I think this is a great story about a man who wants to make something better for himself.
It seems often that when someone has high apirations or a need of something more than complacency others around them treat them as if it is hopeless.
At least that's what I took from it.
Very touching though maybe too dark. I understand the mood you were trying to set with lighting but I feel it may have been just a touch too dim at points.
I dont think this should be made it as a MOVIE.....This is art....Keep it nice & short....A movie is AFTER you watch it.....you will get bored of the repeat....CORRECT?
This is amazing it makes me think of something the amazing Tim Burton would think of. It also reminds me of a pesimistic mind in just such a large concentrated place it such a..interesting scenario very orginal. It's simply smashing! *awe*
J'ai adoré l'hyperbole dans ce court métrage démontre. Le fait que tout le monde soit malheureux et que seulement quelques rares individus recherchent le bonheur est une version exagérée de notre univers réel!!!
Sorry, my english isn't good enough for me to be able to explain in english.
i loved the hyperbole in this short film show. the fact that everyone is unhappy and that only some rare individuals seek happiness is an exaggerated version of our real universe
I see you've got lots of great comments. That's too bad. If it makes you feel any worse, I thought it was simply terrible. I'm not saying it's the worst thing I ever saw, it's not like I hated it or anything, but it was reprehensible. I hope you do worse next time.
this was a beautiful film. the stylizing and the concept behind it are both brilliant. some of the transitions seemed a little awkward, but other than that brilliant!
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after he kissed her she should have broke down and started crying and asked him to get them out to become happy together and so they would then see the sun together
Masterpiece for me. In other words I am planning to set it for few years as my fetish film :) It only means that it at best correlates with my feeling of social context vs. me. Also this film has big philosophical background. Perfect
Thanks for all of the props guys, I was the DP
here's a link to my new reel
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The director is now is LA and the producer is in NYC, we made this project for our first film project or (Mid Terms)
aaronbernakevitch 1 year ago
Thanks for all of the props guys, I was the DP
The director is now is LA and the producer is in NYC, we made this project for our first film project or (Mid Terms)
aaronbernakevitch 1 year ago
Did you guys not try a second draft.
greggyallstar 1 year ago
wow thats so creative and awesome
theHUNTERvideos 2 years ago
I liked the German expressionist atmosphere. It really gave the impression of gloom.
Hawdkoah 2 years ago
This is fantastic.
amphetamine85 2 years ago
I think this is a great story about a man who wants to make something better for himself.
It seems often that when someone has high apirations or a need of something more than complacency others around them treat them as if it is hopeless.
At least that's what I took from it.
Very touching though maybe too dark. I understand the mood you were trying to set with lighting but I feel it may have been just a touch too dim at points.
Overall very good.
DeuceLuther 2 years ago 2
soo gd. hopefully one day i'll be the art directer of one of these :P loved the tim burton style - my fav director.
comeplaymygame 2 years ago
The art Direction was very well done.
Someone clearly likes Tim Burton...and that is definitely not a bad thing!
qtuma 3 years ago 2
this was a good one! Great acting, and i like the lines
DemiRonin 3 years ago
Beautiful.
Great use of colour themes and lighting, and the background score was phenomenal.
Nice subtexts, too.
Well done, guys.
wowzeem 3 years ago 3
cant explain how good it was
Tepicoelano2 3 years ago
Beautifully shot... I am speechless.
One of the best.
PshIMaDITZ 3 years ago
i loved this soo much.
StellaisStellar 3 years ago
Taaan aburridoooooooo!
lucycine22 3 years ago
German expressionism?
punkiedog 3 years ago
I dont think this should be made it as a MOVIE.....This is art....Keep it nice & short....A movie is AFTER you watch it.....you will get bored of the repeat....CORRECT?
kalvintaka1 3 years ago
this is so depressing! lol but it should so totally be a movie =O it would be frikin brilliant
lonSinceInsane 3 years ago
This is amazing it makes me think of something the amazing Tim Burton would think of. It also reminds me of a pesimistic mind in just such a large concentrated place it such a..interesting scenario very orginal. It's simply smashing! *awe*
Saskue101 3 years ago
:D Esward sizzor hands
aaagk1 3 years ago
Absolutely brilliant!!!
