It was great .... but you have just some major things to improve..... when you are doing the saauters and gleasars..... please point your toes because it looks like it is flexed ..... and just make sure your arms are just a little stronger ........ but other then that is was amazing .... i loved the ponche to the arabseque and then you went onto rise.... that was beuatiful.. thank you for sharing this
(continued)- show a lot of grace in this piece, which I think can only improve by practice and increasing flexibitly and technique as someone else mentioned. The dance itself was very pretty, costuming as well, and I think with some more dedication and rehearsing, you have a strong dance future! Thanks for sharing this!
I really give you kudos for this. You have a lot of potential, have beautiful long, lines, and obviously a sincere passion for dance. How long have you been en pointe/dancing? This looks like a beginners piece, and that's totally fine, but stick to the things you are confident and truly capable of. For example, the fouettes were a bit much, I think you should have held off on those until you could really nail them. Also, I'd like to see more traveling, you seemed to be rather "stationary." You
all i have to say is make your movements flow together a little more, never stop moving in between movements, but other than that it was beautiful! :)
you butvchered it. you need to work on your flexibility. you look like your nauseous or like, trying to get to the next part in the dance instead of enjoying each movement.
lol I just watched sylvie guillem before this, so at first i was horrified at this dancer. but then I came back to reality, and remembered that this girl's only human. good job.
really beautiful but try to point your feet more when you bring them up to passe. good job on everything else otherwise, and your turns wer aboslutely ah-mazing!
really watch your feet in between your steps.. its hard but your feet should be pointed. and also watch your arms on your chaines. keep them together and lift them up.... it'll help push your shoulders down which is always a good thing
You were great but need to point and stretch youre knees also extend youre arms more and do it with elegance youre face shows that you were thinking the steps and to concentrated on the next step, remember dance from youre heart and express yourself, youre an incredible dancer.
Really pretty and a lovaly dance but keep that performance on your running and steps! Also keep your arms and legs extended! They are so long and show them off using every inch! Amazing, keep going!
Some nice qualities. If you are young - you have very nice feet and proportions. If you are young and serious be sure to put in the hours, number of classes to build strength, stamina and technique to your artistry and fluidity.
this is pretty. but in your ponche [aha idk how to spell] you should lean a little bit more over your standing leg. you are hitching away and hyper exstending a little and pulling away. i had that problem and when i leand more foward, it got alot better.
Very pretty, good technique, though your arms could be stronger. Your feet are beautiful, but your arms look like they're just kind of hanging out... Amazing footwork though.
your way to talented for this choreography. i dance and i think it is very graceful.
thebeautifulmaddie 4 months ago
You need to lower your shoulders. :)
lionsrawrr95 6 months ago
I could do that....
cops055 6 months ago
she is a stick!
dance3445 7 months ago
you are pretty :)
etoiledelkirov 9 months ago
WHOA SHES TALL
MrAlicejessica 9 months ago
It was great .... but you have just some major things to improve..... when you are doing the saauters and gleasars..... please point your toes because it looks like it is flexed ..... and just make sure your arms are just a little stronger ........ but other then that is was amazing .... i loved the ponche to the arabseque and then you went onto rise.... that was beuatiful.. thank you for sharing this
MsDancingBeauty 11 months ago
(continued)- show a lot of grace in this piece, which I think can only improve by practice and increasing flexibitly and technique as someone else mentioned. The dance itself was very pretty, costuming as well, and I think with some more dedication and rehearsing, you have a strong dance future! Thanks for sharing this!
trappedinside1 11 months ago
I really give you kudos for this. You have a lot of potential, have beautiful long, lines, and obviously a sincere passion for dance. How long have you been en pointe/dancing? This looks like a beginners piece, and that's totally fine, but stick to the things you are confident and truly capable of. For example, the fouettes were a bit much, I think you should have held off on those until you could really nail them. Also, I'd like to see more traveling, you seemed to be rather "stationary." You
trappedinside1 11 months ago
Great job! I'm currently struggling to choreograph a pointe solo for a talent show coming up, and you've just inspired me!
veggietanglenose 1 year ago
she is a beautiful dancer, but her arms and legs are just too long for it to look organised xx
balletbabe2020 1 year ago
all i have to say is make your movements flow together a little more, never stop moving in between movements, but other than that it was beautiful! :)
dancelovr16 1 year ago
beautiful very nice
twilightgodess13 1 year ago
You might do better with run-run tour jete, instead of the typical step-chasse-tour jete.
