Entertaining but a little odd that there were guns stashed everywhere, unless that was part of the watch. Also the non-gun portions could have been better.
If y'all were going for campy, congrats, sort of. You almost succeeded, only because it's tough getting plastic guns to sink.well...and the grenade stops too suddenly, & grenade pins can't be pulled with your teeth. If you ever try that with a real one, the grenade will always win - kiss your teeth bye-bye. The video was full of moments...you know the type I'm talkin' 'bout, right? The kind you look at it and just cringe and say DOH!.
SUCH a bad video... grenades don't make giant fiery explosions, the launch shrapnel... they bounce, they don't just land straight up and sit perfectly still. the effects here are SO bad, and I can't even follow the alleged "plot"
@versusINK How can you say grenades don't land like that and make big explosions after just seeing exactly that happen :P Alot of people don't like the grenade landing, I thought it'd be funny if it didn't bounce but just landed up. Some people don't like it when you mess with what they know should happen :( this greatly saddens me I shall make normal and boring videos from now on.
I think this one is a lot better than Silent Justice. I love action scenes so I'm a little bias, but I do have to admit the effects weren't great and they could have shown a larger emphasis on the watch. This is not my favorite however, I love Look up!
this one was rubbish to. had some gd bit but mostly bad however this one is better then the other 1. 2b honest i would i could of done better. should of done a video
@vinnythespy Yeah me too, cause its a crime to learn to do stuff from that guy. Its not like he made a site teaching people to do this stuff. Get off your high horse and enjoy the movie the guys made
oe of my good youtube buddys made a video called "check-mate" its about these guys playimg chess, they end up getting in a stalemate, so to decide the winner they have an epic lightsaber dual and gun fight, it reminded me of this, yall should go check it out
there were some little things that were obviously super-low budget, but other than that this movie holds together better than most of the videos on this show. it actually has a story, and it's kinda funny, and the development of the action was not bad,,
This one seemed like it took a lot more time and work to make. I loved the underwater scene and the beginning of the pharmacy scene (the angle from the store security camera was unique).
But there were a few plot points that didn't make sense. Like why did he kill a man? That kind of took away from the premise of a silly fight over a sandwich. Why did he just admit to eating the sandwich at the end? A little anti-climatic. And most of all, why were they eating that nasty-looking cereal?
That was epic! Good job indy mogul! I also like how commenters below me try to call you out for where you learned the teleporting effect. from a tutorial site! Hahaha hilarious. how dare you guys learn stuff from there! But yes after that video I am definately subscribing it was awesome/funny and faaark me that pool part! WOW! You guys went above and beyond for this one. Will there be a bfx to do with some of the shots in this or effects? Underwater cam perhaps? Thanks Indy!
It was a lot more interesting than the other one. Bonus for not including a stupid WTF-moment dance at the end. Nice effects with the time bubble and all, but the guns, bullet trails, grenade effects and fire effectsl looked fake.
I love how there just happen to be fully loaded and often, automatic, guns EVERYWHERE in this world of theirs for absolutely no reason. next to a pool, on the shelpf at the pharmacy, etc. riddiculous!
I feel like this was a good concept, but it went on a little long. It was nothing but shooting at each other for 3 minutes. It doesn't matter how much cool stuff and how many special effects you have, if there isn't much of a story there, I don't really wanna watch it. I mean, it was still cool, just kinda long for all that happened...
@CapnTac Video Copilot already made this tutorial, in fact these guys just pratically copied Andrew Kramer's distortion compisition and used it as their own.
Very awesome. It's more of just a teleporting watch than reality altering. Maybe it could've sent them in to different dimensions or something like that. Still, very awesome.
It didn't really gel together as a movie, it was more like they were just saying 'oh look at all these cool effects we know how to do!' 'Oh look how many locations we were able to film in.' I'm all for action and special effects but it would have been nice if it flowed better.
some of this is awesome, but the gun effects are awful.
This is an announcement to all Mogulers: Don't use toy machine guns they look rubbish, and flash effects look crap. Buy deactivated a bolt action 22 rifle or make one. They look cool and don't need gun flashes.
coulda used some better camera angles, although some of them were good. oh and some better audio/sound effects. other that that, i'd say it was pretty good
How did you not get introuble for having guns in the store lol
TechnicolorTrifecta 6 months ago
Funny how hes watch suddenly dissapear and how they manage to travel through time and space without it.
