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  • nice good luck

  • you got potential homie keep it up

  • ha ha faygo +1 wish they sold faygo here where i live, this was better than the drake shit but if i can post on my twitter nd facebook that would be nice

  • its great ,so keep up the good work

  • Love it... Keep it up

  • this is sickness

    

  • keep up the good work

  • this is dope fuck the haters keep doing your thing

  • not bad

  • this shit is dope ass fuck

  • u sent me this video i like it :D

  • His Voice is Like Lil Wayne In older version, Something Different.

  • dope as fuck my nigga!

  • yeeeah this song fucks the shit out!

  • 5 star dude. Thumbs Up

  • to me your flow sounds as good as any mainstream rapper out there, i'd liken you to lil wayne. unfortunately, mainstream rappers are and sound shit, and wayne epitomizes that inadequacy. also, your lyrics are awful. but fuck it your doin what you wanna be doin not want ppl want you to be doin and i respect that

  • this shit is wack

  • I Like It I Feel LikeYou Could Make It

  • Imma b honest... u aint half bad i like it keep it up

  • I think you really have a good chance but you need to find something that's in right now something that people wanna hear. What's up with that Faygo can though!

  • Great !

  • its cool underground shit do b going hard somtimes

  • like it

  • Nice

  • You manage this guy in continuous voice

  • This is hot. I love it.

  • very good

  • Very tiiight!

    Just cut a little deeper with the meaning beyond the spitting, and you'll be a pro in no time.

  • i think it's HOT...i'd like 2 hear ya on a brand new beat though, somethin nobody's used.

  • good for like hood shit could have used a hook

    could be a bit more polished

  • Very good... Maybe just work on your lyrics a lil', only some parts. Over all pretty good.

  • You killed it man,Good Job

  • nice very good

  • Honestly man, this is really cliche. Many other artists rap about the same stuff If you want to be famous create original content, something that someone has never heard before leave this out of your lyrics: money swagger syrup sirens, police your mom gangs smoking on that shit
  • the second part was sick man honestly. keep it up and you'll soon be there.

  • Well done mate..

    Superb

  • you killed it

  • :o epic<3

  • a dis a good rap u shood cum a singer

  • Yo i love rap, & this is one of theee bestest ! :D

  • YMCMB sign this guy up. MMG you do the same thing. This is the type I wanna hear with other rappers

  • REally liked it. LOVE YOU

  • SHUT UUUUUPPPP HATERS >:(

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  • thats an awesome song i couldnt make a remix like that i tried but didnt work out

  • Nice!!!

    Grtz yeah bro!

  • Nice dude

  • i think you have a great unique voice. keep up the work! and nice video too

  • Hot, keep it up bull

  • Woah. You're really good. You'll probably be the NBT.

    NBT: Next Big Thing :)

  • Honestly, I think this is a hot track. If you come just a little bit stronger with your lyrics I think you'll defiantly make it. Keep up the good work.

  • Music clip's awesome, u look like a star so keep up the good work

  • Your flow is nice, But was this a remix or a freestyle

  • Flow's nice, so is the video... but your content is complete bullshit, just like the rest of todays mainstream rap. Clearly you idolise 'artists' like wayne and gucci mane, which is not a good idea my friend. As the top comment says, you need to relate more to your viewers, people (at least, the ones with brains) are getting tired of hearing about drugs bitches and money. Just tryna give some constructive criticism :)

  • good shit

  • @TheBell65 everybody needs to read that comment,..

  • Yea ur good, you just rap about everything that every other rapper does. Try something different.

  • I agree with the guy below me, your lyrics are fuckin boring, dude, don't rap if you're going to do it like this remix, cause if you are, then you fuckin suk, and dude, anyone and I do mean anyone can rap like that, put some meaning to them, cause honestly they suck, oh but you have a voice like Too short, smooth...

  • Just another rapper wanting to get famouse talking about what every other Rapper of todays shit mainstreem music talks about.

  • video is amazing

    flow is amazing

    lyrics need some work

  • "yo dawg, i herd u lyke bad music, so i put a shit on your shit, so you could shit all over this shit!"

  • Don't send me any more invites because you suck!

  • Keep it up! You are very good rapper , fuck tha haters !

  • ur voice anint with the flow

    

  • you really suck that is my opnion

  • Cool voice bro.

  • Why do people send me rap related messages, when i only listen to rock ... i mean how did they got my login ?

  • Tbh thz video was lil gud but u need more creativy

  • WHOEVER USES THE WORD "SWAG", YOU ARE A FUCKING BANDWAGON SHEEP CLOWN

  • yo your fucking wack,..dont send me this shit ever again,..i couldnt get past 5 sec without hearing the word nigga,..YOUR A JUNKIE IF YOU RAP ABOUT DRINKING COUGH SYRUP

  • This is terrible.

