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  • So glad I remembered to bookmark this for when I could get back to it. Picked right up where I left off and couldn't stop watching. Fanastic finale. The goldfish line made me giggle. Just right - not too sweet, not too soft, nor too familiar. Great series, fantastic cast, framework, improv, camera work, just love it. Looking forward to seeing more from this channel, director and the wonderful talent represented here.

  • this was great :) Thanks for the invite, I really enjoyed watching all thirteen episodes.

  • I did not expect to get to episode 13 when I started watching the first one. I thought it would be just another soapy. Yet here I am. Well done on a gotta-watch-the-next-episode-n­ow series. I loved it and I liked the ending.

  • WELL DONE! Congrats to everyone on this project! I would have like to see something else in the last episode but perhaps that is only my desire for sustained intensity. I like the physical inuendo of verbage and the editing carries us thru the uncomfortable moments( what was missing for me) to the stylized comfort of "catch and release". I would be interested in alternate endings to this emotional camouflage of charactors. This is why they want more.. excellent!

  • I would stand up and applaud if it wasn't so early. Superb ending to a superb series.

  • The fish are trying to kill eachother again. Let's let them tough it out.

  • @Frantzu very true. The talking and laughing in the beginning and in the end! Fanatstic ^.^

  • The silence in the begining nearly made me shout at the screen!

    I smiled for this whole episode omg! Well done! I'm glad how this turned out. Really glad.

    James just needs to break up with Nicolette and TRY HARD not to mess up!

    Loved this.

    :)

  • @Frantzu there you go. we couldn't said it better ourselves. thanks for watching!

  • awesome

    just luv it

  • I enjoyed it!!.

  • I have one thing to say about this series...AMAZING!!! Great acting, great story, sweet and satisfying ending! i'm a little surprized that Nicolette gave up that easily, but the psychology of it made sense, Nicolette obviously likes gambling and games, and thought she'd win. Maybe if you decide to do another it could be a continuation, Nicolette's reaction, and revenge?

  • The HD is fantastic: crisp and clear. The acting throughout the entire series was so professional: I believed these characters existed in the real world. The writing was understated; this is how real people talk..no melodrama...that's a good thing. And the camera angles were pure art...this episode was made 10 times more interesting by the creative camera work. (I felt like a fly on the wall in a real place!) But I did get seasick at 3:51. Bravo! Carry on!

  • gotta love a happy ending(:

  • Television does not get any better than this and actually surpasses many dramas on the air today. Alonso, you and the rest of cast and crew (cast, truly amazing acting) have done a great job and it is my hopes you continue this with a second season. As a writer/director of my own web series, you inspire me to do better. You have raised the stakes for web content. GOOD JOB!

  • @rdfrankssr thanks! (we're blushing) best of luck with your own projects!

  • Good job again!

  • more more more more more!!!!!!! it ended to smoothly

  • lol a burnt bagel wheres the cream cheese?i enjoy the series.great filming acting sound light damn your good

  • i would like this as an ending:) it was a great series! are you thinking of making any other new series?

  • @writingdreamsful keep an eye out on our channel, we'll be back with more projects soon. thanks!

  • Coolz. :P Good job on this one. :) :P :D

  • sooo big mag cups!

  • i frigging love this series !!! please make more ! <3

    make the next part about how he is still going back to the other girl :P or something like that...or even that she is with some one else now :O lol

  • THANKS GOODNESS. love it. please no more drama i just want them to be happy!

    and since i say it in every video

    O SNAP

    haha :)

  • @LivTheLife lol its supposed to be drama filled ;P

  • nice job

  • Very wonderful series but with of ups and downs.So educative.Tanx.

  • Holy Moly... Nic is going to freak out.. Will she be at the wedding? Or will she be waiting when they get home... This was a cute scene... I loved the bathroom dialogue.. It was all great...

  • i love the bathroom idea. women always look good in the bathroom

  • Hmmm....it's not Barbasol...maybe it is, and he just uses it conservatively....;])

  • Nice aquarium. ;])

  • Are you keeping the same story and moving forward with that? Or are getting new people etc. new story?

