sorry your poems r pretty amature but just keep trying. try doing a two line rhyme your ryhmes seem to be all in one sentance it makes it a bit dull e.g. I'm the best poet in the country do u agree? To keep the peace I advise you to agree with me, I just woke up I need to piss, but first I want you to listen to this, I'm gonna start a group on facebook don't get me wrong, it's gonna be called I like remzi's poems/song. So am I the best do you agree dear, are my ryhmes better then Shakespeare?
@remz303 No xD jk that was pretty good but u could do betta, so sit down and rite a letter,
of all the poems u can think of right now,
then in ten years u will findout they stink like Cow!!! xD thats coming from another *Ameteur*, so i suggest u be nice to those who dont have much experience
what was that song??
yusolaifdfer 1 year ago
sorry your poems r pretty amature but just keep trying. try doing a two line rhyme your ryhmes seem to be all in one sentance it makes it a bit dull e.g. I'm the best poet in the country do u agree? To keep the peace I advise you to agree with me, I just woke up I need to piss, but first I want you to listen to this, I'm gonna start a group on facebook don't get me wrong, it's gonna be called I like remzi's poems/song. So am I the best do you agree dear, are my ryhmes better then Shakespeare?
remz303 1 year ago
@remz303 No xD jk that was pretty good but u could do betta, so sit down and rite a letter,
of all the poems u can think of right now,
then in ten years u will findout they stink like Cow!!! xD thats coming from another *Ameteur*, so i suggest u be nice to those who dont have much experience
Goodybaberockz 6 months ago
WTF?? wow sorry but that was pathetic. 1 star
LittleMissComment7 2 years ago
um i sorry it wasnt that goood, but at least you tried ^-^
Imjustspecial7 2 years ago
Emo <.<
noobieowner2 2 years ago
whats ur reason for saying that?
RSGOD4 2 years ago
comment plz!
RSGOD4 2 years ago