  • lol i kno im #LATE but i listened to ya video Not Bad , it was creative , you def. have the potintal i think its just the matter of how bad you wanna make it. you say you really want to be a star, go for it , talent is just skill, personality and Heart, sample or make beats witch ever one you do create your lyrics with full thought not just with whats hot. Being real is mostimportant ( FYI) Your talented , i can tell by the haters on ya comments of the vid. Let em' hate, Do YOU ! & make ya Money

  • I think u got some skillz nd fuck all da haterz because u tryin to make it out there

  • Sorry man, It's nothing new... You need to come up with something new and never heard before...

  • word you got potential if you focus on your methods! you really have all the things you claim you do ? man people want things they can relate to such as shit men go through everyday. and the tune is too mono tone. good luck man work hard play hard !

  • fuckin garbage, you wanted the truth? You got the truth, anyone who likes lil wayne will like you, so yeah maybe you have a chance at being a star, but for the love of god leave faygo out of your videos, you arnt hard enough to even relate yourself to faygo, leave that to the wicked clowns

  • fuck u haters good song man

  • "count money, fuck bitches, swollen pockets, drinkin', being fly, pussy"

    Sayin' all that bullshit, only kid's listen to that shit.

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  • Watch some of drakes videos idk hes famous ... for a reason. you're good though but yeah . ...

  • how do i do wat he did and send a universal message to alot of ppl ... cause i want ppl to check out my songs too man !!!!

  • Tight nice Song man

  • Don't do remixs and don't rap u suck dick for breakfast, lunch, and dinner, kkk

  • I feel like ur trying to sound like some1 else. Let us know who twofifty really is. U lost me from tha beginning, write more meaningful rap. What drives u to do this etc.

  • Good SHiitt Brah listen to my shift on my page

  • anybody could like this and never hear it again...you need to spit something that they can relate too..and actually be like "damn everything he says is true" or "he says things that i thought about but never knew how to actually put it in words"....im also a rapper, im lauching a mixtape called== MY INTRODUCTION...Its gonna be epic...right now im putting songs out with a $10 mic just so people could get a feel of me...so when it drops the earth will shake.,.

  • @Markofficial12 rappers are a dime a dozen. don't think you special cuz you spit shit people can relate to. I heard your tracks. Listen to the difference between how he catches the beat and flows and how you completely fuck the rhythm up. I'm not gonna knock you for trying. But don't critique people when you can't drop shit on their level.

  • Every body check out my music channel for some fire ass music ! Like/comment/sub

  • ur voice is kinda rough like lil waynes

  • @123dragonballz321 LOL rough? correction, whiny, lil waynes voice is whiny, maybe rough since he got out of jail, cocks down the throat can make a voice sound rough

  • Okay my botha from anotha motha I used to spit and wright but I used to choke not any more like wanna be rappers like yourself won't ya say Loc? My poppa's breaking office mold and mailing all labels from what I brake in the WWE are called Buffet Tables, I'm a future WWE NXT Rookie and find out what I'm packin 'cause I'm the only reason for some total nonstop action.

  • Aw man u one of them doin it for the money niqqas

  • Droped bi to check out ur musik hopee yu make it far :•D

  • you're talking about bitches and being a real dude and getting fucked up, like your flow is aiight. Get some substance to your rhymes instead of just the normal shit.

  • @littlehero55 don't waste your life trying to be a rapper. Get good grades and make something of your life.

  • sickkkkk asss fooooo u good singer keep upp the goodnesss

  • lol NICEE!

  • Syrup....In your cup? the fuuuuuuuuuuu

  • WTF did I just watch?

  • Nice singing

  • good flow

  • NIGGA SHUT UP u lame as fake stop rapping quit it like u quit ur diaper before it turn to viper of ur life

  • Love it hope ur dream comes true I wana b a rapper but I'm 11 in 8 days so it's prob nev Gona happen hope urs comes tru tho bye :)

  • like the second rap better

  • @youngtae23bae I agree just a bunch a bullshit!!

  • U aint talking about nothing just sound like another cheap version of lil wayne and sound like a wannabe u gotta lot of work to do

  • Ur good but make ur voice lower not higher

  • heck a tight bro

  • do work my mannn

    

  • WOW! I Love It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • this shit tight

    do your thing bra

  • this videos alright

  • Damn, Hella sick

  • shut yo dumbass up

  • i like it

  • sick

    

  • ur the star of the futura

  • U str8

  • gud job brotha!! i like thizz...!! yaeh man..superb!!

