. They and I have no right to call you"dumbass" as you don't have the right to say how talented you are, (that's something that people don't like, and find it annoying)

    Nah, I don't like insulting people, or defame others.

    I guess we are all guilty in some way with this argument, we ended up fighting instead of enjoying the video.

  • @SpitfirePampa This dispute cannot be attributed to me.

    They aren't entitled to bullying.

  • @EmptyInfiniti Yes, you did teach me. You taught me that our generation is screwed. People like you are doomsday in a bottle. I do hope you'll learn how to spell half of the words you're trying so hard to work into your sentences. If auto-correct on your phone is such a problem, maybe you should slow down and think your words though, hmm? Who are you trying to impress by using an abnormal vocabulary? You're trying so hard I can almost hear the sounds of your sweat dropping from here. Nice try.

  • @FinalJinchuuriki Yes, I expeditiously refuted your entire arguement and you lack you dignity to concede.

    You remain fixated upon my articulate fashion. Please, do noty emulate me. You're repulsive. Now, attempt to bully someone else, or find help.

  • @EmptyInfiniti I'll let you have your satisfaction, so congratulations, you've "beaten" me. *pats on the back* I have things to do which don't include continuing this conversation. Good luck with your art. Have a good day and a good life, my young fellow. Maybe one day we'll cross paths again in better terms. ^_^ cya

  • @FinalJinchuuriki That's nice.

    I haven't a concern for your confidence.. I derive minimal satisfaction in conversing with you. Goodbye.

  • @EmptyInfiniti DIS NIGGA RIGHT HERD

  • @EmptyInfiniti hey Shakespeare, shut the fuck up im trying to look at some actual comments

  • @FinalJinchuuriki I honestly advise that you occupy yourself elsewhere or enlist intensive professional assistance.

  • People always seem to forget,that actions speaks louder than words.You can do better?Stop babbling and show it.Thats all there is to it. Otherwise ,its just pointless "Bitching".

  • @JPremier1992 i am awesomecroco and i approve this message

  • @awesomecroco I agree

  • @JPremier1992 shh. Enjoy the video

  • @EmptyInfiniti Don't like what you're reading?

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  • @EmptyInfiniti Everyone has already replied to you, so I won't restate their facts.

    Why do you constantly have to mention how talented you are? Those who are talented do not need to say it; their work and performance show it. Smyton4tw, here, is simply a learner who has gone past an average animator. When you said you weren't impressed, you left it like that without explaining what the weaknesses work. Clearly, you aren't a good critic, if that's what you were trying to be. (Continued)

  • @EmptyInfiniti Do you really think that, by saying you are very talented and modest, that we will easily believe you? I can just right now that I am a million times better than you. There, I said it. Does that mean I am better? You have no recent submission of your work, so by restating your talent won't make us believe it. You said given your talent, you could animate. Really? Stop replying to our comments and please go animate. Come back and prove to us. Until then, stop with your bragging.

  • You appear more reasonable than that "Jinchurichi" loser..

    As for your 'recommendation'(disregarding the pajorative undertone of your response) I'm not interested in animation.

    In fact, I merely referenced my apptitude in drawing. So relax..

  • @EmptyInfiniti Wow. So first you claim, that you can animate given your talent. Then when I ask for evidence, you're not interested. You truly know how to back up your claims, don't you?

    Discussion is over. Next time you criticize, please do so constructively. Simply saying "I'm not impressed" isn't sufficient for the artist to take you into consideration.