For the Ladies! - "Next To Me" by ChiPoetry.Com

[egoodkis]

first time listener and this is nice

[toricoltori]

I was referring more to delivery but it was just the last verse that I felt that way. Honestly, I would buy it. The lyrics are good.

[Miller31Reggie]

I love da beat which was great and I do like being negative, but wanted me to be honest also the rapping was okay I think da beat took over the rapping! - Daniel U. Ikafia

[fwrencher]

Def feeling this joint boss... Not what I expected... It's different from your usual Christian rap I've heard from you in the past. Change is good... I like it.

[SubscribeToChiPOETRY]

@fwrencher much appreciated my dude. Had to take off the "christian muzzle" and be fully real.

[babyada15]

i like it (:

hopefullyy you will find that right girl (:

[toricoltori]

I like this joint. The production is good. The flow needs a little work however, it's a good piece . It has charm and gives you that good feeling that joints like Will Smith's Summertime gave you.

[SubscribeToChiPOETRY]

@toricoltori thanks for the feedback. I'll def work on the flow. tho im not sure if you were referencing the delivery or lyrical content or both. I'll work on both. this was a draft anyway. lol

[Ikem07]

Eh.. not my favorite, but it was descent lol. I didn't really get what Chi poetry had to do with "tha girl" you were talkin to... haha. Was that just a subliminal ad?

[MannyBYesYes]

Ok 360 lol always do you my dude because real recognize real. Keep at it til it turns into your diamond my dude

[rmoseberry]

i enjoyed it.... music is about expressing yourself! keep up the good work

[joyfuljoy30]

GREAT EFFORT!!!!

[poeticproduct]

To be honest I enjoyed the song, but really dislike the rapping. The flow of it is really harsh.

[SubscribeToChiPOETRY]

@poeticproduct thanks for bein real fam. its all love.