It's good - very gorgeous voice - and on pitch as well...which is amazing! Just try not to sound so whiny...maybe i you open a little more it'll be better. Good job though!
After listining to this version you may want to visit this version where there's a different take of 'When you're gone' sung by two sisters at a local summer festival. Your comments are welcome, but keep in mind they're both novices singing on stage in a crowded parish square!
Thanks for your comment in my video, however I honestly thought you'd write something more positive then 'it's not that great' considering that they were singing live in front of hundreds (literally) without a sound check (due to time constraints). You own effort, while undoubtedly recorded from the comfort of your home and over many takes, isn't really better!
I would say 6/10. Try to breathe a little less deeply, and try to sing more... whats the word... smoothly. Other than that, you rock, follow your hopes and dreams! :)
Fantastic voice... again... I always love listening to you sing! The guitarist in this one (was it you, or?) knocked around a few monotonous chords in some parts, but I still give it 5/5 - your voice is too perfect :)
OMGH thank u vry vry much 4 putting this vid its sooo SUPER AWSOME and i llllllllluuuuvvvvvvvvv luv love AVRIL LAVIGNE SO MUCH and i would rather lick a public toilet sit than never ever never ever meet or c see avril in real life i louv her so much sssssuuuuuuuuuupppppeerrrrrrrr luv her i would die 4 her
Just AWESOME! I didn't hear it...I felt it!
jimiocc 3 years ago
Nice vocal and guitar work. High ratings!
David777111 3 years ago
wow! you sound better than avril. Can you please do someone's watching over me by Hilary Duff?
hannamontana15 3 years ago
beautiful...perfect!!
I have cover of it too. check it.
malena015 3 years ago
Amazing!
Im looking forward to what you sing next!
Good luck !
SuMMon3r 3 years ago
thanks!! my latest cover is "she will be loved" by Maroon 5
thecommonfactor 3 years ago
you are so good, you sould go to AL and be a star :P
babyamanda1993 3 years ago
WOAH!
You're really good!
tokiohotelisluv 3 years ago
I liked it.
luartropical77 3 years ago
Wow! You're really good! This is one of my fave songs by Avril!
AvrilLavigneisdabomb 4 years ago
It sounds like your singing threw your nose
mk10101993 4 years ago 4
Awesome! ;)
twilightmooneclipse 4 years ago
good
i need to see a pic of u
wHatUwAntBiTcH 4 years ago 2
You're so good. I wish I could sing. =]
JoBroLoverrr 4 years ago
your really good.....
but on some parts sound kinda weird
and idk why but they just do
but other than that your really talented <3
musicismyloverboy 4 years ago
really amazing!!! you are so adabtable! great ! keep on singing!wonderful! im a great fan of you!
bahamagirl23 4 years ago
my compliments...
you are very talented
autodidatta 4 years ago
did u have singing lessons
uruguaysbabii24 4 years ago
no, but i would like to..
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
For someone with no lessons, you are TALENTED. With lessons you'll only get better.
mmafan79 4 years ago 3
thank you so much for that nice comment:)
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
not your best
but great job.
daniellerachelcyrus 4 years ago
wow your good!!
lovegal89 4 years ago
this is awesome i hope to be as good as u one day ^^
maddie506 4 years ago
Your voice is lovely! 5/5! :)
Looking forward to hear more from you
elamperti 4 years ago
thank you so much!!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
i love it!!
xXEveryhtingImNotXx 4 years ago
REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD!
FutureMrsJoeJonas93 4 years ago
i like it...
gaspard128 4 years ago
ty:)
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
wow thats alot of new comments =)
wynstan 4 years ago
cann you tell me where you download from?
tarnia 4 years ago
ididnt' download it from anywhere... my friend played it and recorded it for me.
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
hello , can send me the instrumental version?
thanks ohs x)
and you sang greatly too,
tarnia 4 years ago
i don't have the instrumental on my computer anymore...sry!! thank you!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
It's good - very gorgeous voice - and on pitch as well...which is amazing! Just try not to sound so whiny...maybe i you open a little more it'll be better. Good job though!
Sunkissed04643 4 years ago
ok, thank you for the comment:)
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
alright ?
ellyzes 4 years ago
ty!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
kinda nasaly-ish-ish!!lolz but besides that its pretty good
JeSSiCARoCkLoVeR 4 years ago
ty!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
After listining to this version you may want to visit this version where there's a different take of 'When you're gone' sung by two sisters at a local summer festival. Your comments are welcome, but keep in mind they're both novices singing on stage in a crowded parish square!