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  • I think it's pretty good.

    It sounds right anyway.

    But, this isn't my genre so I'm not sure of what I'm saying...

    Cheers

  • I can rap too and im 13 and am  a girl and white and i wanna show the world u can do anything and i also am really good and can rap fast

  • @staffepicfail101 leave raping and learn to work in the kitchen

  • Nice, could be better. should get some ghost writers to help out and rethink ur flow a bit

  • drugs and easy life and easy cash propaganda.

  • Rap about real shit. Not degrading women or talking about money drugs and sex. This is garbage.

  • You remind me of the rapper 'Too $hort'

  • same shit

  • Its good C:

  • you have it, but you are rapping the wrong stuff...rap from your heart, its something better for sure

  • Same as @theGOLDENfeece

  • thats that shit right here

  • Good shit man.

  • Solid. Just play around with different sounding beats and tempos to make sure you don't get stuck in a certain handful of flows. A couple tracks of mass appeal and couple track of keepin it real. Lol

  • Ow while makin a remix to drake

  • Idk about rap.....so im really confused.....and who the fuck do u think u are talking shit about women like that?!

  • well idk wats up wit all these haters...u have good voice..but yeah ur lyrics are amateur. up the lyrics and youll make it bro

  • So I got this sent to me: "I really think I have a chance to be a star and I really want to be one, will you just listen to me for a second?" and this video.

    I honestly hope you do not, i repeat, DO NOT become a star. You rap about the lamest things and do it like a 6th grader. We have better rappers in Hungary ffs.

    Just listen to this and learn:/watch?v=wWcHYfNl_yY

    You will not understand a word, but you can hear 2 guys who know how to fuse words together. Peace.

  • @somika87 Same Here!

  • wow don't hate on this guy, he's doin alright and i like the video twofiftyinc. you haters act like he's the first guy to rap about sex, drugs, and pussy. although some songs go harder when I can relate. keep it up... and watch my channel too

  • Swag!! Seriously! 

  • nope i dont like it like everyone saying sex drugs and everthing......

  • i think you did a good job if there wasnt sooooo many people trying to make it in the music industry

  • The name "twofifty" is one i might be able to hear in about lets say 3-5 years? Hey have you heard TwoFifty's New song yet bro!?

  • Umm im speechless but not in a good way

  • I Like The Song << people dont hate see top cooments..!!! this guy is following his dream unlikee u ,, Dude I Have 1 Advisee  All Rappers Rap About Puss y Weed Ficking Bitches And Hoes rap Something Different To Let Peoplee see that Your Not An Immatation..!!!

  • its basic

  • It's like if Too $hort was on crack

  • Yesh! You are very good! Your voice is perfect! I am going to post you on my Facebook page. XD

    Keep it going. But change your words. They're too sweary...Lawl. But other than that, YOU'RE AWESOME!

  • I only made it through 30 seconds of this.... Get you shit together man... This is some gutter trash rap, no real content, just a bunch of bullshit youre spittin about. Spit whats real, spit whats true, dont just vomit some filth onto a track and call it rap. Sorry man, just not feelin this one.

  • You got skill keep it up faygo is the way to go whoop whoop

  • You said to give an honest opinion, well here it is, I didn't like it at all and I think you're only on here to make people angry at you, find something else to do with your time, better yet get a life!!!

  • Its ok

  • Ey man don't listen to these guy I think you got potential

  • Ain't on that hatin shit, but I ain't really feel him... Flows awkward wit dah beat...this is typical rap music...

  • SICKK SHIT

  • Wasn't really feeling it...

  • Pretty dope.

  • check out lil miss boss

  • shit go hard

    

  • this sounds dope for a remix

  • yeh boii just got your message now i dno whether this is becoz im really high but this sounds dope brehh keep it up man

  • Young Kc from Kcprods has a I'm On One Remix that goes x100 times harder then this. #JustSayin

  • second rapper was nice...

  • @ThisGuyIsADick i know right like last night when i was raping your mom in the ass hard and she was screaming for you to help but u werent home i kept trying to tell her i was raping her cuz monkeys shouldnt try to do stuff with their life p.s try looking your mom in face imagining my veiny brown cock shooting loads on her lips as she screams with fear but i guess its what monkeys do right,u fuckin troll

  • @Thatpartydude lol its troll hunting season haha

  • yeah, you have the potential to make it big...props

  • @iceheadcv123 No he doesnt, wtf, he's black!

  • damn first guy sounds like a gangster ass Too Short.. nice

  • Dang nice

  • Yeah, good, really good! :)

  • i hate the Lyrics