Balletdancer980 1 year ago
no life in this dancing its so dull
DrifTear 1 year ago
Very nice :) How long had you been en pointe at this performance? 2009 was my second year and I did the song "You'll Be In My Heart" from Tarzan :)
IxPretendxtoxBexYou 1 year ago
you butvchered it. you need to work on your flexibility. you look like your nauseous or like, trying to get to the next part in the dance instead of enjoying each movement.
12songbird34 2 years ago
I loved the end! Good job.
balletfreak160 2 years ago
lol I just watched sylvie guillem before this, so at first i was horrified at this dancer. but then I came back to reality, and remembered that this girl's only human. good job.
KCHweed 2 years ago 10
love sylvie guillem!!!!!(:
cutielolxx 2 years ago
@cutielolxx , ? what does that have to do with anything?
Balletdancer980 1 year ago
really beautiful but try to point your feet more when you bring them up to passe. good job on everything else otherwise, and your turns wer aboslutely ah-mazing!
luckycharms137 2 years ago
wow thats really beautiful
but i think u need to pointe your feet wen ther in air
and you should try to blend all the movements together to make it a pretty dance
dancer5616 2 years ago 10
Beautiful! watch your arms, but otherwise, wonerfully done!
annagroban 2 years ago 2
really watch your feet in between your steps.. its hard but your feet should be pointed. and also watch your arms on your chaines. keep them together and lift them up.... it'll help push your shoulders down which is always a good thing
ImYours5909 2 years ago
beautiful beautiful BEAUTIFUL choreography
only some advice feel the music more, dont be so tense, work on the arms!!
otherwise good :)
itsybitsyspider01 3 years ago
You were great but need to point and stretch youre knees also extend youre arms more and do it with elegance youre face shows that you were thinking the steps and to concentrated on the next step, remember dance from youre heart and express yourself, youre an incredible dancer.
Chiki523 3 years ago 2
really good
lauranicole94 3 years ago
Really pretty and a lovaly dance but keep that performance on your running and steps! Also keep your arms and legs extended! They are so long and show them off using every inch! Amazing, keep going!
DevonGirlie 3 years ago 2
Some nice qualities. If you are young - you have very nice feet and proportions. If you are young and serious be sure to put in the hours, number of classes to build strength, stamina and technique to your artistry and fluidity.
Good luck -
kathimcrum 3 years ago
i loved it but watch out on your arms
hvondy 3 years ago
i love this!
americangirlballet 3 years ago
You're really good, the only thing I could see is that your arabesque/penchee seems to be off balance.
Errfrf 3 years ago
that was areally beautiful dance.I'm starting pointe classes in the fall do u have any tips for me to work on over the summer
Jennifer7272 3 years ago
ya you should REALLY streaghthen your legs you'll need it!!!! believe me
jazdancer23 3 years ago
You moves are really smooth and thats good, your fouettes could have been better, but theyre better then mine so they are great haha
alyxia123 4 years ago
God i wish i was this beautiful at pointe :D It was wonderful!
Never doubt yourself will you!
Gorgeous Song as well :d
Ellie0210 4 years ago
this is pretty. but in your ponche [aha idk how to spell] you should lean a little bit more over your standing leg. you are hitching away and hyper exstending a little and pulling away. i had that problem and when i leand more foward, it got alot better.
bebethomthom 4 years ago
you were wonderful! good job and keep dancing!!!
foxhollowchick 4 years ago
Like my hoodie says if ballet was easy it would be football! and it is very pretty
PCDfan009 4 years ago
yeah, you could have stronger stage presense, but the choreography is wonderful
decemberdollxo 4 years ago
i loved your first arabesque, i really have 2 stretch my leg 2 get it that high, but you make it look effortless!!
kansybelle 4 years ago
Very pretty, good technique, though your arms could be stronger. Your feet are beautiful, but your arms look like they're just kind of hanging out... Amazing footwork though.
Cathaign 5 years ago
very pretty. . . i love the song!
Colleen1012 5 years ago