well it was good for the first draft but you have to have more diffrent shots like angels you also need to let the story follow throw the jump cuts are bad continuity and that is key cos you can have a shit script but if you had continuity it will work
Okay, there's potential here, which is why more time editing will rescue the project. Add some titles, credits and tidy those jump cuts so that it flows nicely.
well it was good for the first draft but you have to have more diffrent shots like angels you also need to let the story follow throw the jump cuts are bad continuity and that is key cos you can have a shit script but if you had continuity it will work
esmael124 2 years ago
Really good forr a first draft :)
think there could be a bit more light and it could flow better, but otherwise its well good :D
marmobissell2004 2 years ago
i think its alrite for now but i think a bit of light in this video will make it better even though its at nite.
selasie41 2 years ago
i agree with the comment below
this is quite good for a first draft though :)
just needs to flow better
MorbidlyInsanex 2 years ago
Okay, there's potential here, which is why more time editing will rescue the project. Add some titles, credits and tidy those jump cuts so that it flows nicely.
ramsausage 2 years ago