  • Keep them coming! Give me more!

  • Okay, so I'm a huge fan of this show and every time that I get an e-mail I stop everything to watch it. (I've been late to school for it!) So when I saw that this was possibly the finale I was crushed. Of course then I watched the episode and I must say that it won me over. If it ended now I would be content, I would miss it terribly, but I would be content. This is amazing and I can't thank you enough for making this wonderful show. I look forward to seeing more from you!

  • @musicvamp2113 thanks! yes, this storyline is now officially over but we'll be back with more experimenting soon. thanks for watching!

  • I do like this show well done and thanks for remembering me as each episode comes out. Nice fish tank, everyone in the video are very happy today and they were right, the red dress is very nice and shiny too.

  • Life is too short! Why can´t everyone just make up and make love!

  • @Luvhimtilldeath : I know. Jeez, what the heck?! ;])

  • Cool very cool

  • Reading backwards!!! Yes, she's mentally somewhere else.. And SMOKIN" in the red dress. Great season guys. Do your thing for the finale. I"m sure it will be awesome as always.

  • Come on there has to be more <3

    i really liked watching this, thank you for sharing your wonderful work (^_^)

  • I liked your video..great job !:D

  • they definitely have new tactic(s) lol :) nice one...

  • I think I will use it for my tombstone! LoL

  • @UntitledFiction and @afmayo >> ∞ ☮, ❤ & ☯

  • Yeaa... #CUTE ¡¡Great Scene!! #LOL I like your work ;D

  • VISIT OUR CHANNEL PAGE IF YOU WANT TO HAVE A SAY ON THE FINALE OR SUGGEST ANOTHER FEW POSSIBLE EPISODES, & VOTE ON OTHER'S IDEAS.

  • @monica9978runner right back at you! thanks for watching!

  • yeah! this is what i like! thumbs up!

  • I like this!

  • ...and kudos for the early power of silence.

  • @iampsalmbody silence rocks. we had to do it.

  • Gotta say that Ep. 12's mild psychosis-in-stereo was hilarious to me, but here there were some endearing moments between the real couple. The cocky double-entendre of two people who know what slick is (killer fish & scarlet dress?! - LOL), G's concern @ 0:51-52, the megatons of self-loathing swag/how-next-can-I-scheme-if-­this-flops energy that left James' immediate plate in 3:38-3:44 and the mutual understanding of drama's cost ~ cool! :( 4 quik end, but Deliverance & EWF "Devotion" cld b good.

  • Nice Work,,, Like always,,,

  • Amazing just wow.

  • First I want to say.....GREAT LIGHTING! The lighting was VERY VERY good. I loved the effect when he walked in door and there was a bit of real natural light not too dark etc. that was GORGEOUS. I know I complain about lighting occasionaly but it was PERFECT. they're skin looked great. she was gorgeous! GREAT scene. at first i thought it was tense but when he got the bagel/coffee everything switched. i liked the way you did it . i love your work. thank you!! loved it

  • and their subsequent communication....really cool polar emotuons in this 4 min vid !

  • very nicely done this time....i can really feel the characters' tensions.

  • awsome video :)

  • Great sincerity by the female actress, which is not taking anything away from the male actor. Better use of the lens than in the last video, no more moody panning left to right and right to left when on the characters' faces which had the potential to make the viewer dizzy ... stay with it, you have potential. Be Cosmic ...

  • thank you UFProject.

    keep them coming.

    interesting dynamics going on .

  • great video you got me watching and waiting for more Thank You

  • I dont get it. What are they talking about?? Who is gonna win what??

  • @isamrulz who can dance with the most old people! the foxtrot! come on! :) maybe it was a bit rushed...

  • You could go on and on with this but as it goes all good things must come to an end

  • @dedski7 the perfect line for a gravestone. :)

  • I freaking love this series!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @Bsexylee thankss!!!!

  • everything was so heavy, in a good way, until now. Its good to have a breather!

  • Before the video: Finale?!?!

    Midle Comments: I wanna be in one of these...

    After the video: Whaaaaaaaat?

  • @Punkanator go to our channel page if you want a say on what (if anything) comes next. thanks for watching!

