Untouchable [A Nelena/Nemi One-Shot Story]

[livileeeee12345]

No offense but I feel bad for your friend. I've been in that situation and my friend made me feel guilty for dating this one guy even though she just developed feeling for him after we had been dating for months. and when I broke it off with him to save oyr friendship she just became selfish and statred dating him days later. now were not friends, but im sure your a wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy better friend then she was. much love, xoxo<333

[prettyprincess5205]

i don't know how that feels beacause its like that story was ment for me caz the guy i like looks like that hes name is nick my bff is demi and i am selena and my freind likes him too but its like he only has eyes for me and she is upset i am not kidding seriously LOL FREAKY!!!!!!!??????????

[SuperJonasgirl1]

Aw :') i loved it! Poor nemi.. never even had a chance..

[OptimisticLivvy9o]

That's happened to me. Ugh, and I let the other girl get him when I like him. What an ass-hat I am. That's right. Ass hat!

<3 music's cute

[Zarav292]

How did u know how ur friend felt i've been in that situation and it's HORRABLE u don't know how it feels when he likes someone else my best friend

[xXrawrchick92Xx]

@Zarav292 haha. umm well. she told me how she felt. and it did break my heart in a way just because i liked him so much. but as far as thinking about how she felt and how i wrote it in her POV, i just assumed how she would feel. it's a pretty messed up situation. :)

[xXrawrchick92Xx]

@Zarav292 i basically assumed how she would have felt. i didn't know. LOL. but yeah :)

[ezzan38]

:D although its a life story, i kind of likeee it. but sad. NEMI ):

[xTroypayy]

this is ahh-mazing(;

[msjonasforever1]

this is amazing u're awesome dude

[converseRcool24]

haha this is cute! "She's out there Hobo-ing" lol..I felt so bad for Juliet, you could tell Alex didnt like her and she like loved him!

[nemifan16]

what song is this :)

awsome epp ;)

im in love with nemi haha.

[xXrawrchick92Xx]

Untouchable by Taylor Swift ;)

[yachtclubfan22]

ii am rsading this now because i like i alot but i realize that his is alot like me and my crush

i like someone ALOT i think my friend likes him idk i thinks he likes her too and he plays the sax in our school jazz band and i know he would never like me because it is a fantasy and friendship does come first

[peacelovejonas9431]

Whattt songs did u use?? Love the story!

Keep ur head up !! :)

[xXrawrchick92Xx]

Untouchable and Invisible by Taylor Swift :)

[suchaloser10]

that was really good :) i just lvoe one-shots xD

[bookworm1880]

Geez. This Alex kid must be PRETTY fine...

:P

Um, allow me to say, for your own sake...

MAKE A FUCKING MOVE ALREADY!

Come on. Even if this is half as embellished a story as I think it is, you still need to MAKE. A. FREAKING. MOVE. ALREADY.

Come on, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD...

(Or you could get a friend to guilt him into making a move, that might work too... :P)

[xXrawrchick92Xx]

I told him. It's a long funny story ;p

[bookworm1880]

I'm here if you want a 3rd party person to vent to as this real-life soap opera unfolds. :P

[xXrawrchick92Xx]

LOL!

It's a LONG story ;p

[RAWRkatieex3]

this is so scary. this EXACT thing happened with

me and my friend and my other friend, who's a guy o_O

i liked him for like 2 years then she started liking

him... and blah blah. but yea, good story. xD

[ashleytisdale2468]

I likeeee this!

Baha, thats soo true about what you said in the Dbox.

Songs are great for starting ideas :)

I loved this, great job.

[kitkatkirsty]

this is really good:) i like how it doesn't end all happy and lovey-dovey, even though i do like them endings :P

[bballstar2515]

this is REALLY good(:

[iluvjah2]

This is like a longer, more detailed version of what you've told me. Haha. (:

[jonasfan64]

wow. this is really good.

Has your friend seen this yet?

[xXrawrchick92Xx]

Yup. She was the first one to see this ;p

[jonasfan64]

ooo ok.

[JasmineTilman]

awesome! I liked the ending it's just different from others.