* Alternate story * - The Little Mermaid - by MissesAriane

[RaneDuPre]

I really really like your concept about getting your voice at eighteen and using it to lure in your true love. That's really a fantastic idea. Good choice in background music too, Claude Debussy is awesome. Although I must say it starts to make a lot less sense during the last minute. Still really creative idea.

[MissesAriane]

@RaneDuPre Thanks ^^ and I know about the last minutes :)

[alpehoj]

good story, its cool that you are more true to the real story.

[charguigou]

That's an interesting story. That's so sad by moment, but happy ending :)

[MissesAriane]

@charguigou Thanks ^^