MgarrKid 4 years ago
ooo
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
Thanks for your comment in my video, however I honestly thought you'd write something more positive then 'it's not that great' considering that they were singing live in front of hundreds (literally) without a sound check (due to time constraints). You own effort, while undoubtedly recorded from the comfort of your home and over many takes, isn't really better!
MgarrKid 4 years ago
alright. i understand. thanks
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
This is good, i like it, but it seems...nasaly(sp?haha), and small, Project that voice girl!
omfgufgt 4 years ago
haha thank you. i'll try to project a little more on my next ones!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
i like it.. your voice might seem.. how should i put it... uhmmm... small or tiny... but i like how sang it.. great job.. ;>
jennylyn1985 4 years ago
alright, thanks:)
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
I would say 6/10. Try to breathe a little less deeply, and try to sing more... whats the word... smoothly. Other than that, you rock, follow your hopes and dreams! :)
haatz 4 years ago
thank you so much for the advice!!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
You have a pretty good voice...but it's not amazing..and it's a little annoying
avthebestdamthing 4 years ago
ty :) lol appreciate your opinion.
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
Good 5/5 !
Jordygeurts 4 years ago
thanks!!!!!!!!!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
omg. this is so good!!!
xxJadesgurl4lifexx 4 years ago
thank you !!!!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
u are so good. great job. love your voice
princess5738 4 years ago
thank you!!!!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
i'm sorry, but i don't like it, it's like you are crying or something :s Sorry
xxx
DeMellie 4 years ago
no need to be sorry :) after years of singing/performing, i've gotten comments like yours. and i appreciate them.
i just have one question. is there something i can do to make it sound more pleasant? or any advice??
thanks:)
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
this is so god!!!
therasmonian 4 years ago
ty!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
u have a really good voice u should be the next american idol lol
101tinkerbell101 4 years ago
aww... that's soo sweet! thank you!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
wow, i love this song, and you're great at singing it... your voice is amazing!
staeffler11 4 years ago
thank you!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
your welcome!
staeffler11 4 years ago
i love this, your voice is beautiful :)xxxx
dazisbi 4 years ago
aww, thanks!!!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
i would love to see you singing on a stage one day ur awesome! keep it up...and like midgetmoize said u can onely get better!!!!!!!
issa422 4 years ago
that's really sweet of you to say!! thank you soo much for the comment!!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
Fantastic voice... again... I always love listening to you sing! The guitarist in this one (was it you, or?) knocked around a few monotonous chords in some parts, but I still give it 5/5 - your voice is too perfect :)
allquixotic 4 years ago
i appreciate the comment:) Wynstan plays guitar. I'm terrible at guitar. He plays the guitar, while i do the singing.
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
oh... thanks for the comment... will work on it =)
wynstan 4 years ago
YOUR AWESOME! Just sometimes your a lil nazily... But other then that boy your pretty good.
HuskyLuvva 4 years ago
thanks!!!!!!!!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
SWEETTT!! i love it!
rmalouko 4 years ago
thank you!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
ur so good..i'm so jealous of your voice (ina good way)i love you!! and you can only get better!!
midgetmoize 4 years ago
haha, thanks again:)
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
i dont like the song
but u did really good on it
=]]]
patrickluvesme 4 years ago
lol, thanks!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
ur welcome!:)
nickjonasforever 4 years ago
i agree it is a teeny bit nasaly but other than that,its pretty good,i luv this song
nickjonasforever 4 years ago
ty!
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
Great song :D
As for the singing, it seems a teensy bit nasaly, but definitely not bad! :]
MusicCrazy2452 4 years ago
lol oo your not the only one who thinks my singing is alittle nasaly. thanks for the comment :)
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
well yup i know im weird hahah
Girlygirlsam 4 years ago
OMGH thank u vry vry much 4 putting this vid its sooo SUPER AWSOME and i llllllllluuuuvvvvvvvvv luv love AVRIL LAVIGNE SO MUCH and i would rather lick a public toilet sit than never ever never ever meet or c see avril in real life i louv her so much sssssuuuuuuuuuupppppeerrrrrrrr luv her i would die 4 her
Girlygirlsam 4 years ago
wow! thanks!!! i only saw avril once in real life.. lol
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
RLY COOL u saw her me i nvr saw her i wish i will sumday =( & no prob
Girlygirlsam 4 years ago
Wow, excellent cover. The guitar was spot on, and the supporting vocals made it sound very professional. Good stuff!
90sjesus 4 years ago
thank you! :)
thecommonfactor 4 years ago
hey hey,..... let me be the first one to write a comment!!! Its wonderful working together with you.. Lov3 it =)
wynstan 4 years ago
i love it too! when yo upost yours up, make the guitar louder. it's not as loud as i thought it was.
thecommonfactor 4 years ago