AwesomeIsJensen 8 months ago
47 people wanted that sandwich
CrissAngelFan211 9 months ago
3:34 For a moment, i thought it was moot in bottom right corner
MrAnon86 10 months ago
if they can reality warp then why doesn't 1 of them teleport the other into the sun ....................
MrAmazingScott 1 year ago
@MrAmazingScott they couldnt control the warp because the watch was broken
Mkdproductions101 9 months ago
47 ppl sandwiches were eaten
NPKDP 1 year ago
that would be so cool if they actually had machine guns at a cosmetics store! thumbs up if you agree!
Cowboyboy12 1 year ago
1:53 oops hahahahaaaaaa
hamstrojones 1 year ago
VIDEO COPILOT
shadowmaster995 1 year ago
@shadowmaster995 Has a tutorial for the teleporting effect... well done.
asskicker49 1 year ago
yup!
shadowmaster995 1 year ago
@agrotikokomma Right here ;)
asskicker49 1 year ago
He wasn't wearing the watch at the end...
Cheyennell 1 year ago
This was a contest entry
CommanderOfluffy 1 year ago
Ha wen the British throws the grenade it LANds straight up!great video though
austin8424 1 year ago
awesome
MrTheRealBigBang 1 year ago 3
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Writing: Good***
Music: Great****
Acting: Good enough**
Effects: Good ***
The camera was a little bad it was always moving but it was good
They cant aim like 300 bullets and they only shot a saleskeeper(or whatever its called)
TheTutorRodrigo 1 year ago
epic
MrYu654321 1 year ago 2
42 ppl missed the like button
NPKDP 1 year ago 4
i liked it
popwarabc123 1 year ago 2
Really good! simple plot, wrapped it up at the end. and good work with effects for a home video
aceuvspades 1 year ago
I HAVE THAT MP5 SD!!
halowarrior1000 1 year ago
Uma Thurman male version?
XyVex13 1 year ago
awesome!
ManGrayWolf 1 year ago
it wasnt too bad but you need better graphics or a real house to blow up
xHacMan 1 year ago
I need one of those sandwiches if it starts fights like that.
Dreekmoney 1 year ago
why are there guns lying around all the place?
98vans 1 year ago
Why wasnt he wearing the watch at the end?
OrangeMonkeyProD 1 year ago
This was GREAT!!!
Leprechaun003onXBL 1 year ago
Where is this, i want to go if there are just weapons lieing around :P
DeadNetworks 1 year ago
Entertaining but a little odd that there were guns stashed everywhere, unless that was part of the watch. Also the non-gun portions could have been better.
shycuddlemonkey 1 year ago
If y'all were going for campy, congrats, sort of. You almost succeeded, only because it's tough getting plastic guns to sink.well...and the grenade stops too suddenly, & grenade pins can't be pulled with your teeth. If you ever try that with a real one, the grenade will always win - kiss your teeth bye-bye. The video was full of moments...you know the type I'm talkin' 'bout, right? The kind you look at it and just cringe and say DOH!.
Keep playing, boys. Looks like you're having fun.
Peace
VideoGearHead 1 year ago
Some Aussie's!
AlienSphinkter 1 year ago
This looks like an ad for Video Copilot
gavers23 1 year ago
lmao in real life the other guy would of kicked bobs ass
McClover 1 year ago
SUCH a bad video... grenades don't make giant fiery explosions, the launch shrapnel... they bounce, they don't just land straight up and sit perfectly still. the effects here are SO bad, and I can't even follow the alleged "plot"
versusINK 1 year ago
@versusINK How can you say grenades don't land like that and make big explosions after just seeing exactly that happen :P Alot of people don't like the grenade landing, I thought it'd be funny if it didn't bounce but just landed up. Some people don't like it when you mess with what they know should happen :( this greatly saddens me I shall make normal and boring videos from now on.
asskicker49 1 year ago
this is kinda gay
sk8boardn101 1 year ago
how do you make the water camera effect?
Diabandana 1 year ago
@Diabandana Well what you do is jump in the water with a camera! There you go a real life effect!! I think i should be hired by BFX
AlienSphinkter 1 year ago
iths amazing
MrNikolis 1 year ago
i hear Gorillaz!
TzumB 1 year ago
I think this one is a lot better than Silent Justice. I love action scenes so I'm a little bias, but I do have to admit the effects weren't great and they could have shown a larger emphasis on the watch. This is not my favorite however, I love Look up!
p40pilotJT 1 year ago
this one was rubbish to. had some gd bit but mostly bad however this one is better then the other 1. 2b honest i would i could of done better. should of done a video
masterbboy 1 year ago
@masterbboy Actions speak louder then words. Enter the next one. :)
asskicker49 1 year ago
LOL AUSTRALIA FTW!!!!
