This is a midterm at LAFS!?! I can't believe it! A director with this much talent shouldn't be at school at all! This was incredible! I love the weird assortment of objects placed upon the set! I don't really like the end with the OTS back and forth. It's kind of dull, but with the music coming in at the perfect moment it doesn't matter! It brings a tear to my eye! Directed by Jade Barbini? What a beautiful name for an amazing creative Director! Did someone say Oscar for best short film? Yes!!!
1. At this point in the movie, there should be only one photograph. I guess someone liked the shot with a bunch... but... those photographs are uhm, of hamsters and budgies. O o;
2. Merrick's using his right hand. No.
3. It's pronounced treeeevs. Not treh-vays. Seriously.
4. Kendal's... not quite cheery as she should be acting. *shrug*
OTHER THAN THAT, it was fairly good (though the brightly coloured room bugged me.) I liked Kendal. Anyway, since you're the editor, you did good! XD
This is a midterm at LAFS!?! I can't believe it! A director with this much talent shouldn't be at school at all! This was incredible! I love the weird assortment of objects placed upon the set! I don't really like the end with the OTS back and forth. It's kind of dull, but with the music coming in at the perfect moment it doesn't matter! It brings a tear to my eye! Directed by Jade Barbini? What a beautiful name for an amazing creative Director! Did someone say Oscar for best short film? Yes!!!
Amboo1 4 years ago
1. At this point in the movie, there should be only one photograph. I guess someone liked the shot with a bunch... but... those photographs are uhm, of hamsters and budgies. O o;
2. Merrick's using his right hand. No.
3. It's pronounced treeeevs. Not treh-vays. Seriously.
4. Kendal's... not quite cheery as she should be acting. *shrug*
OTHER THAN THAT, it was fairly good (though the brightly coloured room bugged me.) I liked Kendal. Anyway, since you're the editor, you did good! XD
Bealocwealm 4 years ago