HOLY FLIIPIN CHEESESTICKS!!! AAAAA THS IS SOOO INTENSE!! thnk god i was on a vactation n cudnt read these wen u jst posted em..or else i wud hav died waitin for wat happens next!! seriosuly the suspense wud have killed me there n then!!! :O
nick cant die! ellie cant get hurt! the cops should like drop in from the roof! too much of a cliffy!! posttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
OH MY GOODNESS this is terrible, he BETTER not touch ellie first of all, he better stop beating on Nick cause Nick is amazing and needs to save the day, and that gun better not have any bullets in it!! ah this is so cliffy but thats what makes it so good!! Post again soon:]
holy crap. DONT rape herrrrrrrrrrrrr
tam709 2 years ago
HOLY FLIIPIN CHEESESTICKS!!! AAAAA THS IS SOOO INTENSE!! thnk god i was on a vactation n cudnt read these wen u jst posted em..or else i wud hav died waitin for wat happens next!! seriosuly the suspense wud have killed me there n then!!! :O
RQOCJD 2 years ago
don't move nick!!!!
coeyjbfan93 2 years ago
Honestly, do you enjoy watching people suffer?
you post cliffys wayyyy to much. im liike stresssing out right now
why choclate chip buddy,why?
i still love you but :]
LittleMizzGawjuz 2 years ago
Honestly? Yes, yes I do. Very much.
Well, very much with cliffys. Not like... actually suffering....
hehe.
It's fun. I've got the powaaaa. hehe!
x]
I loveee youu tooo! I miss youu! "/
JonasFanFic16 2 years ago
omj nicckkkkkk!=[
bratierocker71 2 years ago
damn those cops.
jesus dont you have guns? fbi agents? army? tanks? ninjas? aliens? pssshh
oneloveejbs 2 years ago 3
seriously!
ITS FREAKIN NICK JONAS IN DANGER!!!
watchedallofitfade 2 years ago
NO FREAKIN KIDDN...MAFIA!
oneloveejbs 2 years ago
Don't. Move. A. Muscle. Stay perfectly still. Everything will be okay. Sort of. Okay. So I lied, but anything to get them through this, right?
EricaLynnKistner 2 years ago
i love this story!!! and I love this song! it's like one of my favs!
fanastywriter 2 years ago
OMG OMG
plz dont kill him!!!!
xoxoJBluverxoxox 2 years ago
om gosh i freaking loved it
i was just like wow and then i was like
HOLY FRICKEN SHIZNITTERS and then i said
TOUCH NICK AGAIN AND I SWEAR I WILL GO INTO THIS COMPUTER AND SNAP YOUR NECK BIATCH.
-nay nay-
dontmakefunofartards 2 years ago
:O :O :O :O
AwiqhtMate 2 years ago
nick cant die! ellie cant get hurt! the cops should like drop in from the roof! too much of a cliffy!! posttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
xoDayDreamerxox3 2 years ago
NOO!
Nick cant die!
star96skater 2 years ago
omg nick CANNOT die
great chapter !!!
JoeBroluver430 2 years ago
woot woot!
ewizzle06 2 years ago
Im in WAY 2 much shock n suspense 4 words...
Fuzzy2230 2 years ago
NOOOOO POST MORE
Sara123K 2 years ago
OH MY GOODNESS this is terrible, he BETTER not touch ellie first of all, he better stop beating on Nick cause Nick is amazing and needs to save the day, and that gun better not have any bullets in it!! ah this is so cliffy but thats what makes it so good!! Post again soon:]
kellylynn11xo 2 years ago
oh no!! if Nick dies, and if Mark does what I think he's gonna do to Ellie I'll cry.
for some reason when Ellie said that there were cops outside but they couldn't do anything it reminded me of the movie 'Inside Man'
JonasBroluver156 2 years ago
YES! Exactly!! I love that movie, yo! AH!
JonasFanFic16 2 years ago
ps.
I teared up in this chapter. I dunno why. I just did. ha.
JonasFanFic16 2 years ago
i love the movie too!!
i teared up a little when I was reading it.
JonasBroluver156 2 years ago