123BoringPerson 1 year ago 2
pro vid :P
CryMorePpl 1 year ago
1:55 BOOM HEAD SHOT
ArrowSmith95 1 year ago
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My fav parts is the total rip off from Andrew cramers. Video copilot vortex
vinnythespy 1 year ago
@vinnythespy Yeah me too, cause its a crime to learn to do stuff from that guy. Its not like he made a site teaching people to do this stuff. Get off your high horse and enjoy the movie the guys made
fordy1patrol 1 year ago
@fordy1patrol
I was merely enjoying the use of said tutorial. Its not like we havent all tired it at home so F*** off. "douche cracker"
vinnythespy 1 year ago
@vinnythespy What now you don't like me using the reply function on youtube!? Geeeez you don't like much do you. Ass Burger
fordy1patrol 1 year ago
@fordy1patrol
and i verily enjoyed the show
vinnythespy 1 year ago
at 1:13 i wouldv'e headshot that guy...
MetalHero1996 1 year ago
oe of my good youtube buddys made a video called "check-mate" its about these guys playimg chess, they end up getting in a stalemate, so to decide the winner they have an epic lightsaber dual and gun fight, it reminded me of this, yall should go check it out
csswafford 1 year ago
this one was by far funnier than the other one. i'm actually gonna go vote for this one.
guitargrrl100 1 year ago 20
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@guitargrrl100 Thank you! Tell your friends ;)
asskicker49 1 year ago
this one wins for the action but the other one is funier
subzeroLeyend 1 year ago
the grinade explosion is bigger than the rocket launcher explosion --_-- tht makes......A TON OF SENSE (NOT)
GoombaGuy814 1 year ago
:48 Buttcrack
slidingd00rs 1 year ago
@slidingd00rs thanks for pointing that out
csswafford 1 year ago
@csswafford You're very welcome
slidingd00rs 1 year ago
These guys are awesome! That video totatlly caught me off guard
fordy1patrol 1 year ago
that mustve been a n awesome sandwich
thecurssiproject 1 year ago 52
would be better, if this AK would be 1:1 scale
Yfr28 1 year ago
So where did the dead guy behind the register go? He wasn't in the security camera shot where you could see behind the counter.
Shinigaara85 1 year ago
@Shinigaara85 different counter, the clerk got shot where the pills our, his blood hit a door. No door by that counter.
fordy1patrol 1 year ago
What Programs do you use to make the Special effects like:blood,explosions, and bullets...
Slipknot417992666 1 year ago
Damn over a friggin' sandwich, shit remind me to not steal my friends sandwich...lol!! Awesome vid, peace!!!
cwazmann1 1 year ago
there were some little things that were obviously super-low budget, but other than that this movie holds together better than most of the videos on this show. it actually has a story, and it's kinda funny, and the development of the action was not bad,,
kameshita 1 year ago
underwater cam, how? otherwise wicked
MCCruelICWS 1 year ago
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somebody watched too much Videocopilot...
henkvandervelden 1 year ago
This one seemed like it took a lot more time and work to make. I loved the underwater scene and the beginning of the pharmacy scene (the angle from the store security camera was unique).
But there were a few plot points that didn't make sense. Like why did he kill a man? That kind of took away from the premise of a silly fight over a sandwich. Why did he just admit to eating the sandwich at the end? A little anti-climatic. And most of all, why were they eating that nasty-looking cereal?
stegolemur 1 year ago
@stegolemur he shot him in accident. it's supposed to be funny cuz it's like a little "whoops" over something serious.
kameshita 1 year ago
liked this one better xD
because its a fight to the death over a sandwich xD
jack130788 1 year ago
That was epic! Good job indy mogul! I also like how commenters below me try to call you out for where you learned the teleporting effect. from a tutorial site! Hahaha hilarious. how dare you guys learn stuff from there! But yes after that video I am definately subscribing it was awesome/funny and faaark me that pool part! WOW! You guys went above and beyond for this one. Will there be a bfx to do with some of the shots in this or effects? Underwater cam perhaps? Thanks Indy!
ApocalypseZom 1 year ago 3
WOW! really cool video
hunt3rvall0t 1 year ago 2
That must have been a sticky bomb....lol.... nice flick.
RDJim 1 year ago
lol
machinegunmana 1 year ago
This one was better than the other one. This one put a little more effort and you could take it a little more seriously.