J'ai adoré l'hyperbole dans ce court métrage démontre. Le fait que tout le monde soit malheureux et que seulement quelques rares individus recherchent le bonheur est une version exagérée de notre univers réel!!!
Sorry, my english isn't good enough for me to be able to explain in english.
x0xdeadlycookiex0x 3 years ago
is this kind of what you were trying to say:
i loved the hyperbole in this short film show. the fact that everyone is unhappy and that only some rare individuals seek happiness is an exaggerated version of our real universe
harmonyxdespair 3 years ago 3
I see you've got lots of great comments. That's too bad. If it makes you feel any worse, I thought it was simply terrible. I'm not saying it's the worst thing I ever saw, it's not like I hated it or anything, but it was reprehensible. I hope you do worse next time.
onoxon1 3 years ago 10
incredible!!!
H0WLYl 3 years ago
this was a beautiful film. the stylizing and the concept behind it are both brilliant. some of the transitions seemed a little awkward, but other than that brilliant!
heath1313 3 years ago
i loved it. it really put some things in my life in perspective.
steelstoner 3 years ago
wow ingenious! but i feel the ending is not very well done.
noseytricks 3 years ago
i'm not sure bout the script, but art direction, photography and direction where really good.
german expresionism?
caligari feeling?
muy buen trabajo! 5 estrellas.
curtisladri 3 years ago
this is fantastic it has a tim burton feel to it
iUlquiorra 3 years ago
f*cking fantastic
als47 3 years ago 5
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damn potheads
SeikoPsycho 3 years ago
lol
yourmomsfilms 3 years ago
wow dude im not really into movies without blood and nudity but this got me thinking ,well done
xyzfbm 3 years ago
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after he kissed her she should have broke down and started crying and asked him to get them out to become happy together and so they would then see the sun together
Gloeckz 3 years ago
I couldn't see it complete because I find acting not natural.
raheel07 3 years ago
Beautiful film with great acting and artistic direction.
Thanks for making this.
Vertrexz 3 years ago
wow man
KowaruKei 3 years ago
Great idea
hafnovidyos4u 3 years ago
Great film, well done. The mood really reminded me of dark city, especially with the postcard.
echoheadache 3 years ago
Masterpiece for me. In other words I am planning to set it for few years as my fetish film :) It only means that it at best correlates with my feeling of social context vs. me. Also this film has big philosophical background. Perfect
konikula 3 years ago
Very very nice premise and well executed film. Thank you for doing it.
K4hl4n4mnell 3 years ago
That would make a great full length feature, any thought about expanding it and doing that? It would be awesome!
Titandusk 3 years ago
I agree with VanGaore. This was great :]
quolwy 3 years ago
that was a very good job well done
morpi123 3 years ago
Beautifully done, I loved it.
PopTara10 3 years ago
fantastic!
mazingkid 3 years ago
now that was really something--congratulations
kenneth1950 3 years ago
that was great
4zcompany 3 years ago
very well made. i like it a lot.
1MinDLesS1 3 years ago
Great Ideas. Almost Tim Burton styled!
VanGaore 3 years ago
lovely!
simple11q 3 years ago
wow....i like it alot! thank you !
bellyfetisch 3 years ago
that was amazing. i loved it.
MaggieIsFierce 3 years ago
I really liked it. 5* and favorited. :-D
acverum 3 years ago
lol so far cliche but cool i guess hahaha! cpt comrade.. just stoppin in for repairs ;) ;)
nevous8 3 years ago
oh, how nice :]
MousketeerMaiden 3 years ago
That was pretty good. To bad it ended. I wanted to see him at the one place in the post card. :)
vaughnscheunemann 3 years ago
didnt like the female actor though.
TheCocaColaDude 3 years ago
strange. I rather liked it though.
Especially the bird cries at the end.
rubius0 3 years ago
I ♥ it!
*****!
AkanemaruNayuchi 3 years ago
I liked it! 5 stars!
jdstorms 3 years ago
cool
babtothebone 3 years ago