  • eh...that was kinda disappointing...

  • @elvali0205 go to our channel page if you want a say on what (if anything) comes next. thanks for watching!

  • Uh, isnt the psycho bitch gonna come back? Jame's friend said she did everything she could to get her way and break the marriage from her relationship before, And we saw what extremes she went to too get Georgia to cheat, so why isnt he telling Georgia about the psycho so its REALLY solved. This is just weird.

  • @martianmartinis go to our channel page if you want a say on what (if anything) comes next. thanks for watching!

  • I like it....just because I like Georgia.....but I feel like they should have addressed Georgia sleeping with that black guy. Just feels weird they didnt...

  • @hardrocker943 go to our channel page if you want a say on what (if anything) comes next. thanks for watching!

  • It's a nice way to move on but it seems a little too simple.  Sequel? An UFP 1.1 or 2.0? There's stuff missing; loose ends that need to be tied up.

  • @TrickPink there's gonna be a sequel i believe he stated, cuz its only 1.0, also its simple but... in some cases it does work

  • @SPVietBoy It really needs one because while it works as an ending, and a nice ending, it's also neglecting a few loose ends. Loose ends that are bugging the crap outta me. They ought to be addressed.

  • @TrickPink thats true, prob gonna be addressed when he starts again, always gotta end wit a way to have a strong plot next time (true for sequels and tv seasons)

  • @SPVietBoy go to our channel page if you want a say on what (if anything) comes next. thanks for watching!

  • @TrickPink go to our channel page if you want a say on what (if anything) comes next. thanks for watching!

  • Beautiful.

  • Loved it! So looking forward to UFP 2.0. :-)

  • "I can forget everything that's happened if you can" <~~Best line EVER! That really got me. Great job as always guys!

  • @OhYesWeDid09 thanks for watching!

  • loved this series ! :)

  • when will UFP 1.1 be released?? i can't wait! this series was awesome! thanks for the good work :D

  • I liked the ending, it put a nice smile on my face.

  • @D3R1CKZ thank you! it put a smile on ours as well...

  • Yaaaay! Favorite one yet :)

  • Nice work - looking forward to season 2 :-)

  • Seaon 1 Finale...so there's a season 2 :D Hopefully.

    Come one people. They can't end it perfectly or else there wouldn't be room for a season 2!

    I can't wait for more, regardless of what it is, I'm sure you will do your best work.

    This series was amazingly done, great job!

  • @Kelsuuchuu go to our channel page if you want a say on what (if anything) comes next. thanks for watching!

  • @iDirtyDianaX She fucked the black guy. More or less the same thing, isn't it?

  • I loved the whoe thing, but this was not really the resolvation I had in mind. This was kind of just another episode to me. Anyways GREAT JOB. I loved the whole thing.

  • @CryticalDrew go to our channel page if you want a say on what (if anything) comes next. thanks for watching!

  • I may be the only one but I loved that ending. I am so glad that they got back together. The characters clearly loved each other and that is why they got back together.

  • I feel there's a gap and it ended too simply.

  • @HeiligZorn

    I don't think it ended too simply. He never clearly said that he would forget it what happened and that leaves alot to think about.

  • @HeiligZorn maybe... go to our channel page if you want a say on what (if anything) comes next.

  • @HeiligZorn totally agree with you...

  • I don't like this guy. He's an asshole :(

    Cheating on this nice girl with that bitch :I

  • @iDirtyDianaX I totally agree.But I think he's gonna try and make up for his"asshole-ness"

  • i am the 40th viewer..

  • And so ends a great story. Hope you guys plan on doing another one! I enjoyed this very much!

  • @jfolck1886 we are considering extending the storyline. visit our channel page if you have any ideas. thanks!

  • My dear lord jesus this show is beyond amazing! great work keep it coming! somebody gonna be mad haha!

  • @Arod006enforcer thanks! go to our channel page if you want a say on what (if anything) comes next.

  • somebody is gonna be pissed :p

  • @princessshortie29 you think? go to our channel page if you want a say on what (if anything) comes next.

  • yes. could it be?!

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