StudioFantasma 1 year ago
i like it becuase i live in aus
maidenmasscare 1 year ago
would have been cool if at the end you took a bunch of water with you when teleporting from the pool
Jirue7609 1 year ago
@Jirue7609 it did foo didnt you see the water splash?
ZayLong 1 year ago
@ZayLong yes i saw that, but it really wasn't that much water at all, and it didn't look like they were wet or anything.
should have been like, a whole bucket of water all over the floor, not a cheap water splash special effect :P
Jirue7609 1 year ago
WTF?!?!? thats my schools pool!!!!!!!
kochen0 1 year ago
It was a lot more interesting than the other one. Bonus for not including a stupid WTF-moment dance at the end. Nice effects with the time bubble and all, but the guns, bullet trails, grenade effects and fire effectsl looked fake.
MOTat18 1 year ago
I love how there just happen to be fully loaded and often, automatic, guns EVERYWHERE in this world of theirs for absolutely no reason. next to a pool, on the shelpf at the pharmacy, etc. riddiculous!
timsbro2000 1 year ago
lots and lots of jump cuts, thumbs down
nprules 1 year ago
your aiming is miserable :D
felli989898765443 1 year ago
LOVED the FX!
Foothillfilms 1 year ago
i thought silent justice sucked.. it wasnt funny.. this one kinda was
Bluefoxx3 1 year ago
I only like this one better because it had better camera work and the acting was a bit better- but they barley made it clear about the watch
squiddie96 1 year ago
very cool but it looks like you lose the watch there at the end!!!
Srdragonis1977 1 year ago
I feel like this was a good concept, but it went on a little long. It was nothing but shooting at each other for 3 minutes. It doesn't matter how much cool stuff and how many special effects you have, if there isn't much of a story there, I don't really wanna watch it. I mean, it was still cool, just kinda long for all that happened...
orangeguitargirl 1 year ago
The exact same thing happens when my brother steals my sandwiches.
HastalaVeesta 1 year ago
never, NEVER f**k with another guy's sandwich.
programaster 1 year ago
could of improved it abit tbh.
JustCause2Ukz 1 year ago
The music could have been better but i liked it :D
DcKotlFk 1 year ago
Ummm... That was not good.
RunandGunPictures 1 year ago
i love how the grenade stood up once he threw it
obamaslilbro 1 year ago
1:57 ahahahaha!
NearTheUniverse 1 year ago
meh.
SpecialFxKid 1 year ago
You should make a tutorial for the warp effects. I really liked this one!
CapnTac 1 year ago
@CapnTac Video Copilot already made this tutorial, in fact these guys just pratically copied Andrew Kramer's distortion compisition and used it as their own.
XunosProductions 1 year ago
Very awesome. It's more of just a teleporting watch than reality altering. Maybe it could've sent them in to different dimensions or something like that. Still, very awesome.
quietkid13 1 year ago
Lol, product placement for All-Bran?
TheIncognitoGiraffe 1 year ago
That was indeed a somewhat awesome production! Cool fx, funny/random "story" full of action-packed fight scenes!
seanotube85 1 year ago
those guys have bad aim
you1234ism 1 year ago
at the swimming pool scene when he was swimming am i the only who noticed it but his watch was gone
S1cK3nD1 1 year ago
awesome!
hdvoyagerfan 1 year ago 2
stupid
Gekkology 1 year ago
at 2:52 = Nirvana - Come As You Are musicvideo likeness :P
MontellPictures 1 year ago
the fire effect ingolfing the hose looked way better then the grenade
roy20050 1 year ago
that grenadeyou could have just tosed it into frame and it would have looked better idk what you did there but it loked horrid
roy20050 1 year ago
Way better
SoSSmooth 1 year ago
MP5 cures stretch marks
about50crakheds 1 year ago
This one was the best.
TheSolitaryPoet 1 year ago
how did this one lose
IdiotBusiness 1 year ago
yeah all shops sell silenced mp5's
PandemicAnimations 1 year ago 2
mp5? yeah isle 5 next to the lotion...
(or what ever kind of gun it was)
Leadman1989 1 year ago
Good after effects :)
Warhawk666 1 year ago
It didn't really gel together as a movie, it was more like they were just saying 'oh look at all these cool effects we know how to do!' 'Oh look how many locations we were able to film in.' I'm all for action and special effects but it would have been nice if it flowed better.
CaptainWales0 1 year ago
how did you do the underwater shots with the camera?
