Mary Sue- The House of Black

[MissAlwaysThirsty]

While most OCs are very, very bad, and turn out to be Mary Sues, it is possible to write an OC without it being a Mary Sue. But yes, Mary Sues are annoying and most OCs end up that way. Sadly.

[BellaSilvery]

3:04 I was expecting him to kick Mary Sue into the pool *_*

[GymnasticsGirl6163]

My Immortal? 

[sastath]

This song was way before its time. It's based off HP fanfic. If they had waited they would have had twilight. ... I just vomited.

[laureta1387]

ahaha... Chtlulhu!

[XxMrsCoreyFeldmanxX]

Mary Sue, Mary Sue, I'm so very sick of you...

:P Friggin Mary Sues...

[dancequeen5070]

ew. freakssss.

[susipunkrockprincess]

xD ooohh mary... im very sick of you 2 xD

Cool video

[JellybabyProductions]

Yeaaah! Death to rubbishy, navel-gazing fanfics. And ESPECIALLY the bane of fanfic-readers, Mary frickin' Sue.

-VoldeMargo, The Deathsticks

p.s. I've actually got a song abut fanfics up too- it's a popular subject. And has anyone seen Dawlish and the Archies' Album art? Blergh :D

[FunnyByDefinition]

I've never heard this before, but GAWD I love it!

[ChaosBladewing]

Not bad :)

btw, I must ask:

How many of you are from TV tropes?

[xXcherrypie123Xx]

you should listen to the life of a mary sue its kinda like this

[XxMrsCoreyFeldmanxX]

@xXcherrypie123Xx I love that song. xD

[MagaBruxesca]

i'm think you guys are great!

it's so hard to find someone of my age who likes Harry Potter and fanfictions kind of stuff, and you actually made a band and songs about it. I feel more normal when I watch this things, thank you so much

[Narnialover4]

i'm writing a Mary Sue bash story .That set in Prince Caspian time

[TheBlackLady]

"Mary fights Cthulhu"

OMG, that's pure GENIUS!! xD

yep, that's Mary all right! :D She rocks all lovecraftian evil, because she's so much more scary xD

[promethius202525]

This makes the point vividly!

[FantasmaLuna]

Erin's dress in the beginning is soooooo pretty! I want it!

[lbrav8]

Love the vid!!!! Some parts were so delightfully random. Where did Sneverus get that kitty costume? Oh, this is Katie (Luna) in case you were wondering. Has Magus came back to the meetings while wasn't there? I miss our snarky snape.

5 stars on vid

[moonariel]

I love this! Especially how your voices are great together! Are you guys together in real life or related?

[abisynthe]

no more comments about Magus looking sexy - it is grossing me out in the way it does when someone tells you how great your son is bed (and ya'll need to stop THAT too!) besides he has far too many people telling him this already - trust me

[Alterverse]

um, and who are you?

I don't have a son and I wouldn't know how that feels anyway :)

Oh man, I first commented on this more than a year ago, I'm not much into HP anymore and I still think this beat is too damn cool :D

[shrikechan]

.....he`s sexy :D Kyahahaha!!!!

[archer1949]

Excellent video. Spot on analysis.

What is it about Harry Potter that attracts so many Mary Sue writers?

[PyroEnchantress]

This is great. Stephanie Meyer should see this, as FantasmaLuna said. Haha, very, very, very nicely done. Double cool with knobs.

Cheers,

PyroEnchantress

[MPizzal]

Wait, is it rock, or electronic? Anyways, pretty good. Also, 3:26 where did you get that and for how much?

[tinyartist18]

this is a really cute video. Nice job :)

I really hate Mary Sues, they get on my nerves SO much. This was really funny.

[FantasmaLuna]

Now if only Stephanie Meyer could see this!

[Treemeadowsbackup]

AMEN!!! AMEN!!!!

[moonariel]

I am so glad that others know about her characters being Mary Sue and Gary Sue.

[rollytoo]

It's very funny! Amazing!

[Leeanna69]

That was hilarious...now i need to go write a parody of Harry Potter.  XD

[HPGeek151]

funny :]

[CybershotCollections]

lol

[Feelishe]

XD snape use a shampoo

[darkdisaster16]

lol, funny. I really like this and to be compleatly honest that guy is pretty cute....

[MyChemicalRocka]

I love this! Mary Sues and Gary Stus get on my nerves.

