@imlonelydreamer yeah i did think about that, but then i thought the silence at the end really helped to show the isolation of the character. good idea though, i could try it one day if i re-edit
@soph1234xxx I know the silence is really effective, im just wondering if maybe a bit of low volume music might add to it? its great as it is. who did the make up face paint stuff? Alfie looks really realistic!
@imlonelydreamer yeah, unfortunately i didn't have much time to edit as it is a college project and has a deadline etc. i did all the make up haha, took me a while to get the technique for it all right though. im glad you think he looks good, he was a brill actor for me x
@imlonelydreamer thank you! i think it would be better if i had the proper materials but i sort of improvised with eyeshadow and fake blood and stuff, seemed to have the desired effect! yeah the bruises on his face are my favourite wounds from the video, i just love the shot of his face near the end, and i think he did a good job of looking so miserable bless him x
@soph1234xxx aww haha. it was so strange seeing him misrible, on youtube hes always smiling aand laughing and in this he was all sad. You have done extremely well on your project!. and woah.... I thought you had like a proffesional kit thing!
This is really good! x
shootingstars1511 4 months ago
Nice! :D sent here by a guy called alfie moon <3
soundafekz 4 months ago
This is a great advert :D really well done, gets the message right across.
louisfoulkes 4 months ago
REALLY GOOD <3 i love the dramatic start, the only constructive critisism i could give was maybe put a piece of music with it?
imlonelydreamer 4 months ago
@imlonelydreamer yeah i did think about that, but then i thought the silence at the end really helped to show the isolation of the character. good idea though, i could try it one day if i re-edit
soph1234xxx 4 months ago
@soph1234xxx I know the silence is really effective, im just wondering if maybe a bit of low volume music might add to it? its great as it is. who did the make up face paint stuff? Alfie looks really realistic!
imlonelydreamer 4 months ago
@imlonelydreamer yeah, unfortunately i didn't have much time to edit as it is a college project and has a deadline etc. i did all the make up haha, took me a while to get the technique for it all right though. im glad you think he looks good, he was a brill actor for me x
soph1234xxx 4 months ago
@soph1234xxx woah, your really good at stage make up! Super jealous! D:. :L. the bruise under his eye and on his body looks especially good!x
imlonelydreamer 4 months ago
@imlonelydreamer thank you! i think it would be better if i had the proper materials but i sort of improvised with eyeshadow and fake blood and stuff, seemed to have the desired effect! yeah the bruises on his face are my favourite wounds from the video, i just love the shot of his face near the end, and i think he did a good job of looking so miserable bless him x
soph1234xxx 4 months ago
@soph1234xxx aww haha. it was so strange seeing him misrible, on youtube hes always smiling aand laughing and in this he was all sad. You have done extremely well on your project!. and woah.... I thought you had like a proffesional kit thing!
imlonelydreamer 4 months ago in playlist Liked
That really good! p.s. I like your nipple ;D
bantersanta 4 months ago
That is really good! :D
SMarlowS 4 months ago
Alfie looks like a vampire off twilight XD Not that I watch it :P
endlesslemon 4 months ago 2
THATS BRILL ! i no i probably just sed tat because alfies in it but is actually really well filmed !!!! XD hope she got a good grade for the ad XD
caitlinjedward12 4 months ago