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From: xUnderneathThisSmile
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  • what is the song for the intro ? loved it :)

  • i hope they do help her and i'm SO glad that you're gonna continue writing. (:

  • YAY! Glad you're continuing! Write for you and no one else!

    I remember the Kimberlee thing from the trailer and it still makes me laugh. I can't wait till the drama and everything else comes up. I really wanna know what happened to her.

  • i'm glad your going to stick with it! writing is something beautiful and no matter if the world sees its or not its a part of you that doesnt need explanation. keep writing girl! never give up!

  • So amazing and I'm glad u didn't stop it:) yay soccershannon for knocking sense in u lol

  • That's more like it !

    You rock(:

  • im really glad you're keeping this.

    and i wish more writers had the same attitude as you.

    all they care about is comments.

    your writing is amazing! :)

  • amazing!! weather it was short or not (: happy ur continuing this story! i luvv it! can't wait 4 the next one!

  • I'm glad u r contuining this (: & the boys r so sweet to let a complete stranger inside their house (: & yeah. u should write for u, I write a series too & i get like two or three comments on each ep, but I don't care I love writing it's wat i love to do & if u love to write then u should write for u not for the comments.

  • Poor kid not remembering anything,she is lucky that they are gentlemen but I guess deep down a memory she doesnt remember led her there

  • that was short. thanks for writing more of these... cant wait for the next one

  • wow i don't know what i would do if a random stranger turned up at my house not knowing who they are. i'd probably freak haha

    i like that how they act in this story is probably how they act in real life :)

  • yay :) i'm so glad you're going to continuing writing this!! that's great<33

    i loved this chapter. the boys are so sweet to let a complete stranger into their house offering to help her. and then naming her. haha.

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