Reephamike 1 year ago
video copilot teatch how to do the effect at 1:50
lousisx 1 year ago
video copilot teatch haw to do the effect at 1:50
lousisx 1 year ago
Clear winner, but then again there was no contest
Bl1ndGu4rd14n18 1 year ago
I would give this a 8/10 not bad better than the other one
ZOMLUVER 1 year ago 2
some of this is awesome, but the gun effects are awful.
This is an announcement to all Mogulers: Don't use toy machine guns they look rubbish, and flash effects look crap. Buy deactivated a bolt action 22 rifle or make one. They look cool and don't need gun flashes.
300warrior300 1 year ago
cool /watch?v=kZI12Kliyfc
TheParts5films 1 year ago
Needed more Video Copilot effects. /sarcasm
kilvertm 1 year ago
decent, good plot for a short and fairly good acting.
cool gun fights + headshot effect = pretty darn okay
NewfiePaintballer 1 year ago
that for a fucking sandwich
GTA4NIKOFREAK77 1 year ago
haha cool /watch?v=kZI12Kliyfc
TheParts5films 1 year ago
i don't know about you, but i always have a hefty supply of grenades in my kitchen drawers
SandDeath24 1 year ago
@SandDeath24 yep just in case my chicken wont roast fast enough
oddstuff123 1 year ago
i like how there are just guns randomly placed throughout the whole video. like in the convient store, infront of the strech mark removal. lol
hotpot8oproductions 1 year ago
@hotpot8oproductions ya ik its weird
oddstuff123 1 year ago
awesome!
beastintwin2 1 year ago
How are they teleporting if he broke the watch?
nelsonofward 1 year ago
@nelsonofward cause he broke it so they r teleporting unconrolably
oddstuff123 1 year ago
@oddstuff123 Ohhh. That makes sense.
nelsonofward 1 year ago
:-)
Skydive4ever 1 year ago
hmmm... their shoes magically disappear when going into the water
deadlyhandy 1 year ago
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the special effects are awsome
Rushmoree 1 year ago 2
kinda funny how fake that all looks :)
speedomike747 1 year ago
MAKE THE ENGINEERS GUNSLINGER OFF OF TF2!
GameFreaks24 1 year ago
He loses his watch after the convenience store and yet they still travel to two other places without it...
prolifikshadow 1 year ago
were did th watch go at the end
bennybob299 1 year ago
So where's the woman that obviously made the sandwich in the first place?
Auesis 1 year ago
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two words video copilot
Vendoman500 1 year ago 5
this was pretty good, and lol, it was because a sandwich
EvilDead992 1 year ago
coulda used some better camera angles, although some of them were good. oh and some better audio/sound effects. other that that, i'd say it was pretty good
iamthefroman 1 year ago
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Using Andrew Kramer's stuff huh... should've mentioned him and his website... :)
Archangel3D 1 year ago 3
this one was alot better than the other on. I liked the FX they used
superoreo2005 1 year ago
wow, they love sandwiches.... eh don't blame em :D
MrBadPun 1 year ago
Not bad, fx could have used a bit more tweaking but clearly superior to the other one.
zsandmann 1 year ago 2
kinda messed up with the grenade. But everything else was awesome.
thechico1979 1 year ago
@thechico1979 Yeah, the grenade needed a little work - thanks for the good feedback!
indymogul 1 year ago
i wonder what type of sandwich he ate
caypfa 1 year ago 3
@caypfa Whatever it was, be glad you didn't take it
indymogul 1 year ago
Pretty kool, quite exciting.
Argumentitive 1 year ago 2
pretty good eh?
TwoThumbsStudios 1 year ago
@TwoThumbsStudios ACTION PACKED!
indymogul 1 year ago
Mick Jagger!
TonyFontana101 1 year ago
i liked it better than the other one
samuraisam100 1 year ago 6
@samuraisam100 Anything in specific make this one more entertaining to you?
indymogul 1 year ago
@indymogul It didnt suck as bad...
XDproductionsXD 1 year ago
@indymogul little unrealistic granade?
341wwe 1 year ago
@indymogul this is quite comedic at the begenning, it's like a casual excuse untill he broke out the pistol :)
9000pivot 1 year ago
@indymogul The editing I think was a lot better for this one than the other.
racenuke 1 year ago
@indymogul stupid. but this time kinda makes sense
TheRuneCreep 1 year ago
kinda cheap
thewarri 1 year ago
Nicely done.
BxAxDoyster2 1 year ago
nice
DaSUHAib 1 year ago