"She's beautiful, she's single, she's a genius, she is a metemorpmagus, she's an nimagus, she was in love with a werewolf, she befriended the merpeople..."

That gets SO annoying! This vid rocks.

[Fyreblade]

YES! Fanfic writers all over the world should see this!

[OrangeXenon54]

YAY!!! That was amazing!

[paisleythehpfan]

That's the true essence of Mary Sues.

[shutterflie]

this is the best representation of a MAry Sue EVER.

[Hells0Depths]

This is really...catchy...I love it!

[kowiineko]

hahah!!! Mary learns to swim..

[NintendoGamer012]

haha, really random, but this was added on my birthday.. ok, enough random..

I love this every time I watch this.. especially the snape goes blonde it.

[Maohsakura]

I love this and I write Mary-sues! Hate when people make fun of people who write mary-sues but you guys did it in a funny and nice way! keep at it!

[NewAngel4eva]

Dude, if you're serious about writing Mary Sues and not just parodying it, please leave Earth before I vomit. Take your retarded OCs and shove it. I'm sick of fanfiction being muddled by amateurs self-inserting themselves just because you've got a crush on a fictional character. We don't appreciate your kind around these parts.

[ras144]

@NewAngel4eva I think that's a bit harsh, and ass hole-ish of you. If they're amateur, then they dont know. Dont go around with that "OMG You're so retarded attitude. It makes you look worse than the amateur writers.

[Romanticideitzcoatl]

There was only missing a Marty stu but the video was great!!!

[Hiroko819]

That's amazingly funny! I loved it when Mary "learned to swim". XD

[litheshadow]

the guy is definitely gay.

[inoCHAN28]

LOL! So true! XD

[guntoheadBANGdead]

Haha, that made me laugh.

:D

[amyrat151]

This was amasingly funny, cheers to you!

[Jetsir]

Hell to the yeah!

[Daydream1899]

Amazing and oh so true.

[amyrat151]

That was awesome, it was put together well, very clever. And it's funny cause it's true, sadly.

[kenwen4]

What is he singing at 1:28? I can't make it out.

[nanachan17]

:'D

[fawkesandhedwig]

They're the best! I'm proud to be a student of theirs!

[romuluscrohns]

This is really funny! And it was a little more of a narrative than you get with most Wrock.

[AutumnDevi]

that made me giggle....the camera work could have been better, but other than that, the concept and the jokes were really well done!

[aliciayuy]

This is the best thing ever XD

[lilacbird]

genius, even if they cant sing!

[rulerofcandyland]

I love it! You are my heroes

[NightShadow405]

You peeps are my heroes. ^_^

[jesskz]

Bloody Brilliant! I adore!

[LyreIthil]

oh em gee!brilliant~

and yes,marysue is rather annoying

[ihearttjeff]

I love when she fights the Cthulhu or whatever!

[Babywiggims]

"Harry will snog you, Snape will too!"

I love when he pushes her into the pool.

[Babywiggims]

It's funny! Like it a lot. Mary Sues are friggin annoying, the fanfic with them is awful!! Great jb, HOB!

[Saiko47]

Its funny but the song gets on my nerves after a few minutes.

Dont get me wrong the concept is great its just me that has problem with the music.

[xROSExTYLERx]

Erin are you related to Toni Colette or something. (Seriously, Take it as a compliment)

[Alterverse]

Magus is damn sexy, especially in those Snape robes ;)

Great work.

[BrianAThomas]

In love with this video!

[teshara]

hee hee

[randompalindrome]

LOL- fantastic

[dream8919]

great vid Erin! Thats awesome- related to Jo haha

[MrsLuciusMalfoy]

Wow, this is great! It describes every kind of Mary Sue!

[taylah111]

Lovve

[ihearttjeff]

That was TOTALLY AWESOME!

[BadWolf2007]

That was great! Enjoyed every minute of it.

-Stevelle of The Morphing Werewolves

[iheartnurdz]

XDDDD

That is amazing! (and so true)

Love the yule ball dress. ^_^

[charminggoats]

lol, great work!

[voldemortwizardmetal]

Pure brilliance.

[chocolatecauldrons]

Oh LOLLLL!!! Great job guys! :) Erin, I love your pink GOF dress!

[PrincessPotato]

Erin, I love that you are descended from Merlin and JK Rowling! XD This is the best, great job!

-Sarah the Gryffindor Geek